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- Feb 16, 2019
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-It's very unclear what exactly happened to the MC in the beginning. I assume he and his parents were in a car accident, and he was the only survivor. Which would imply he then moved to live with his aunt or a friend of one of his parents, or was placed in some random fosterhome. But, it isn't specified anywhere, so it's all just an assumption. Might as well have been his father and his stepmother who died in the car crash, making him move in with his real mother and his step sisters. Relations and past are really vague.
-Animations aren't skippable. I know developers spend a lot of time and effort making these, and they do look pretty nice, but for me personally, they last too long. Especially when nothing else is going on, like, some conversation. It varies for everyone, I generally get the gist of what's happening within 3 seconds, so would like to have the option to click it away instead of getting stuck on an animation.
-It's translated, but I wouldn't call it Engrish. There's just occasionally a wrong word (like, his tattoo is on his arm, not on his hand), but what I saw more often were typos of the light-dyslexic variety: letters being switched within words or on a rare occasion with the next word. A proofreader should help sort those out. A spell checker might help too, but I think a proofreader would be better, and circumvent the problems that come with spelling checkers. Without those typos, the writing is actually quite decent.
-I'm never a big fan of having both dom and sub paths without anything inbetween (not to mention, I'm actually not into BDSM at all), since these extremities make no sense without a middleground, but we'll see where things go.
-When you release the next chapter/version/whateveryoucallit, write a short synopsis of this version, and use that as game description. So, something like:
That still doesn't say much about the story, but it already helps people more to figure out whether it might interest them, or help remind them when you release v0.2 and they almost forgot what v0.1 was about.
-Animations aren't skippable. I know developers spend a lot of time and effort making these, and they do look pretty nice, but for me personally, they last too long. Especially when nothing else is going on, like, some conversation. It varies for everyone, I generally get the gist of what's happening within 3 seconds, so would like to have the option to click it away instead of getting stuck on an animation.
-It's translated, but I wouldn't call it Engrish. There's just occasionally a wrong word (like, his tattoo is on his arm, not on his hand), but what I saw more often were typos of the light-dyslexic variety: letters being switched within words or on a rare occasion with the next word. A proofreader should help sort those out. A spell checker might help too, but I think a proofreader would be better, and circumvent the problems that come with spelling checkers. Without those typos, the writing is actually quite decent.
-I'm never a big fan of having both dom and sub paths without anything inbetween (not to mention, I'm actually not into BDSM at all), since these extremities make no sense without a middleground, but we'll see where things go.
-When you release the next chapter/version/whateveryoucallit, write a short synopsis of this version, and use that as game description. So, something like:
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One wonders how you guys manage to watch porn at all. Guess it's only solo porn and dildos for ya'll.
Simple answer to that, when watching porn, most people don't see themselves as the main character of it. It's a different story in a visual novel, kinda like a RPG game, where you play as a character and don't care what other people are doing that don't change a thing to you.
- May 22, 2020
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Off to a solid start. The ladies look great. Thick redhead with glasses... Nice! The animations and renders are solid. I would recommend the ability to skip through the animations faster if possible though.
The story is not the cookie cutter guy moving in with his estranged landlady er uh mother. That's a plus.
I suppose I was also less enthused with the appearance of the main character initially, but it grew on me.
As for possible additions of tags, I would probably look at anal and foot fetish. Honestly, it would be great if some content could be avoided if added though. I know my suggestions aren't for everybody. In the same way; I have no interest in futa, trans, pegging, watersports, bestiality, and other fetishes.
I do like the way WVM allows you to make one of the main LIs trans or a non-trans female. Even without that, the ability to skip activities that aren't for me is always great in these games.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next episode.
The story is not the cookie cutter guy moving in with his estranged landlady er uh mother. That's a plus.
I suppose I was also less enthused with the appearance of the main character initially, but it grew on me.
As for possible additions of tags, I would probably look at anal and foot fetish. Honestly, it would be great if some content could be avoided if added though. I know my suggestions aren't for everybody. In the same way; I have no interest in futa, trans, pegging, watersports, bestiality, and other fetishes.
I do like the way WVM allows you to make one of the main LIs trans or a non-trans female. Even without that, the ability to skip activities that aren't for me is always great in these games.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next episode.
- Sep 21, 2019
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Watch porn and "play KINETIC NOVEL" or read Comics is similar.
But play a game means you (player) choose according to your sexual preferences. And I will never choose gay/futa/swinging/ntr/voyeurism with male NPC. All "other dick content" is useless for me.
But male gay/bisexual or female straight like of dicks. It all comes down to the DEV choosing the audience of game.
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- May 24, 2018
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Contrary to some of the other comments, I actually really like the unique MC model. A bit girly yes, but soooo much better than the free DAZ, 45-year-old, middle-age crisis, receded hairline, glossy-eyed 3d model looking ass. And of course the 3-meter-tall, Mr. Globe, 20-inch cock MC. A very welcome change to have a less masculine MC for once.
But please add a name change option.
But please add a name change option.
- Nov 17, 2018
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I think this was quite good for a first release. Recently there are appearing quite promising adult VNs. So I guess the minimum level of quality on these VNs is going up (which I'm glad it does). The "sad thing" about this is that these new VNs that are appearing have so little content that we can't judge how they progress (maybe we will see a new BAD in the near future). I will keep tabs on this projects and see how it goes. Nice work dev.
- May 9, 2018
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Because indulging in "Spicy" content makes you an edgelord, right?
Also, can we banish to redundant porn/avn comparisons, it simply doesn't work.
- Feb 29, 2020
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I'm guessing that your question is not about the male in the pic hitting on a potential LI, therefore raising the "Oh my gerd, it's NTR!!" red flag, but rather your wish that the MC looked more like the guy in the screenie?Umm who is this? And why isn't he the mc
But to answer your question, he's the MC's best friend.
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Some advice for the Dev's,
If you are going to be open ended and not specific about which fetishes you are going to include;
Firstly, as a rule I recommend that you be upfront and honest with potential $upporters as to what-all you will be allowing.
Secondly, I strongly recommend that you let everyone know if said fetishes will 'Avoidable' or 'Skippable' (which are not the same thing to many people) Avoidable = Doesn't happen, Skippable = Happens you just don't see it (aka the 'Alt' Key in Python)
Lastly, take the suggestions/recommendations and demands from everyone (myself included) with a pinch of salt. Nothing is worse than a Dev trying to incorporate things they dislike to please 'the money'.
And just to be completely transparent about my own comments/stance. Since you have already stated that you will have Futa/Trans, I will not be $upporting this game at all. Though I might still play it if the content is avoidable.
That said, even if it turns out to be 'not for me' I wish you all the best of luck.
Graphics are pretty awesome too!
If you are going to be open ended and not specific about which fetishes you are going to include;
Firstly, as a rule I recommend that you be upfront and honest with potential $upporters as to what-all you will be allowing.
Secondly, I strongly recommend that you let everyone know if said fetishes will 'Avoidable' or 'Skippable' (which are not the same thing to many people) Avoidable = Doesn't happen, Skippable = Happens you just don't see it (aka the 'Alt' Key in Python)
Lastly, take the suggestions/recommendations and demands from everyone (myself included) with a pinch of salt. Nothing is worse than a Dev trying to incorporate things they dislike to please 'the money'.
And just to be completely transparent about my own comments/stance. Since you have already stated that you will have Futa/Trans, I will not be $upporting this game at all. Though I might still play it if the content is avoidable.
That said, even if it turns out to be 'not for me' I wish you all the best of luck.
Graphics are pretty awesome too!
I really like the looks of this game. I like the story so far and really like the renders and great animations. Also the fact there are sex sounds a huge plus for me, and I also like the planned future tags I really hope there will also be an anal tag as well considering the future tags but I would like it even without the future tags. Great start I cant wait to see more when I can I will support this one.
- Sep 10, 2019
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As soon as he said yes to Julia without knowing what he was saying yes to
... I was sold.
Looks pretty decent at this stage.. smooth.. and awesome animations. Can't wait for more!
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Looks pretty decent at this stage.. smooth.. and awesome animations. Can't wait for more!
- May 16, 2020
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I just want to play a game with Ara-ara females. Why is it so hard to find MILFs who will femdom you with love and care? No NTR or some weird stuff like that...
- Mar 19, 2019
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Like others have said, Patreon is a difficult place to get by with incest. SubscribeStar and BuyMeACoffee are good platforms for it so far, or you can be clever with it and have the player choose their relationship while outwardly recommending they don't choose incestual relationships. A game that does this really well is Light of my Life and they haven't run into any problems from Patreon so far. I see some people complaining about how the MC looks, but I really like the model the way it is. A lot of MCs end up looking either really generic or outright hideous, but I think he looks great. And if you're going for the impregnation/pregnancy fetish I recommend at least doing an epilogue that shows the MC spending some time with his offspring or at least the mothers holding their kid. Knowing the girl is pregnant is one thing, but seeing the results of your efforts takes it to another level. A couple games that do this pretty well are Summertime Saga and Corruption of Kingdoms. Corruption of Kingdoms even has events where the MC bonds with his kids when they are a little older, which I love.