VN Ren'Py Abandoned Uncontrollable [v0.13] [DeepCarbonLabs]

[Kind Nightmares]

Lovely models, beautiful renders and decent mc. I'm pleasantly impressed. Since I'm such a simp for Yennefer I hope you'll continue this game.

I'll wait for a few updates until I give a review, but keep it up.

 

[Myscho]

How can i enter landlady room when she talking on the phone ? I saw pics in folder but i can go only to gym room

 

[MistahDeep]

How can i enter landlady room when she talking on the phone ? I saw pics in folder but i can go only to gym room

Hello, avoid hugging her from behind also avoid checking left door on lower floor then at stairs choose to check first room on the left or something

 

[bpink12]

good luck to your game

 

[Draverik]

Pretty heavy on dialogue, too much exposition. Could use with some trimming here and there. I don't need to hear about some dude i haven't even seen yet, by the time we actually meet him in game and all this information comes to play we're all going to forget any of that anyways. And also a lot of it could be said in one sentence, we don't need to hear a life story to get the feel of a man.

Showing what other characters are thinking to themselves is also a bit too much. MC is not a mind reader so showing it to us kinda disconnects us from him and ruins the immersion. You could just show it with some facial expressions instead.
You're kinda spilling the beans too soon and there is no way we could even use this information since MC is not aware of any of it so whats the point of it beside giving us even more things to read.

 

[Kalsan]

Yup someone told me this too and has been giving me tips as well because I am such a noob. I did try to appeal to both sides but being concrete on one side (Which is no NTR) is more to how I want the story to be as it was always from the beginning.

Oh, by the way when people on this site refer to ntr we mean that no cock other than mc's goes near any girl. Some even complain about ntr when there is lesbian sex between the girls without the mc. Just a few clarifications so you know what many mean when they talk about ntr.

 

[MistahDeep]

I Downloaded your Android version, but in my device not working, it's crashed, I tested on my 2 device, in both it's crashed

I tried it (it was not me that ported it, by the way, it was a cool guy from the forum) sadly it does not work on my phone either.
And I don't know how to port it to android, unfortunately...

 

[XCelesX]

The characters are freaking beautiful. Just waiting for the vaginal sex tag and maybe 2 or 3 updates to play it

 

[Hordragg]

Oh, by the way when people on this site refer to ntr we mean that no cock other than mc's goes near any girl. Some even complain about ntr when there is lesbian sex between the girls without the mc. Just a few clarifications so you know what many mean when they talk about ntr.

While I'd argue that the first part is an overgeneralization, you do raise a very valid point: ntr haters for the most part don't distinguish between netorare and sharing. So it's best to avoid any consensual sharing as well as scenes only featuring love interests if one cares to appease them.

 

[RogMR]

DEV,
You can go into the "Dating my Daughter" thread and look at the comments/reviews since the DEV added sharing/NTR (other mans fucking MC girls) and understand the love/hate of Romance/Harem/"MC fucking them all" players x NTR/sharing/cuckhold players.

Try to be as clear as possible from the start, so as not to lose credibility with players in the future. For now, your last information is "NO NTR". So if bukkake means 3-5 raping/fucking a prostitute, do the add-on at planned TAG. If it is with any Love Interest, for many it will be interpreted as NTR and you will lose the trust of players. Or is it no longer bukkake planned? If you have decided that you will no longer have bukkake, remove from the OP / planned tags.

Create the game you want. Make multiple paths if you like. But the more paths, the more work/slow development for you and less content for the player. And "multiple paths" can be "only MC dick" fucking / "a lot of dicks" fucking. Or exclusive routes with each girl. Or as in "The Way", 3 different stories. But in the end, it means little content on the path the player chooses.

Some players prefer play games with multiple paths. Others don't. You will please some players. And it will upset others, like any decision. So think, decide. And be as clear as possible about what you decide. If you change your mind in 1 week or 1 month, use the DEV notes to clarify what you've decided. Change some information. Without a clear OP (Opening Page / post 1) the thread will be filled with complaints from all sides.

 

[MistahDeep]

DEV,
You can go into the "Dating my Daughter" thread and look at the comments/reviews since the DEV added sharing/NTR (other mans fucking MC girls) and understand the love/hate of Romance/Harem/"MC fucking them all" players x NTR/sharing/cuckhold players.

Try to be as clear as possible from the start, so as not to lose credibility with players in the future. For now, your last information is "NO NTR". So if bukkake means 3-5 raping/fucking a prostitute, do the add-on at planned TAG. If it is with any Love Interest, for many it will be interpreted as NTR and you will lose the trust of players. Or is it no longer bukkake planned? If you have decided that you will no longer have bukkake, remove from the OP / planned tags.

Create the game you want. Make multiple paths if you like. But the more paths, the more work/slow development for you and less content for the player. And "multiple paths" can be "only MC dick" fucking / "a lot of dicks" fucking. Or exclusive routes with each girl. Or as in "The Way", 3 different stories. But in the end, it means little content on the path the player chooses.

Some players prefer play games with multiple paths. Others don't. You will please some players. And it will upset others, like any decision. So think, decide. And be as clear as possible about what you decide. If you change your mind in 1 week or 1 month, use the DEV notes to clarify what you've decided. Change some information. Without a clear OP (Opening Page / post 1) the thread will be filled with complaints from all sides.

I was not really thinking when I placed it there (bukkake) dammit how do I remove it

 

[BTLD]

I was not really thinking when I placed it there (bukkake) dammit how do I remove it

if you don't have ownership of the thread just report it and say you're the dev and you've given by mistake a wrong information and you would like to remove "bukakke" tag from future tag under dev notes

 

[MistahDeep]

if you don't have ownership of the thread just report it and say you're the dev and you've given by mistake a wrong information and you would like to remove "bukakke" tag from future tag under dev notes

I am such a noob ahahha, I think I can just change it by that edit button

 

[Cena2001]

You can go into the "Dating my Daughter" thread and look at the comments/reviews since the DEV added sharing/NTR (other mans fucking MC girls) and understand the love/hate of Romance/Harem/"MC fucking them all" players x NTR/sharing/cuckhold players

I agree with you that developer loss majority of support when he added sharing for the game
That game is really great win for ntr lovers
As we waited very long to get a single sex scene with D but developer out of nowhere added sharing

 

[BTLD]

I am such a noob ahahha, I think I can just change it by that edit button

that means you have ownership of the thread

 

[kenway242]

Great art

 

[Draverik]

Am i getting this right, there's no way to see all the content in one clean sweep, you have to repeat the game with different choices in order to do that yeah?

 

[Hordragg]

Am i getting this right, there's no way to see all the content in one clean sweep, you have to repeat the game with different choices in order to do that yeah?

Yes. And seeing as it's a huge-ass decision tree the dialogue you already know has actually not been visited before, baring you from CTRL skipping it.

 

[darkdepths]

Models look great!
Is it possible to avoid romance and go corruption only?
Not a fan of beeing all lovely in this kind of games.^^

 

[MistahDeep]

Models look great!
Is it possible to avoid romance and go corruption only?
Not a fan of beeing all lovely in this kind of games.^^

hello, for now, there is no definitive path yet, more like a taste of both I think. You'll get to see different scenes depending on your choices.