VN Ren'Py Onhold Twisted Memories [v0.8b] [BaiBai]

[Jeycii_]

I really don't see the hooker thing you guys talk about. Is it the open back? To me it gives more of a festival girl vibe.

I thought the same but during the gym uniform poll it was the blue bloomers that won.

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tbf, blue and white are a great combination

 

[xsikal]

I really don't see the hooker thing you guys talk about. Is it the open back? To me it gives more of a festival girl vibe.

It's the pockets combined with the ultra short shorts and socks. Just screams trailer park trashy to me.

It's a bummer, because it's going to win and I don't think it fits the character super well, but thaat's how polls go. It'll still be a super hot scene I'm sure.

Edit to add: I have no issue with the top. It's the shorts that kill me.

 

[Dogorti]

I really don't see the hooker thing you guys talk about. Is it the open back? To me it gives more of a festival girl vibe.

I thought the same but during the gym uniform poll it was the blue bloomers that won.

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It's not hooker as such, but it's bad taste. In my country they would call that kind of outfit "grasa".

 

[Alandir]

I knew a very dumb girl who'd been told by her mom that she'd better put out if she wanted the boys to like her. I'd say that's one of the less unbelievable things in the game.

Its not even that much of a stretch in the context of the game. Julia knows Vic hat a crush on mc since forever. She also likely bought it after meeting mc at the mall, so she knows he's a pervy little gremlin too. Combine the two and you get ...
The question is how vic will react when mc sees her.

 

[Mark17]

Development update – Outfit poll

I've reached the stage again where I can't see the whole map making stuff anymore. I really wanted the last map to be simple and quickly made and I actually did manage to get all the parts that are important done in like two days. The problem is that the part in which the characters will move around in go very high up making it necessary to build quite the scenery around it. By now it turned into the biggest map by far, although the detail-to-size ratio still isn't comparable to the beach map. The lack in detail shouldn't really be noticeable though as you will see most of the map from pretty far away and through depth of field.

All in all I think I should be able to get it done within the next few days and after that I can get to finishing up the script and hopefully start rendering some time soon.

Anyway, as I said in the showcase last week, here is another outfit poll, this time for the outfit Viktoria will wear during v0.9. I actually made quite a few more outfits for her over the past few months but the way the script turned out the outfit needed to be one that she wouldn't normally wear by herself. Should the skirt option be chosen I might need to rewrite a few things as a skirt does present some new opportun
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Which outfit do you guys like the most? I like B better but the one that is winning is C. My problem with C is that it seems very... I can't find the word in English to describe it XD. In any case I think the skirts are better.

A) Because I'm sucker for tight pants, but at same time C) because at same time I'm sucker for tight shorts

But, considering it's Vicky I'm going for A.

 

[JjJ5]

BaiBai_ how

I really don't see the hooker thing you guys talk about. Is it the open back? To me it gives more of a festival girl vibe.

I thought the same but during the gym uniform poll it was the blue bloomers that won.

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how do you make your clothes? they are really good

 

[abyss_kaiser]

Honestly, option C would be even better if it had A's top, or something even more trashy, but beggars can't be choosers.

 

[Ingfire]

Oof. Can we get a proofreading pass soon? The number of weird typos grew exponentially towards the recent content, and idk what the hell "under four eyes" means but that among other odd misspellings got really distracting.

 

[Sossse]

idk what the hell "under four eyes" means

well, in german, there is a saying "unter vier augen" -> under 4 eyes, meaning a meeting/talk where only 2 ppl (2 sets of eyes aka 4 eyes) take part in. guess that what it´s supposed to mean

 

[jajgglkwreagnlkawe]

Wait bai bai is german? Or do any other languages use that saying?

 

[ttm2]

Wait bai bai is german? Or do any other languages use that saying?

Other languages have similar sayings.

 

[Alandir]

Wait bai bai is german? Or do any other languages use that saying?

I'm pretty sure he is. A lot of the awkward sounding sentences in the first versions come from directly translated common German phrases or sayings.

 

[Ingfire]

Cool, well at least that phrase can be explained as a colloquialism, but I'm reaching the part where Stephi first visits MC's house and...dear god. Typo after typo after typo. Every 2 out of 3 dialogue lines there's some sort of misspelling or bad grammar or just...missing words? I tried to get used to it, but when I got whiplash from going between Stephi's quivering "hops" and "heaps", I started to lose track of my sanity. The early chapters up to midway were SO well written, with typos being such a rare case that I was VERY pleasantly surprised, but later chapters...you get my point. I hope 0.9 gets a SOLID proofreading pass and fixes for everything before next release.

 

[Small-pp-22]

Cool, well at least that phrase can be explained as a colloquialism, but I'm reaching the part where Stephi first visits MC's house and...dear god. Typo after typo after typo. Every 2 out of 3 dialogue lines there's some sort of misspelling or bad grammar or just...missing words? I tried to get used to it, but when I got whiplash from going between Stephi's quivering "hops" and "heaps", I started to lose track of my sanity. The early chapters up to midway were SO well written, with typos being such a rare case that I was VERY pleasantly surprised, but later chapters...you get my point. I hope 0.9 gets a SOLID proofreading pass and fixes for everything before next release.

That's because the early chapters to midway have been proofread, if you look at the about section of the main menu you'll see that the game has been proofread up to 0.4, the current version is 0.8, the proofreading could eventually catch up

 

[Ingfire]

I really hope so, and soon. I just realized that the bikini shopping scene and the beach scene have a really stupid but funny coding bug? I'm guessing somehow Bai put in the script that the letters "ben" get replaced with the chosen MC's name...whereever they appear? So that it creates words like "[MC]ch" instead of Bench and "[MC]eath" instead of Beneath...like what the hell LOL

EDIT: I just did a search in the thread and this "ben" replacement shit has been an issue in the script since January 2023...

 

[Small-pp-22]

I really hope so, and soon. I just realized that the bikini shopping scene and the beach scene have a really stupid but funny coding bug? I'm guessing somehow Bai put in the script that the letters "ben" get replaced with the chosen MC's name...whereever they appear? So that it creates words like "[MC]ch" instead of Bench and "[MC]eath" instead of Beneath...like what the hell LOL

That's been pointed out already, should be fixed next version or so, as for the proofreading, you might be better off only playing the proofread chapters if you are so bothered by it

 

[Ingfire]

That's been pointed out already, should be fixed next version or so, as for the proofreading, you might be better off only playing the proofread chapters if you are so bothered by it

Nah, just gonna push through the rest of the content and complain about it until its fixed. That's how things work in the real world. If nobody complained about bugs/typos/issues etc, they'd never be corrected, even if its 15+ months later lol

 

[Small-pp-22]

Nah, just gonna push through the rest of the content and complain about it until its fixed. That's how things work in the real world. If nobody complained about bugs/typos/issues etc, they'd never be corrected, even if its 15+ months later lol

You could also join the discord, there's a spelling section where you can point out mistakes you find

 

[Alandir]

Nah, just gonna push through the rest of the content and complain about it until its fixed. That's how things work in the real world. If nobody complained about bugs/typos/issues etc, they'd never be corrected, even if its 15+ months later lol

The real world works in the way that things get fixed if you report them precisely to the person working on it.
Complaining vaguely about typos existing on a pirate site isn't gonna do shit.
Go to his discord and report in detail the typos you find.

 

[dolfe67]

The real world works in the way that things get fixed if you report them precisely to the person working on it.
Complaining vaguely about typos existing on a pirate site isn't gonna do shit.
Go to his discord and report in detail the typos you find.

Sorry but typos have been reported on discord and not fixed. Need to find another proofreader if the previous one is not available, there are a few candidates for free