david123

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"sci-fi"tag, "vaginal sex"tag and probably "oral sex" tag (if one of girls gave blowjob to mc)
i'm still in work and did not finish this update yet :HideThePain:
Oh, and if you add futa/trans demoness you should add "futa/trans" tag.
I mean most of those are not in the game yet (except scifi) - and I dont think F95Zone mods will allow you to tag things that are not in the game - false advertising and stuff.
 

Remo2344

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I like it so far, good use of the Star Trek stuff, is that the USS Protostar or atleast some variation of it? Looking forward to the next update. Do you have a timetable on that?
 

Kaay

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Dec 2, 2019
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what a heart warming Page this is ... positive and so passionate people about the game and about your work that shows that u did great and its huge thing to have all this supporters honestly

i wanna add some of my ideas here but before that i wanna say

STAY YOU STAY TRUE
what i mean by that like someone before already said while listening to feed back and ides dont let it takes full control to the point where u lose ur own vision on your own game and work in the end its your own work and ideas what started all of this

...........

things i think will really make this game go long way all of this is personal opinions so keep that in mind :)

1 : Choices > players like to have a sense of control and choices gives that and also it makes the game more engaging on top of that with u implementing choices in the game it will gives u more freedom on the fetishes you can put in the game example: from one of your answers here u r thinking of adding FUTA this is not everyone cup of tea but with choices u can make that players have the ability to avoid it .
also it gives u the freedom to make paths in the game Example : love path or corruption path and so on ...

2 : Corruption i feel like the game will be great with it and it can lower the chance of making things move faster than it should a lot dont like that like what happened with Aisha for example but with this u can make it move in steady and controllable speed and give the player the feeling of him making all this happen ( satisfaction )
ofc that doesn't mean that all should have it in the end they are sex dolls there should be some of them who still didnt evolve and they want the D :) this will help u with the game not been slow and players lose interest in the end the games in here are mainly for faping XD

3: looks and personalities goes long way no one want to look at the same model or similar in a game the whole time so thin or chubby fun or a bitch and so on will for sure make it really great .

4: incest a caring loving mom never hurts ( Evil smile )

and again all personal opinions and thoughts sharing them with you as someone who loved your work :)
...........

personal thoughts ( feel free to run pass it )
story for me isnt important in porn game but it dont hurt to have it so i feel like instead moving forward now since ur at the start u should work on the story to build a solid foundation to work on before u go deeper in the game
or u can leave it as it is but make like a better explanation on the whole situation when for example they reach the bubble planet Pam start telling the story of how its like this and why and so on .

dont let the feed back over whelm u take what u think will benefits u and again dont lose ur own touch in the end its YOU what made all of this and be proud my friend u made great start and built a game with passionate and caring community and thats all positive things

in the end truly wish u the best and with the way ur going right now its so promising for sure and cant wait to see more of Pam ah i mean the game lol
 

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STAY YOU STAY TRUE
what i mean by that like someone before already said while listening to feed back and ides dont let it takes full control to the point where u lose ur own vision on your own game and work in the end its your own work and ideas what started all of this
I understand what you are talking about and completely agree with you.
 

foreg

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Great start so far. The abuduction scene really got me.
The writting feel maybe a bit rushed but I love the ideas, just by reading the the premises I was already quite enthusiast.
Aisha is an attipical charater both in body and mind. For the others it is harder to tell. I don't know what you plan for Pamela but she have to potential to subvert the expectations. I feel that you have the capability to propose thing we won't see anywhere else.
Just be careful to not give to the player everything they may desire to fast or you might loose audience. Ideally you should as much as possible make the players think that they haven't yet seen the best of your game. But I feel you know a thing or two about naration or at least have a good intuition about it.

I hope to see the rest of this adventure, I'm considering throwing in my contribution depending on how things goes.
 
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adult fairy tales
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I Planned to do it:

- Animated [Used in combination with 2DCG/3DCG/Real Porn when a CG is animated.]
- Anal Sex [Penetrating the anus, (sex toys, tentacles, etc).]
- Ahegao [Used when a character displays a orgasm face with her tongue sticking out.]
- Bdsm [Is a variety of often erotic practices or role-playing involving bondage, discipline, dominance, submission, sadism and masochism. (Just because there's bondage, for example, doesn't mean bdsm should be used).]
- Blackmail [Forcing others into providing sexual favors through threat or disclosing information.]
- Corruption [Corrupting someone's mind robbing them of their purity/innocence.]
- Creampie [Internal ejaculation, either vaginal or anal.]
- Futa/Trans [A woman with both male and female genitals or just male genitals. Or a trans character.]
- Group sex [Sex act involving 3 or more people.]
- Handjob [Masturbating another person's penis.]
- Interracial [Sex act between 2 or more people of different races.]
- Lesbian [Sex act between two or more females.]
- Male Domination [Used when a character submits to a male character via domination.]
- Masturbation [Self-pleasuring by hand or with toys.]
- Multiple Penetration [Sexual penetration involving 2+ penis/toys into multiple holes or same holes.]
- Oral Sex [Sexual act involving the stimulation of the genitalia using the mouth.]
- Rape [Forced or non-consensual sex.]
- Sex Toys [Any kind of toy that is used for sexual purposes.]
- Teasing [Used when a character teases another another, either by seduction or via sex.]
- Titfuck [The act of thrusting a penis (or similar object) in between breasts.]
- Transformation [A sequence showing a physical, biological change of some kind.]
- Vaginal sex [Penetrating the vagina, (sex toys, tentacles, etc).]
- Virgin [Sex act involving virgins and the loss of virginity.]


It May Be:

- Exhibitionism [Nudity or daring stunts with a risk of getting caught by strangers. Also blatant exposure to strangers.] +1
- Cheating [A significant other having sex with someone other than their partner.]
- Female domination [Used when a character submits to a female character via domination.] +1
- Furry [Anthropomorphic animal (Not to be confused with monster or humans with animal ears/tails).] +1
- Groping [Sex act involving groping anothers body.]
- Harem [1 person being courted by at least 3 others, all engaging in consensual sex simultaneously.] +1
- Humiliation [Humiliating/degrading a person in a sexual manner generally in-front of others.]
- Incest [Sex act between family relatives, including those not related by blood.] +1
- Loli [Girls with undeveloped bodies in sexual situations. Read rule 7 .]
- Pregnancy [The act of impregnating a woman or having sex with a pregnant one.] +1
- Prostitution [The act of soliciting sex in exchange for money.]
- Sexual Harassment [Sexual coercion, or the unwelcome/inappropriate promise of rewards for sexual favors.]
- Sissification [Dressing a submissive partner as a woman and/or encouraging/training to act in a feminine manner.] +1
- Slave [A person who is the property of another and is forced to obey them. Generally involving sex acts.] +1
- Spanking [Spanking someone's butt as torture or for sexual pleasure.]
- Stripping [The act of taking ones clothes off usually in exchange for money in-front of an audience.]
- Tentacles [Tentacle Monster using tendrils for sexual purposes. (Does not classify as Monster).] +1
- Trap [Usually men in women's clothing, but may also be the other way around.] +1
 

DD69-1

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Feb 28, 2019
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I Planned to do it:

- Animated [Used in combination with 2DCG/3DCG/Real Porn when a CG is animated.]
- Anal Sex [Penetrating the anus, (sex toys, tentacles, etc).]
- Ahegao [Used when a character displays a orgasm face with her tongue sticking out.]
- Bdsm [Is a variety of often erotic practices or role-playing involving bondage, discipline, dominance, submission, sadism and masochism. (Just because there's bondage, for example, doesn't mean bdsm should be used).]
- Blackmail [Forcing others into providing sexual favors through threat or disclosing information.]
- Corruption [Corrupting someone's mind robbing them of their purity/innocence.]
- Creampie [Internal ejaculation, either vaginal or anal.]
- Futa/Trans [A woman with both male and female genitals or just male genitals. Or a trans character.]
- Group sex [Sex act involving 3 or more people.]
- Handjob [Masturbating another person's penis.]
- Interracial [Sex act between 2 or more people of different races.]
- Lesbian [Sex act between two or more females.]
- Male Domination [Used when a character submits to a male character via domination.]
- Masturbation [Self-pleasuring by hand or with toys.]
- Multiple Penetration [Sexual penetration involving 2+ penis/toys into multiple holes or same holes.]
- Oral Sex [Sexual act involving the stimulation of the genitalia using the mouth.]
- Rape [Forced or non-consensual sex.]
- Sex Toys [Any kind of toy that is used for sexual purposes.]
- Teasing [Used when a character teases another another, either by seduction or via sex.]
- Titfuck [The act of thrusting a penis (or similar object) in between breasts.]
- Transformation [A sequence showing a physical, biological change of some kind.]
- Vaginal sex [Penetrating the vagina, (sex toys, tentacles, etc).]
- Virgin [Sex act involving virgins and the loss of virginity.]


It May Be:

- Exhibitionism [Nudity or daring stunts with a risk of getting caught by strangers. Also blatant exposure to strangers.] +1
- Cheating [A significant other having sex with someone other than their partner.]
- Female domination [Used when a character submits to a female character via domination.] +1
- Furry [Anthropomorphic animal (Not to be confused with monster or humans with animal ears/tails).] +1
- Groping [Sex act involving groping anothers body.]
- Harem [1 person being courted by at least 3 others, all engaging in consensual sex simultaneously.] +1
- Humiliation [Humiliating/degrading a person in a sexual manner generally in-front of others.]
- Incest [Sex act between family relatives, including those not related by blood.] +1
- Loli [Girls with undeveloped bodies in sexual situations. Read rule 7 .]
- Pregnancy [The act of impregnating a woman or having sex with a pregnant one.] +1
- Prostitution [The act of soliciting sex in exchange for money.]
- Sexual Harassment [Sexual coercion, or the unwelcome/inappropriate promise of rewards for sexual favors.]
- Sissification [Dressing a submissive partner as a woman and/or encouraging/training to act in a feminine manner.] +1
- Slave [A person who is the property of another and is forced to obey them. Generally involving sex acts.] +1
- Spanking [Spanking someone's butt as torture or for sexual pleasure.]
- Stripping [The act of taking ones clothes off usually in exchange for money in-front of an audience.]
- Tentacles [Tentacle Monster using tendrils for sexual purposes. (Does not classify as Monster).] +1
- Trap [Usually men in women's clothing, but may also be the other way around.] +1
just give a heads up, if there is netorare planned in the game
 
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TheCragger

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Just a perspective of someone who will definitely be following and talking about this VN as it develops. Not intended as a universal perspectives, just talking points I would bring up with others looking for a new VN to play. I am not in any way putting down other people's fantasy fetishes.

I Planned to do it:

- Animated : When done well always welcome but doesn't make or break a project for me.
- Anal Sex : (y)
- Ahegao : Is silly to me but as part of the campy theme and sexdolls actually fits in.
- Bdsm : (y)(y)(y)
- Blackmail : (y)
- Corruption : (y)(y)My imagination of Aisha being corrupted into a exhibitionist sex nanny/maid/etc. makes this appealing.
- Creampie : (y)
- Futa/Trans : (n) Only a negative for me when it's forced. Characters having futa/non futapaths is always appreciated though.
- Group sex : (y)
- Handjob : (y)
- Interracial : (y)(y)
- Lesbian : (y)
- Male Domination : (y)(y)
- Masturbation : (y)
- Multiple Penetration : (y)
- Oral Sex : (y)(y)
- Rape : (y)(y)
- Sex Toys : (y) Aisha in a naughty maid outfit with a buttplug comes to my dirty mind.
- Teasing : (y)
- Titfuck : (y)
- Transformation : (y)(y)(y) An under represented and fun fetish.
- Vaginal sex : (y)(y)
- Virgin : Indifferent to me, being virgin or not never been a big concern of mine.


It May Be:

- Exhibitionism : (y)(y)(y)
- Cheating : Indifferent but definitely a useful story method to introduce/interact the player character with the others.
- Female domination : (y)
- Furry : (y)(y)(y) Alway been a fan of the creativeness that anthromorphics allow.
- Groping : (y)(y)
- Harem : (y)(y)
- Humiliation : (y)(y)
- Incest : Indifferent, that they are related has never influenced the appeal factor to me.
- Loli : (n)(n) Content I avoid if possible.
- Pregnancy : (y) Is a form of transformation of it's own.
- Prostitution : Indifferent to.
- Sexual Harassment : (y)
- Sissification : (n)(n) Content I avoid if possible
- Slave : (y)(y)(y)
- Spanking : (y)
- Stripping : (y)
- Tentacles : Indifferent to.
- Trap : (n)(n) Content I avoid if possible.

If anything I Just hope this response encourages you to continue working on your project as I see a whole lot more positives then negatives from my perspective.
 
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