It's good to see that the DEV will at least try to continue with their game, but come on, we're almost in 2023, are you really going to use 720p image?
I know there are many people who use 720p screens, especially on cheap laptops, but 1080p should be the minimum in 2022, some DEV's are already starting to switch to 4k, and you can't say it's because of the render time, I render in 4k and compress to 1080p, and I know from experience that the render times in 4k and 1080p are about the same.
Another criticism I will give is, why not use renpy default main menu? It is much, much better than the one being used now.
As for the amount of content in this update, I won't judge, the game was already abandoned, so, for those who want to see the continuation of the story, some content is better than nothing, I just find it difficult to attract many patrons with so little content after so long, if it was already abandoned, you could take longer to come back, but come back with more content to show you're serious.
Nobody likes criticism, but this is my honest opinion, good luck with your project.