I like the characters...just throwing it out there...How about your next project be "Another Two Weeks"? Use the knowledge you've gained to do it properly. Probably the last thing you want to hear right now, after staring at the same characters for hundreds of hours, but the project was gaining traction. Not even Incstor hit it out of the park right away. Keep your chin up, take a break and regroup! Don't let one failure demotivate you.
3 months ago I knew absolutely nothing about coding, now I'm nearing completion on my own project. I'm no pro, but I've learned the gist of it. Maybe take some time to learn coding before your next project. You've got a bunch of guys that will answer your questions on this forum in the 'programming' thread.
Some people freak out after trying to learn Daz and give up. You've shown your skills with your renders, no different with coding. It just takes time, a lot of patience...and coffee helps!