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that bonus scene with Venessa or Mother. LMAO couldn't hold myself. It reminds me so much of motherless casting couch. I can feel the dev minds like "fuck we need something at the end to keep our money rolling. Bring the Trophy Milf immediately. Put some wet dream scenes so that horny fuckers can through money at us lol"
Yeah, that was random. I enjoy the game mostly overall, but there are two things that kind of bug me every time. The first is the sex dialog. It gets old to have characters saying, "that's so hot" or "your mouth feels so good on my cock" over and over and over. Like, OK, I get it: whoever-you're-screwing is hot and wet and feels good and whatever else. Dialogue like that — even if it's cheesy — is OK, I think; repeating the same lines 50 times during a scene isn't great.

The second is the ending of each chapter. It's a problem similar to the above: too much repetition. After you have a scene and then "TO BE CONTINUED", I normally assume the chapter's over. But no, this will happen another 8 times before finally the chapter is finished. Extra scenes or not, I don't need to be reminded that many times that there is more to come. I'd rather see all of those scenes in a row and then have "TO BE CONTINUED" at the very end.

Even better, have some of those (like the Mom/Vanessa scene or the Mandy–Akana lock-down scene) be optionally played. So have the final scenes that are actually a part of the main storyline, then "TO BE CONTINUED". And when at the end Mandy says her bit about the end of the chapter, have her also say that there are scenes you've unlocked that you can view from your phone or whatever.
 

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Yeah, that was random. I enjoy the game mostly overall, but there are two things that kind of bug me every time. The first is the sex dialog. It gets old to have characters saying, "that's so hot" or "your mouth feels so good on my cock" over and over and over. Like, OK, I get it: whoever-you're-screwing is hot and wet and feels good and whatever else. Dialogue like that — even if it's cheesy — is OK, I think; repeating the same lines 50 times during a scene isn't great.

The second is the ending of each chapter. It's a problem similar to the above: too much repetition. After you have a scene and then "TO BE CONTINUED", I normally assume the chapter's over. But no, this will happen another 8 times before finally the chapter is finished. Extra scenes or not, I don't need to be reminded that many times that there is more to come. I'd rather see all of those scenes in a row and then have "TO BE CONTINUED" at the very end.

Even better, have some of those (like the Mom/Vanessa scene or the Mandy–Akana lock-down scene) be optionally played. So have the final scenes that are actually a part of the main storyline, then "TO BE CONTINUED". And when at the end Mandy says her bit about the end of the chapter, have her also say that there are scenes you've unlocked that you can view from your phone or whatever.
I completely agree with you on all 3 points, the animations are boring too, it's all just the tip moving in and out, it might as well have no animations at all to speed up releases.

I've also decided to only play updates when a chapter is completely done from now on, as I don't like having to stop in the middle of a chapter, so I'll be back when chapter 4 has been completed in ~1.5 years.
 
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I completely agree with you on all 3 points, the animations are boring too, it's all just the tip moving in and out, it might as well have no animations at all to speed up releases.
Yeah, that's another point that applies to most VNs in general: when a character says, "faster, harder" and then the animation is either exactly the same speed or only moderately faster. It's like, "Have you seen actual porn?" Harder means there should be visibly harder pounding (ass cheeks jiggling more, etc.); faster by 1 frame per second isn't really faster. Oh, and also taking faster to mean just the same animation ×2 or something. It really looks just like you've put a video on fast forward.

I understand that doing things differently is more work and more difficult to get right, but it's definitely noticeable.
 
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This game blows!!! The Ellie fight is a joke!! The screen shows a color I hit the right choice and its always wrong. You have to beat her to continue the story. There are so many better games out there then this crap!! Deleted!!
 

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This game blows!!! The Ellie fight is a joke!! The screen shows a color I hit the right choice and its always wrong. You have to beat her to continue the story. There are so many better games out there then this crap!! Deleted!!
Just click it multiple times, or just scroll back to the start of her run so you know what to click beforehand, it doesn't matter if you click the right option before the color flash, like ELVO says, we cheat.
 

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This game blows!!! The Ellie fight is a joke!! The screen shows a color I hit the right choice and its always wrong. You have to beat her to continue the story. There are so many better games out there then this crap!! Deleted!!
Just click it multiple times, or just scroll back to the start of her run so you know what to click beforehand, it doesn't matter if you click the right option before the color flash, like ELVO says, we cheat.
Of course I don't know when you're clicking/tapping, but keep this in mind:
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Additionally, even if you do all of the moves correctly in that fight, you will actually always lose the first fight with her; it's in the game code. But if you do everything correctly and are still told you lost, the MC and ELVO should discuss it by saying the MC totally should've won. It's part of the story progression.
 
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Yeah, that's another point that applies to most VNs in general: when a character says, "faster, harder" and then the animation is either exactly the same speed or only moderately faster. It's like, "Have you seen actual porn?" Harder means there should be visibly harder pounding (ass cheeks jiggling more, etc.); faster by 1 frame per second isn't really faster. Oh, and also taking faster to mean just the same animation ×2 or something. It really looks just like you've put a video on fast forward.

I understand that doing things differently is more work and more difficult to get right, but it's definitely noticeable.
And who has sex by only putting slightly more than the tip inside, what's the point of the MC's dick if he only uses the tip, the only time it gets all in is if the girl rides him, they only suck the tip during BJs too, the so called animations in this game are barely moving renders, that's why I said they might as well not be made, as it just means the dev has to spend more time on the updates without any kind of positive outcome.

Even when the text says the MC shoved his whole dick inside (which should be happening the whole time during sex), it only shows him putting half of it in, after which it returns to tip fucking and sucking until the end, I hope this isn't what the dev thinks sex is like, that would just be sad.

Due to all the things you and I said, I've started skipping through the sex scenes, they became too repetitive, not to mention that there was a sex scene way too often in chapter 3, which didn't help either.

The number 2 most annoying thing in chapter 3 was the constant switching of perspectives.

The reveal that Ellie was the Technodancer was really not as surprising, it was very obvious since the first time the Technodancer was shown, all because of the ass and breast sizes.

Because no stats went up after making up with Ellie, I felt something was wrong when Ellie kissed the MC on the roof, I knew she was going to push him off the building, it was so obvious she was going to do that, the dev really needs to up their game of surprising us.

How MC is going to survive it is probably by somehow accidentally using his Time Fragment power, that's the only way his phone will survive, which is important to the game.

What's the point of introducing a new main character right at the end of a chapter, with the Dev's release schedule people will forget she was even introduced once the next update rolls around.

Why is "Adventure" or "Surprise" a super important plot choice which will determine whether you get the true ending or not, the other 2 of those choices were obvious which would be better, I just went with "Surprise", as that looked like the better choice for some reason, no way to know for sure because we have no WT for chapter 3.

I'm slightly disappointed the MC didn't just pick up his phone when he was falling, that would've been funny.
 

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Everyone complaining about the speed of the scene or "just the tip" and no one is mentioning the thigh job by the sister where her lower body just hovered above the bed and swung back and forth like a gate.
 
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Everyone complaining about the speed of the scene or "just the tip" and no one is mentioning the thigh job by the sister where her lower body just hovered above the bed and swung back and forth like a gate.
That is true, and I think it has to do with rendering software being buggy or at least difficult to work with at times. Still, it should also definitely be corrected if possible. My own comment was about a problem with VNs in general, not specifically about this one. The speed of scenes or "harder" being "the same amount" is a general issue; I see games doing no change or the video-fast-forward equivalent all the time.
 

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Everyone complaining about the speed of the scene or "just the tip" and no one is mentioning the thigh job by the sister where her lower body just hovered above the bed and swung back and forth like a gate.
It seems that the character renders and the background renders are made separately in some scenes, instead of as one, which makes it so they don't fit together perfectly in those scenes.
 
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cxx

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where the heck are those contrabands that suspicious cop wants? says i got 1 but where are rest? nothing i could found on arena/locker nor any of those other 3 locations on map.
 

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where the heck are those contrabands that suspicious cop wants? says i got 1 but where are rest? nothing i could found on arena/locker nor any of those other 3 locations on map.
There is one in the ring, one in the tunnel and one under the sink in the locker room. I don't remember where the other one is.
 

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where the heck are those contrabands that suspicious cop wants? says i got 1 but where are rest? nothing i could found on arena/locker nor any of those other 3 locations on map.
1 in the locker room, have to change view. its under the bench where the sinks are, have to advance the story to get ellie to move. 1 is in the tunnel where the cop is, to the far left of her. cant remember where the other was, so i hope its the one you have
 

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There is one in the ring, one in the tunnel and one under the sink in the locker room. I don't remember where the other one is.
1 in the locker room, have to change view. its under the bench where the sinks are, have to advance the story to get ellie to move. 1 is in the tunnel where the cop is, to the far left of her. cant remember where the other was, so i hope its the one you have
ring had pic, locker under sink had pic, mc's bedroom after selena dildoed herself had pic and final in tunnel (barely in bottom of screen). would be nice if dev would tell pics not something else like contrabands.

anyways thx for help.
 
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