VN Ren'Py Abandoned Uncontrollable [v0.13] [DeepCarbonLabs]

[Norman Knight]

Ah, I see you're a man of JUSTICE as well

Yeah, few things break my immersion more than reading " I live with my adoptive step-landlady and my adoptive step-roommates".

I actually read that once, it was a huge Bruh moment

 

[MistahDeep]

Yeah, few things break my immersion more than reading " I live with my adoptive step-landlady and my adoptive step-roommates".

I actually read that once, it was a huge Bruh moment

Just change the relationships. Please have a look at the developer notes

 

[Norman Knight]

Just change the relationships. Please have a look at the developer notes

I did read that, I was just wondering if within the context of the story they work as step family or a blood related one.

You are the dev right? You should apply for a developers badge.

 

[Hordragg]

Im actually using URM but I can't see any variable on any choice which so confusing what lead to what

That's because the game currently only tracks the main character's name and the various relationship details inside variables. The rest is just a huge tree of labels the names of which will not be shown on the choice menu (though both the watch panel as well as the main URM screen will inform you of the last jumped to label). If you want to know how to reach a certain scene: look up the image name, search for it in the script and backtrack through the jumps to the point of the story you're currently at.

 

[MistahDeep]

I did read that, I was just wondering if within the context of the story they work as step family or a blood related one.

You are the dev right? You should apply for a developers badge.

I applied for it already, just waiting now. Its not step

 

[Hardcore1234]

Watching this thread.
that's a nice Billie Eilish lookalike

 

[diego68usa]

Them be some serious Bunda's

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they must have some brazilian in them, or will soon

 

[Homealone]

((
Recommended to use this for Relationships:
mother, mom, son, aunt, nephew, cousin, cuz, uncle, nephew, sister, sis, brother, bro, dad, son, family.
))

<< Thank you for putting this here. small stuff called QoL

 

[___charming___]

I am such a noob at this. My apologies, guys. I will establish it now that there won't be any NTR in this game .

I truly wish you the best of luck with your game, try not to let others persuade you and most of all have fun with your project.

 

[Walnutt]

In the game, there's a teenage violence epidemic.
On f95, there's a dead dad epidemic.

 

[DrakoGhoul]

You had my attention the minute i saw those two cakes in the guy's face. Looking over the tags, girls and the story details, I'd say this is definitely my kind of game.

 

[ad30n]

looks interesting.
too bad i cant read

 

[Nick Nosferatu]

That's a good start. Good models, nice start for the story, appealing characters so far, we'll see how it evolves.

Also, I liked the idea of the incest porn movie being played from the start and the "tension" as soon as MC realizes what he's watching, nice touch (especially because he wasn't caught, a regular porn game would have done differently).

 

[Spirit Detective]

I guess I have to Google this Billie English is because I have no clue, those asses though..

 

[Cena2001]

Just wanted to know will there be animation in the gamebas developer has not written that in developer note

 

[JC07]

Dude, I don't even know what to say right now. After playing this game. Its amazing.

Like, MC who isn't a perverted idiot or retard doesn't seem like a wimp.
Friend who looks really cool and funny.
Beautiful and loving models.
A decent content for the release, it already had a good backstory.

Seriously, I'm just impressed. First DEV game and first release, that's great.

I can't speak English because I don't speak English, so I can't judge.

The only thing that needs a review is the script part, as mentioned above, it doesn't have many variables, so far it's just a scene sequence tree. It has no variables or scoring sequence. But I'm sure the DEV will improve in the next update.

I kinda like to tease NTR though

I think I understand the NTR part of to tease.

With all the mystery of Mom's phone call and the lawn mower gangster. I think that's where you want to cause us this suspense, right? Well as long as nothing bad has happened or is going to happen, a little "healthy" suspense can be good to keep us curious about what's to come.

So, it's belt-tightening on Batmovel. Because of course I'm the hero they need...hahaha

 

[laeg15]

foursome, bukkake?

nevermind i already got my question...

 

[JC07]

bukkake?

I also had this doubt, but the DEV has already made it clear that there won't be this kind of thing here. As far as I know, the game is all about romance/incest/harem.
No crazy stuff.

I believe the DEV is waiting for the developer tag to change the OP.

So I believe we are safe from things like that.
But I think the DEV can make that clearer.

 

[laeg15]

I also had this doubt, but the DEV has already made it clear that there won't be this kind of thing here. As far as I know, the game is all about romance/incest/harem.
No crazy stuff.

I believe the DEV is waiting for the developer tag to change the OP.

So I believe we are safe from things like that.
But I think the DEV can make that clearer.

idk i readed something another (somewhere aroud paige 4)

personaly i will rather pass now than later in half of story.

 

[JC07]

idk i readed something another (somewhere aroud paige 4)

personaly i will rather pass now than later in half of story.

I see too. He said NTR could happen and that he put bukkake and voyer on the list just to have something.

It's DEV's first project and he's new to it. But after some comments he said that there will be no NTR. Although at times it can provoke us with NTR vibrations.

At least that's what I've seen so far in the game. and what the DEV itself told me.

I hate that sort of thing too, and as soon as something like that comes up I'm the first one to jump off the boat. But I think we're fine. I can be wrong and paying devil's advocate. So only the DEV itself can assure you of that.