Ren'Py Completed TP: The Class Next Door [v0.12.1] [9thCrux]

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Hope that something changes.

HUGE SPOILER: very unlikeky.

 

[BigDaddyDom]

Overall impression: Sorry for the time spent ...

Cons:
There is a lot of useless in dialogues. There is so much water that only the "Skip" button saved from boredom.
The eternal imposition of the daughter as a sexual partner caused a negative reaction.
Dialogues with native blood are only in: "Daddy!" - "Sweetheart ..." "Daddy!" - "Sweetheart ..." And that's all. the impression was that his child was a dim-witted nymphomaniac who wanted to sleep with her father. What was the cost of her hugs with dad on the couch.
Well, I think, since the plot and the dialogues are bullshit, then, probably, there are a lot of explicit scenes and an emphasis is placed on them. But no. None.

Of the pros:
There are some interesting and thoughtful characters. But for some reason, attention is not focused on them.

Hope that something changes.

Agree that a lot of those scenes serve no purpose, I actually wish they would call each other Daddy and Sweetheart DURING the sexual scenes, but they don't. Suprised still not lewd content during the sleeping parts

 

[cxx]

Agree that a lot of those scenes serve no purpose, I actually wish they would call each other Daddy and Sweetheart DURING the sexual scenes, but they don't. Suprised still not lewd content during the sleeping parts

gotta wait 5 or so updates until daddy gets to taste daughter.

 

[WaifuCollector]

Android ? Where are you ?

 

[J.R.]

Android ? Where are you ?

The walkthrough/cheat mod has an Android version

 

[Kalendon]

Unfortunately I think the Main downloads are POOCHED... I can't get past the end of Episode 13... so on a whim I clicked on the Walkthrough Cheatmod button then downloaded and tried the slightly compressed version with the Cheatmod integrated into it... and guess what I managed to get through the whole game and saw EVERYTHING...

Now I do have to mention that you CAN'T see everything by following just the the Tiffany Path... to overcome that you just have to make a save where you choose between the Tiffany or Mrs Smith paths (1 scene so far) then there are a few scenes on the Joan path, so again make a save where you choose between the Tiffany or Joan paths

 

[mcnero]

Can you fuck the daughter yet? Just doing my regular 6 month check in.

It's nothing only one time sitting on daddy's nap with a sexy bunny roleplay costume and say dad
like hee only can do petting or other things with her... I like the game but... all is waiting for boom boom with daddy's bunny =)

 

[DevilsPlay]

only tj and bjs.

How on earth do you get the TJs and BJs from Tiffany? I have finished the game but never came across this

 

[cxx]

How on earth do you get the TJs and BJs from Tiffany? I have finished the game but never came across this

lol

be on her path only.

like bible says thou shall not have other lovers than your daughter.

 

[BigDaddyDom]

How on earth do you get the TJs and BJs from Tiffany? I have finished the game but never came across this

you have to turn down all the other girls, especially Joan early on. Also helps to use the cheat mod to ensure you have enough points

 

[lionarslan]

Just finished playing.
What can I say? "The Deluca family" is slow burn, this is something else. Slow burn is when theres's a story or conversation plan which you follow to achieve something with someone. It's not like that in this game. I don't know what's going on with dev's writing skills, but this game is not slow burn, it's not even heated.
I don't know whether dev is reading this topic or not but that's my honest opinion. It's something like graphomania, dialogs looks this way:

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And yes, there are only dialogs and meaningless choices (well, some of them are not, can you guess which?). Renders are wonderful although and it's really feast for my eyes, except it's just a fashion show without any sign of VN.
I can join with people that already said about adressing. I spoke only a couple of times with Americans but every time they introduce themselves with their full name (well, there was few times I "spoke" with Americans via e-mail but that was another matter). And AFAIK adressing by Mr/Ms/Mrs last name is purely official and uses only in official situations (first meeting, serviceman-customer, speaking with officials etc), for obvious reasons people feel uncomfortable when speking this way. For example, when teacher speaks with his pupil's parents, he use Mr/Mrs in school but their first names when in parents' house. 'Cause it's not official meeting, simple as that. But in this game it's politeness, officiality and small talk all the way, nothing else. Even when some characters speak from their heart it doesn't feel this way. Because politeness and officiality, it kills any alive dialog. I sincerely wish dev will start to write actual dialogs, like people speak IRL. Maybe then the game would be interesting to play. Right now it's just a whole lot of boring small talk.

More than half a year later.
I suppose, dev isn't here and he won't read my words but I'll still say it.
Dev seriously improved his writing abillities, there's "normal" text, sometimes it's even "painted" with ajectives. Almost every girl in that game has a past, usually troublesome past, her own backstory and it made her unique. It's sad but dev won't make the next step - unique speech pattern. There's still an ocean of greetings and small talk, the only difference is now it's not only that. All the girls and MC are still speaking in "official" language, strictly by protocol, nothing except politeness and "courtship protocol". It's still really boring, to say it gently.
Hurray, now there are sex scenes in the game. To this moment I replayed only first week so any "action" I see is only in dreams but there's Marjory and what she's showing is not a dream. So now dev can say that his game is slow burn. At least now we can hope that we'll see some sex in near future. But small talk and politeness in unhealthy quantities made me almast fall asleep while playing this. And I can say it's the first VN (not only porn VN but any VN) I played that forced me to fight with a desire to fall asleep.
Another thing I want to add, I don't remember if last time I played there was an narrator entity called Self. It's like the only real (judging by language it use) character, it speaks like real people speaks and I only wish all the text in the game was written in such language.

 

[Crusader of Romance]

So when I unpacked this game Windows immediately deleted it saying it was a virus (without asking me). It's super rare that it does that.

 

[cxx]

So when I unpacked this game Windows immediately deleted it saying it was a virus (without asking me). It's super rare that it does that.

whole folder or just -32.exe?

if latter then false positive since malware scanners don't like renpy and even less like latest version of renpy.

 

[Crusader of Romance]

whole folder or just -32.exe?

if latter then false positive since malware scanners don't like renpy and even less like latest version of renpy.

Only the -32.exe. I don't think this have happened before and I have downloaded tons of games from here.

 

[cxx]

Only the -32.exe. I don't think this have happened before and I have downloaded tons of games from here.

cuz not all games use updated renpy, i have seen it reported ~20 times.

 

[Deleted member 3168918]

Normally this is where I'd complain about Mash. I had hoped to have all my pupils to myself and dislike the idea of someone else taking them.
But honestly it didn't bother me, I didn't care for Mash and this scene was short and pointless. I'm not sure why that event existed at all. Maybe it's a sign of things to come. Hopefully not.

My real problem with this game was the last if condition for who wrote the presentation. Somehow, me being nice to Marj before this means I don't talk with Amy about her problems. That just seems irresponsible and out of character. I wouldn't have even known if I wasn't peeking at the script.
I had to peek as it was very unclear which choices were nice and which weren't and if you get even one wrong you won't see any of a character's scenes after that.
I suspect most people would play through and not even realize that getting Marj points will force you away from Amy.

 

[cxx]

I suspect most people would play through and not even realize that getting Marj points will force you away from Amy.

most only focuses on tiff.

 

[Lolph Dundlen]

Normally this is where I'd complain about Mash. I had hoped to have all my pupils to myself and dislike the idea of someone else taking them.
But honestly it didn't bother me, I didn't care for Mash and this scene was short and pointless. I'm not sure why that event existed at all. Maybe it's a sign of things to come. Hopefully not.

My real problem with this game was the last if condition for who wrote the presentation. Somehow, me being nice to Marj before this means I don't talk with Amy about her problems. That just seems irresponsible and out of character. I wouldn't have even known if I wasn't peeking at the script.
I had to peek as it was very unclear which choices were nice and which weren't and if you get even one wrong you won't see any of a character's scenes after that.
I suspect most people would play through and not even realize that getting Marj points will force you away from Amy.

To be fair, this isn't a well written VN, so nothing surprises me. The art is nice, but writing is clearly not the author's talent. Confused character arcs and plot development is the least of it. This is supposedly a slow burn VN about MC's developing relationship with his daughter, but it really isn't. If you play from the start, and actually read the story between the two of them, there is about one conversation between them about their relationship and then they begin a relationship as if it was the most normal thing in the world. Sure, it took a load of updates to get here, but nothing really happened in them and very little time has passed.

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

As long as I can turn down Masha in the future,and coach doesn't fuck with anyone else,whatever.

But if this is a preview of things to come ima be pissed.

 

[Shyguy1369]

New to this VN... seeing so far that there is no harem route, but is there sharing? Maybe a throuple or something? If not, guess I hope the story is great, because focusing on one girl is going to be a LONG arduous journey.