- Sep 30, 2017
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Wow....I really enjoyed this last update...
I must say I was initially annoyed by the changes in the store and characters of Gaz and Nika (I can only assumed that Patrons complained!?)
If I remember correctly originally, Gaz was plainly bad at the beginning, but with the re-write they tried to make her sympathetic sooner when they attacked Heather. (I remember feeling intense anger towards her, but then growing to like her later on)
I also enjoyed the Nika and Dad tease along with Nika and mom rivalry, I would have like to "win" Nika back from dad by making her jealous of mom or something like that. I was disappointed that they changed that.
Having said that, in the bigger scheme of things, it felt like such minor points, the my annoyance quickly disappeared and was replaced by firstly by an continuation of a very sexy story and secondly the story seriously ramped up at the end...The ending was the death of me. I was genuinely shocked and angry at the evil B...
I can not wait for Chapter 2!!
I must say I was initially annoyed by the changes in the store and characters of Gaz and Nika (I can only assumed that Patrons complained!?)
If I remember correctly originally, Gaz was plainly bad at the beginning, but with the re-write they tried to make her sympathetic sooner when they attacked Heather. (I remember feeling intense anger towards her, but then growing to like her later on)
I also enjoyed the Nika and Dad tease along with Nika and mom rivalry, I would have like to "win" Nika back from dad by making her jealous of mom or something like that. I was disappointed that they changed that.
Having said that, in the bigger scheme of things, it felt like such minor points, the my annoyance quickly disappeared and was replaced by firstly by an continuation of a very sexy story and secondly the story seriously ramped up at the end...The ending was the death of me. I was genuinely shocked and angry at the evil B...
I can not wait for Chapter 2!!
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