VN Ren'Py Abandoned Uncontrollable [v0.13] [DeepCarbonLabs]

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Unofficial android port of :

Uncontrollable [v0.6] [DeepCarbonLabs] + yuk69 Walktrough mod



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My android port has an alternative save location, the save will remain intact when you uninstall the game so don't worry about starting over. And my port has a textbox opacity slider and text size slider and added change name to the main menu.

here or below my message there's a link to my discord
 
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Deckard81

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So much this

Pretty heavy on dialogue, too much exposition. Could use with some trimming here and there. I don't need to hear about some dude i haven't even seen yet, by the time we actually meet him in game and all this information comes to play we're all going to forget any of that anyways. And also a lot of it could be said in one sentence, we don't need to hear a life story to get the feel of a man.

Showing what other characters are thinking to themselves is also a bit too much. MC is not a mind reader so showing it to us kinda disconnects us from him and ruins the immersion. You could just show it with some facial expressions instead.
You're kinda spilling the beans too soon and there is no way we could even use this information since MC is not aware of any of it so whats the point of it beside giving us even more things to read.
 
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Yup, I am just trying to make this thing worth my time because even though there are quite a few already that like the game, it has not converted to some new patrons. It's a bit unmotivating. But again, if some people want it, it will only be for them, like a separate file for them only. THE ORIGINAL STORY WON'T HAVE ANY OF IT. So I don't understand the confusion.
You're gonna have to deal with that confusion continually. It's one of the 'hidden' costs of touching the more polarizing stuff even peripherally. People on both sides end up wanting to be sure things work they way they want, and don't want to risk getting hours into a game just to find out they were wrong. Part of that includes getting up-to-date super-clear statements (see below, specifically for this game), and it's also a good chance to put a little vote in for the direction you want. One little question let's you be totally sure you aren't wasting your time now and may even help ensure the game goes the direction you want. It's not a bad deal, from that perspective.

Things can change over time, and it's not always easy to figure out the direction things are moving. Like right now, I see "NO NTR" in the main post dev notes and then wandered into the tail end of this discussion. I can't tell what came first. If you wrote "NO NTR" earlier it seems like you're more open to it now than you were originally, and if you wrote "NO NTR" later it seems like you're setting a hard limit for the main game despite any extras. This causes uncertainty for everybody, which further provokes the issues mentioned earlier.

So... yeah. Adding some detailed specifics to the main post with extreme clarity about where/how any NTR may ever be found and how it'll relate to the story might help with some of the uncertainty. Don't get expect it to go away entirely though, because it won't. (And if you go back on what you say - or even what people *thought* you said... just start finding gods to pray to if you want to not hear about it one day, some day. So be real clear and real sure.)
 
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Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: 0.13 + IC + WT by yuk69

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Hey guys, I am starting a DeviantArt page, and this is my first upload. It's my Ayesha Curry fan-art, and it's a custom model that I made. I hope you like her.
To my VIP patrons, if you like this particular render or something similar, just message me on Patreon for an HD Wallpaper version of this for next month's monthly render.

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There is a simple poetic beauty in the fact that the mom AND sister of the neighborhood bully/douchebag have the hots for the younger, better MC. Like that a whole lot! ;)

And Sophia....Possibly the hottest CG model I have seen! (Anyone know that asset?)
Might be custom.
 
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i really liked the game but need reeally Actually really really need Animations and videos if this game want to be of the best games ,the MILFS looks hot its a waste with out Animations and videos btw the dialogues need some working, i hope the story will be more interesting in future and i hope u found a solution quickly about ur Pc u got talent dude .
 

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i really liked the game but need reeally Actually really really need Animations and videos if this game want to be of the best games ,the MILFS looks hot its a waste with out Animations and videos btw the dialogues need some working, i hope the story will be more interesting in future and i hope u found a solution quickly about ur Pc u got talent dude .
Nope, imho, this, or any other porn game/vn, doesnt "really really need Animations and videos if this game want to be of the best games". For the reference check SoTF.

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It all depends on devs resources, and if they arent that strong there (as many new devs arent) it is better to skip animations, videos, music and any other non-essential stuff. Or you are of those preferring 6-7 months or longer waits for less than average, yet animated update? Sadly that has became a standard around - longer and longer dev cycles, smaller and smaller updates (with few exceptions). And I know SoTF has had lately really prolonged dev cycle, yet thats a whole diff story:HideThePain:
 
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Nope, imho, this, or any other porn game/vn, doesnt "really really need Animations and videos if this game want to be of the best games". For the reference check SoTF.

p.s.
It all depends on devs resources, and if they arent that strong there (as many new devs arent) it is better to skip animations, videos, music and any other non-essential stuff. Or you are of those preferring 6-7 months or longer waits for less than average, yet animated update? Sadly that has became a standard around - longer and longer dev cycles, smaller and smaller updates (with few exceptions). And I know SoTF has had lately really prolonged dev cycle, yet thats a whole diff story:HideThePain:
I agree, animations are totally expendable compared to other parts of a visual novel, the most important things in a visual novel are the characters and the relationship progression, the characters being good and the relationship progression being consistent, the rest is smooth, the developer can do whatever they want that people will like.
 
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Hey, guys and gals, I just wanted to share this. I made some edits on Sophia. I wanted her to look more like the Megan fox from transformers 2007. I might make some more adjustments in the future, but I am pretty happy with it for now.
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I swore she was inspired by Yennefer from The Witcher, too bad man, it would be nice if she was more like Yennefer rather than Megan Fox, but anyway, she in my opinion is prettier in the left photo, the on the right it looks like she has a swollen face
 

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I swore she was inspired by Yennefer from The Witcher, too bad man, it would be nice if she was more like Yennefer rather than Megan Fox, but anyway, she in my opinion is prettier in the left photo, the on the right it looks like she has a swollen face
He modified Sophia, the one who looks like Yen (I absolutely love that character) is Evanka, so no changes for her :)
 
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