Cool, well at least that phrase can be explained as a colloquialism, but I'm reaching the part where Stephi first visits MC's house and...dear god. Typo after typo after typo. Every 2 out of 3 dialogue lines there's some sort of misspelling or bad grammar or just...missing words? I tried to get used to it, but when I got whiplash from going between Stephi's quivering "hops" and "heaps", I started to lose track of my sanity. The early chapters up to midway were SO well written, with typos being such a rare case that I was VERY pleasantly surprised, but later chapters...you get my point. I hope 0.9 gets a SOLID proofreading pass and fixes for everything before next release.
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Small-pp-22
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That's because the early chapters to midway have been proofread, if you look at the about section of the main menu you'll see that the game has been proofread up to 0.4, the current version is 0.8, the proofreading could eventually catch up
I really hope so, and soon. I just realized that the bikini shopping scene and the beach scene have a really stupid but funny coding bug? I'm guessing somehow Bai put in the script that the letters "ben" get replaced with the chosen MC's name...whereever they appear? So that it creates words like "[MC]ch" instead of Bench and "[MC]eath" instead of Beneath...like what the hell LOL
EDIT: I just did a search in the thread and this "ben" replacement shit has been an issue in the script since January 2023...
EDIT: I just did a search in the thread and this "ben" replacement shit has been an issue in the script since January 2023...
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That's been pointed out already, should be fixed next version or so, as for the proofreading, you might be better off only playing the proofread chapters if you are so bothered by it
Nah, just gonna push through the rest of the content and complain about it until its fixed. That's how things work in the real world. If nobody complained about bugs/typos/issues etc, they'd never be corrected, even if its 15+ months later lol
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You could also join the discord, there's a spelling section where you can point out mistakes you find
The real world works in the way that things get fixed if you report them precisely to the person working on it.
Complaining vaguely about typos existing on a pirate site isn't gonna do shit.
Go to his discord and report in detail the typos you find.
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Sorry but typos have been reported on discord and not fixed. Need to find another proofreader if the previous one is not available, there are a few candidates for free
LOL if I did that, I might as well just upload the entire archive.rpa to the discord instead of screenshotting 90% of the dialogue boxes.
Hey, I know a manga with this exact premise. It got pretty dark almost instantly, tho.
Much better to type at people who arent taking you seriously? Are your very helpful complaints going to be a frequent occurrence (as in every update that isn't proof read) now that you've caught up? Or was this a one time thing?
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" Gaki ni Modotte Yarinaoshi. " (according to someone elses post awhile ago)
that a oldie one ... 4 years ago or something even ova's , they made, decent . But i prefer Twisted teacher and the lils more
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seduction route? but i don't see it, Seduction point is 3, and corruption is 0
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The last scene in the gallery is an extra that features Jacky, MC mom. There is no Alyvia Scene yet but if you go the seduction route with Alyvia and don't send the pictures then the situation with her get steamy in the pool when she comes back, and confesses that she didn't go through it.
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I chose with all the girls to follow the path of love (Seduction), I am a person who is quite interested in women, and I have never thought of women only as a sexual tool.