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VN Ren'Py Tune in to the Show [Ep. 6] [RobertDeadth]

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ClockworkGnome

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Clearly one of the nicest vaults then, seeing their usual experiments and results.
The crazy/evil doesn't have to start right away. Sometimes they give you a bit of leeway to think the whole place is really nice before the trap springs shut.


Or maybe it isn't about the MC at all, maybe they try how much it takes for our asexual eunuch to reach his limit and wreak havoc.
That's why he's the one who keeps finding the crazy rooms.
 

Dick_Bachman

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I can understand being descriptive but I can't get used to the constant updates on everyone's bodily functions. Diana sighs and smiles, Richard sheepishly grins, Maya purrs like a kitten, MC lets out a huge fart, walks behind, seems distressed, gasps in response, shakes like a leaf, bounces their buttocks. None of those are actually in the novel as far as I know but then I'm only a little ways into it. Since every other line is a descriptor (only a mild exaggeration) there's a good chance at least one makes the cut. I'm looking at the sentence "Maya says with a determined expression and I find myself smiling." I have to close the window now. You're putting 2 of them in one sentence. It's overwhelming.
 
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RobertDeadth

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I can understand being descriptive but I can't get used to the constant updates on everyone's bodily functions. Diana sighs and smiles, Richard sheepishly grins, Maya purrs like a kitten, MC lets out a huge fart, walks behind, seems distressed, gasps in response, shakes like a leaf, bounces their buttocks. None of those are actually in the novel as far as I know but then I'm only a little ways into it. Since every other line is a descriptor (only a mild exaggeration) there's a good chance at least one makes the cut. I'm looking at the sentence "Maya says with a determined expression and I find myself smiling." I have to close the window now. You're putting 2 of them in one sentence. It's overwhelming.
Yes, I fully agree, this has been pointed out and it improves greatly from Episode 2 onwards. I've been considering editing the first episode to cut down on the needless descriptions too, perhaps it would be worth it to get better first impressions from new players.
 
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evetaku

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i really like this game because you can put any different girls come from especially from asian korean and japanese, not really much game can give an asian character, so its really good. its not really problem actually but yes the first impresion from every single character in starter the teks and the face is so different

and need more interaction with player its mean with multiple choise when in dialog or plot twist or MC need decision when doing something or MC need more action or not when in some situation or anything, for example when MC and Maya in the libary and Maya has falling from the stair, maybe you can improve with interaction with player (1) hold Maya foot, (2) hold the stair for Maya (3) doing nothing or anything, i think you know what i mean. so the game is not flat.

im usually check some game is worth it to play and read in every single dialog or not with SKIP Unseen Text, because i got very bad experience when im read every single text and i got no one interaction with player. its like wasting my time, i called it SKIP GAME.

so the Graphic is good, story telling is good, music bg is oke, animation its optional when sex scene or anything for aditional for more better (if you can make it),

and where you from actually ? how did you know this plot and story ?

becuase i think familiar with asian dating show from Japan or Korea or China with samiliar plot but in different story and without "sex" , in 1 month with 6 man vs 5 women find the love or in different show find love or money, maybe you find the show is Heart Signal from korean and China (reality show only find for love or couple in 1 month), Love Catcher from korean and China (reality show find love or money or diamon ring in 1 month, if love card x love card you get your partner as "love" and if love card x money card so where's choise money card they will be get money and love card didnt get anything, and money card x money card you didnt get anything), Somebody S1 S2 from korean (plot in all dancer and find in dancer partner in last show and love in 1 month), Terrace house from Japanese (reality show find an love but its so diffierent because the participant can request to out from the show and the show i think running for 3 month for 1 season, im forget it for this one because the show has ben stopped when the participant going to suicide when show still running)
 
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RobertDeadth

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and where you from actually ? how did you know this plot and story ?

becuase i think familiar with asian dating show from Japan or Korea or China with samiliar plot but in different story and without "sex" , in 1 month with 6 man vs 5 women find the love or in different show find love or money, maybe you find the show is Heart Signal from korean and China (reality show only find for love or couple in 1 month), Love Catcher from korean and China (reality show find love or money or diamon ring in 1 month, if love card x love card you get your partner as "love" and if love card x money card so where's choise money card they will be get money and love card didnt get anything, and money card x money card you didnt get anything), Somebody S1 S2 from korean (plot in all dancer and find in dancer partner in last show and love in 1 month), Terrace house from Japanese (reality show find an love but its so diffierent because the participant can request to out from the show and the show i think running for 3 month for 1 season, im forget it for this one because the show has ben stopped when the participant going to suicide when show still running)
Yes, you are actually correct, the initial idea for this game was definitely inspired by some of these shows. I thought the setting of a dating TV show would work well for an adult game, and I was pretty surprised that it hasn't really been done before (or at least I don't think it has).
 

evetaku

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Yes, you are actually correct, the initial idea for this game was definitely inspired by some of these shows. I thought the setting of a dating TV show would work well for an adult game, and I was pretty surprised that it hasn't really been done before (or at least I don't think it has).
yes, i think its really working well for an adult game especially you give asian character in there Da-eun from korean which is mostly korean girls have small chest and you give it the big one and Ayaka and Maya is oke. if you keep in focus in no NTR but game still running in Harem route too, you must be know how to execute its, open relationship in MC and the girls so they can doing everything without anything jealousy, its like real life in dating show and because its only have 2 man. i thinks more realistic for the running the game. For the ending must be smooth and clear because maybe player will be so hard must be choise only one partner in ending.

remember to give more interaction with players to make the game more lively, so we as players also feel in the game, dont only give so much dialog, and 25 y.o for the MC figure looks old, MC more look older than me in 29 y.o, MC look like 45 year old. 25 y.o with status retire and have stable income i think must be have more cooller style.

its my first time, im giving more opinion for game and review, because its interesting, for dating show running in the game
 
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Bucketbot89

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It's damn shame Kath isn't getting her own route in this game. Easily the most beautiful character in the game, imo.
 
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RobertDeadth

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Some new info - Episode 3 Part 1 is close to being ready! I think that the most likely release date is sometime next weekend :)
It will feature the whole 3rd day of the show, over 450 renders, 2 sex scenes, as well as improvements to the writing in the first episode of the game :D

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FzKingLoverS

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can't download it from Workupload cuz it said, my ip got blacklisted...
can i get the Mega link instead? thank u :v

(link download for Walktrough Mod)
 

Son of Durin

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can't download it from Workupload cuz it said, my ip got blacklisted...
can i get the Mega link instead? thank u :v

(link download for Walktrough Mod)
Use something like the free Proton VPN. I've D/Ld from the site many times without a problem. Sometimes you'll run into places that block VPNs, or an individual VPN IP will get restricted for a time, but then you can just rotate to another. The free service at Proton gets you between 40 and 50 different IP choices, or thereabouts - never counted them. They've been adding free connections as well recently. The places where you get the most trouble are those that get their revenue solely from ads - because VPNs obscure user data, they don't make as much money when people use one (or so I've read).
 

FzKingLoverS

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Use something like the free Proton VPN. I've D/Ld from the site many times without a problem. Sometimes you'll run into places that block VPNs, or an individual VPN IP will get restricted for a time, but then you can just rotate to another. The free service at Proton gets you between 40 and 50 different IP choices, or thereabouts - never counted them. They've been adding free connections as well recently. The places where you get the most trouble are those that get their revenue solely from ads - because VPNs obscure user data, they don't make as much money when people use one (or so I've read).
It's okay! i found it in another site :v
btw i already use vpn to access this website tho! XD
lol my country (especially my internet provider) block all porn sites :v
 

RobertDeadth

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Episode 3 Part 1 has been released to $10+ patrons on

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Here's the changelog:
  • 462 renders
  • 13900 words
  • added 2 new music tracks
  • new main menu background video
  • vastly improved writing in Episode 1 (not a reason for a new playthrough, but should be a huge improvement for new players)
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Here's the release schedule:
  • Today - $10+ patrons
  • October 8th - $5+ patrons
  • October 15th - public release
If you would like to play the game early and support the development, please consider pledging! Have fun playing and let me know your thoughts after you're done :D
 

RobertDeadth

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Since the new update features a vastly improved Episode 1, I thought it would be a shame not to upload it here until Episode 3 is out to the public. So here's a link to the new version, featuring all content until Episode 2 Part 2, with the updated main menu, and the new version of Episode 1 (considerable improvements to the writing plus several new renders in the first scene). There's no need for a new playthrough unless you want to remind yourself what the game is about, but new players should have a much better experience :)

EDIT FOR CLARITY - Episode 3 Part 1 is not included here, just a new version of Episode 1 and the new main menu. No changes to Episode 2 Part 1 or Part 2.



 
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