The translation looks good, and all the fixes seem to have addressed the bugs. I saw a typo or two, but nothing that irked me enough to write down. There was a weird interaction with the old man that wasn't letting me turn in the 2 eels. For some reason it was requiring me to have 3, but after the interaction, he only took two of them.
Other than that, the game/translation are perfectly fine. If I would recommend anything, it would be to specify that the old lady at the store wants 2 mackerels. Not sure if it was lost in translation or the fact that "mackerel" is also a plural form of the word, but it was slightly confusing that she wanted 2.