just found out about this VN and i must say i love the story sofar. Only thing i dislike is some models. The dad seems to be highly trained but still looks like a stick next to his way smaller daughter who's muscular like an American bully. Even when she trains this much she still would look a lot....softer. unless it's hardcore body building and she's not. I think the body of Katy (i think her name is) in intoxicating flavors, would be a lot more realistic without going to far of from the body you intended for the daughter. Sister looks half the time like some angry SJW. I know she's intended active military but still the haircut is hideous
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