A lot of ellipsis missing their 3rd dot.
A lot of text missing their ending punctuation.
She says second floor, image shows at least 4th
A lot of the time the word hell is used, but since this is greek mythology shouldn't it be hades or any of the realms of the underworld?
Typos (left of colon is in game, right of colon is fixes)
Saying no at first choice.
inconvinience : inconvenience
want t be : to
Don't you think that enough for one night? : think that's enough (or) that is
Yes play with nipples : with my nipples
bound to one once again : (unsure if this was meant)
time you wake up : woke
Could she have been confused : (seems like it would be more likely he is confused)
She was vanished from heaven : banished
(some black screens)
love some men : (weird sentence)
she make sure : made
that guard the gates : guarded
I'll dissapear : disappear
now dssapear : disappear
her worse memory : worst
what I think it's right : I think is right
you'd see the last : you'd seen the
cannot dissapoint : disappoint
blood taste : tastes
be powerful but not immortal : but we are not
are shoot first : are the shoot first
I'll probably be dead : I'd probably