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Hilarious! Am I the only one reading this in Russian accent? Macadam, please....let me fix the dialogue for you. Thanks for a fun game/story.
Some guy had monkeys in his game, why not chickens, rooosters or whatever ?!?A ninja chicken... LMAO wut
not sure about the monkey game, but i do remember seeing another on here with freaking teddy bears xDSome guy had monkeys in his game, why not chickens, rooosters or whatever ?!?
Anyone remeber the name of the game with the monkeys ? .... and no i dont mean monkey island !!!
This game is beautyful and is pur fantasy and WTFplease....let me fix the dialogue for you. Thanks for a fun game/story.
my english is shit, yup, sorry... (i m french btw)
thanks for the purpose, it should be ok, i know lots of peoples that would like to helpHilarious! Am I the only one reading this in Russian accent? Macadam, please....let me fix the dialogue for you. Thanks for a fun game/story.
the only one i know is from Chimpanor production ( or similar name, sorry if i didnt get he name correctly ^^ ) "Family Way"Some guy had monkeys in his game, why not chickens, rooosters or whatever ?!?
Anyone remeber the name of the game with the monkeys ? .... and no i dont mean monkey island !!!
thanks , oh dont worry, i will get a better english next time. as fun as it can sound right now, i htink its mandatory for get the "funny humour" part of the game correctly.I haven't even finished it and I'm already in love!!:heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes:
Some say that when you're on top there's nowhere to go but down. That's not the case with this game! It's like a 'Get Psyched" mix CD that's nothing but highs!!
@macadam I think your English works well for this game. You can get it proofread and 'corrected,' but I think it adds to the weirdness of your game. Keep up the GREAT work and I look forward to more!!! Merci.
thanks for your feedback. i see most of the points can be fixed easily. i m just beginning sooo yup, the light is not my best skill.Some thoughts:
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The English really needs a lot of work, as do all of the dark renders. The game has it's fun moments, but there's way too much dialogue that isn't meaningful. I suppose this has some potential, but there are some flaws that kept it from being enjoyable for me in itis' current state.
oh i know my english is shit.. i learn it in internet ( didnt go far in school and jump in the army early ). but, heh, nobody can be perfect... english peoples make grammar error everyday.. its normal that non english native make errors too . its human XDView attachment 98092
Damn frenchies, you can't learn anything right at school !
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i love it , thats exactly how the white rooster ingame is.. " keep my eyes on you "You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
be careful ! i can add a pig girl later.. who know ?thats supposed to be an elf? more like a pig-girl...
i am more beautiful than that "elf"
same... and after i went toAfter reading the OP:
:closedeyesmile:XD
funny great tits are smaller than boobies... who would guess that ? :tf:After some nice cock this game better give us someYou must be registered to see the linksor even someYou must be registered to see the linksfor people who like it big.
since it is a rooster that would make it a ninja cock!yes, ninja chicken all the way :eazyHype:
ha ha = used mostly by menCan i ask a question why do so many games on this site use HiHI or Hi hi as a laugh for characters in games? Is that some kind of laugh people do in Russia or something? It should be Hehe or Haha i always find it weird!
yup .. shitty english. definitly a point i need to progress.The game is really funny and fun the grammar and English was bad but i get it is not your language.
I have to say I agree with the complaint that there is too much explanation going on. The chicken bits come off as harrassment, but only because the fucking chicken won't shut up. I don't mind a generous helping of WTF in a story, but only as long as it moves the story along - like bashing the cop with a briefcase. But the chicken scenes had him show up to explain something fairly obvious, and then hang around for several pages of text.- chicken part at beginning was needed to get two points:
1- the introduction and explications about the game ( kind of fourth wall but inclued ingame and not just random text only)
2- give the player an idea about how wtf the game is by being "harassed" by a chicken
- i know they are alots of text... but i m kind of person who prefer a good story ( well, even if the story is wtf ), than a shit story with tons of renders. for me, its more important to have the player into the story than just fapping on beautyful CGs ( didnt mean that the CGs will be shit forever of course ^^ )
- i m sorry if you find the game boring , its not the intention at all.
oh its not something that will happen everytime. its just beginning. ( of course )I have to say I agree with the complaint that there is too much explanation going on. The chicken bits come off as harrassment, but only because the fucking chicken won't shut up. I don't mind a generous helping of WTF in a story, but only as long as it moves the story along - like bashing the cop with a briefcase. But the chicken scenes had him show up to explain something fairly obvious, and then hang around for several pages of text.
Other than that, all I can say about the "game" is that I played to the bonus picture.