VN Ren'Py Abandoned Uncontrollable [v0.13] [DeepCarbonLabs]

[Lordisigler]

The beginning need more clarification. It is confusing to have to name 2 landladies, an unclear number of roomate and two landlords. Also, way too many dialogues per render. You start a scene with hopeful for something to happen, but with minutes of dialogues on a single image. You get bored really fast

 

[Everest Harrison]

Girls are looking quite unique and beautiful, nice start to this game!

 

[patrickB]

Silly question maybe, but what is the name again of the pornstar playing in the video on his TVscreen when Mom is in the room to talk please ?

 

[JC07]

My dog also had the same doubt.

He barked at me "what is this movie this guy is watching?"

 

[TheTrumanShow]

Can't wait for more, keep it coming.

 

[Queen Daenerys]

Gorgeous set of women hoping that the story is decent.

 

[Knight07SSS]

Absolutely Loving this game already.
Great Start as a Story, Amazing Models... Escpecially Aunt and big Sister.
Great Planned Tags (Lactation). Hope To see A lot of breastfeeding and tit sucking with all girls.

I trust you Dev...

 

[Alex Lem]

MistahDeep I don't know how much "Corruption" will be part of the game, but I hope that MC will not become a complete asshole and will not corrupt girls, and everything will be gradually based on romance, since the girls in this game are just gorgeous and very sweet, and that the maximum that will be on BDSM is ass slapping, or nothing tooooo crazy. Thank God, there will be no NTR, but foursome? MC, Mom, Sister and Aunt i assume? At the moment this is a pretty good start, i like it, very unique models, always happy to see Yennefer

 

[Cernunnos.]

This is—by far—the most confusing naming portion I have ever encountered. MC's name alone is their "first name" used as their full name. And I'm sure you have to define the uncle twice, a second time in place of another relationship. This is why characters need to be named and shown when setting up relationships.
The mother is absolutely top-tier: absolute primo. But I'm desperately trying to avoid the sister, and it's just not happening.

Seconded there. It'd help if it stayed on one relationship until finished instead of jumping around like a frog on a pogo stick.

 

[BeingADikDik]

Seconded there. It'd help if it stayed on one relationship until finished instead of jumping around like a frog on a pogo stick.

Dev could provide a single overlay with multiple fields that would make this more intuitive. For example, MC could view a photo of his family before arriving home, and the player could enter these relationships alongside the character portraits. This could be done once for the Mom/Dad/Sister1/Sister2 ('family') and again later for the Aunt/Cousin. That way, we see the relationships and why you need to manually define these.

 

[Cernunnos.]

Dev could provide a single overlay with multiple fields that would make this more intuitive. For example, MC could view a photo of his family before arriving home, and the player could enter these relationships alongside the character portraits. This could be done once for the Mom/Dad/Sister1/Sister2 ('family') and again later for the Aunt/Cousin. That way, we see the relationships and why you need to manually define these.

As long as they don't do it like Bloody Passion where you have such a screen but it doesn't actually change said relationships.

 

[Chrathrard]

Seconded there. It'd help if it stayed on one relationship until finished instead of jumping around like a frog on a pogo stick.

Dev could provide a single overlay with multiple fields that would make this more intuitive.

The relationship of naming the relationship is in the OP. And without looking it can be messed up anyway.

It is indeed under "Developer Notes." I used to always check them, but they never, ever contain anything useful.

The names of the mom (Eva) and the aunt (Eve) are a bit confusing because they are so similar... I like the models so far and yeah! there are a lot of old incest game cliches but at this point few incest games could add original stuff, you totally need to change the color of the font btw.

I especially liked how it jumps from Eva to Eve then back to Eva for no reason. Also, I was looking for that profile pic yesterday, but with a bag of pretzels peeking around the girder: I didn't find it, so the joke was ruined. =')

 

[Dustellar]

The names of the mom (Eva) and the aunt (Eve) are a bit confusing because they are so similar, so completing the relationship part was a bit like this:



But well, only needed to read the main page xD the relationship part was complex and I like that because it's something that's part of the game, not an unofficial patch, a really nice way to add the incest that Patreon hates, I like the models so far and yeah! there are a lot of old incest game cliches but at this point few incest games could add original stuff, you totally need to change the color of the font btw.​

 

[Pogo123]

just here for the curvy butts. Story sounds a bit ridiculous and playing a young boy meh. If would could switch to some old cunning grandpa I would try it even the story so far sounds still strange for me

 

[eneas56]

looks good

 

[Skankhunt 4 2 0]

Nice update
Thanks

 

[ZakAttak]

Blonde looks like Billie Eilish.

She kinda does!

 

[steelsmiter]

checkin' in for when it gets big enough to be worth it.

 

[Vmax12]

This is one of the best renders of a milf ever...EVERRR! GOOD JOB SIR! story so far is pretty good!

 

[stupidcat]

Gonna keep on track