VN Ren'Py Unexpected Opportunity [Ch. 6] [Sweetychily]

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MixQQ

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MC is around late to early 20's. One thing to note, what part of him is a "Horny teenager?" I wrote him up and down and I'm pretty sure I didn't write any horny scenes where he's perving on people. In fact, it was because I hated those kinds of games that I decided to write it that way. If you're talking about the moments when he's with Nicole in bed, that was "divine intervention" ;)
his inner thoughts and ogling some girls during conversations, like he never saw a boobs

Another thing, what makes him a simp? He is their servant and he's struck with her. He won't be overpowered, or be groveling to anyone. Just to be clear.
he behave like sub, im suprised femdom tag is not planned. Simp, who wants to fulfill every whim of Lisa, girls unfortunately also treat him like a kid. Sometimes it's embarrassing to watch this

As far as the "unassertive scared wimp" goes, every person in life has some struggles. MC has one of those moments where he has his past trauma with Nicole and his ex girlfriend Rachel. These things keep him from moving forward romantically. If you're asking when we'll see MC evolve? Well, he's already improved in a few ways. He's been diligent at cooking and cleaning. He's meeting friends and interacting in a casual manner with them and helping them with their problems. He is becoming more reliable as the game goes on.
he had a gf, so he should be more confident towards them. Girl teasing him and he doesn't play along, just avoid everything at all cost. Truth & dare shows how scared he is to do some simple things, girls need to push him, it's pathetic

However, a major turning point will happen with MC in Chapter 7. This chapter will see him taking control of a situation and helping him to stop second guessing himself.
I honeslty don't know what to think about it, with his current passive personality and absolutely no confidence he still won't make any move to get a girl. At this point i assume girls will make first move and have to "wear the pants" in this relationship:ROFLMAO:

As far as MC becoming a Harem hero, that's pretty simple. He's a guy the girls like and want to be around. Someone who is understanding, reliable, and a good time to be around. MC will get here, but first he must conquer each demon that plagues him. Each of these aspects are touched on by every love interest in the game. Each one having an issue and MC learning to build himself better as he helps them deal with their own issues.
i can't image him as a harem hero :ROFLMAO: you really need to turn him into a real man first
 

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his inner thoughts and ogling some girls during conversations, like he never saw a boobs


he behave like sub, im suprised femdom tag is not planned. Simp, who wants to fulfill every whim of Lisa, girls unfortunately also treat him like a kid. Sometimes it's embarrassing to watch this


he had a gf, so he should be more confident towards them. Girl teasing him and he doesn't play along, just avoid everything at all cost. Truth & dare shows how scared he is to do some simple things, girls need to push him, it's pathetic


I honeslty don't know what to think about it, with his current passive personality and absolutely no confidence he still won't make any move to get a girl. At this point i assume girls will make first move and have to "wear the pants" in this relationship:ROFLMAO:


i can't image him as a harem hero :ROFLMAO: you really need to turn him into a real man first
Don't worry, there is a place for everyone and everyone's personality in this world. For you, you're clearly not the audience. MC has issues with women and sex because of his past trauma. If you think that only women can feel a certain way about sex or whatever, then cool, you don't have to play this game.

There are many types of people in the world and not all of them are defined by their personality, some are defined by their actions. For example, you just said "This guy is a simp he does what they tell him to" but there are powerful non"simp" guys who are alpha as fuck and then go home and watch another guy fuck his wife. This is real. My MC will never have that happen in his life nor will he encourage or be a part of it. Not the type of game.

For me, I believe people, men and women alike are more complex than a word used to death online. But as I said, it's all good. The MC is a wimp to you, cool. I wish you a good day!

That's the core of the issue with this story. You're not storytelling, you're preaching. I don't know you, but judging by your writing and how it's tone death on the central theme trauma, I'd guess you have no idea how actual trauma really feels like.
Preaching? In what way? There is absolutely no preaching in this game when it comes to trauma. Each person's trauma is defined by themselves. For example, in real llife some people were abandoned as a kid. There is something that happens to your senses and logic as you develop that completely warps your reality. It takes decades to consolidate that.

There are many aspects of life that work this way. One person might be less attached to feelings, so such an event might not hurt them as much emotionally, but they tend to disappear into themselves. But another issue might hit them harder.

One thing I want to note: "how ACTUAL trauma really feels like?" I mentioned it a bit above, but what does that mean exactly? Do you invalidate other's trauma because of someone else has it worse? That I will never understand. A rich dude neglected by their parents can be just as fucked up as a poor dude neglected by their parents, but the severity can improve or worsen depending on mitigating factors. The rich person might have more things to lean on and less worries, while the poor person might have no luxury to be carefree.

This is all logic, not preaching. Believe what you will, but please understand that gatekeeping trauma is weird. :ROFLMAO:
 
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So I like games that take it easy ... I'm also not the type of person who wants to jump on a woman on the first date in real life. But this is the 6th update ... so the "sixth date" ... if you like it ... I'm sticking to the fact that this is not a slow burn, it's simply a no burn ... maybe in 3-4 years time ... but then the renders will be outdated.
 

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So I like games that take it easy ... I'm also not the type of person who wants to jump on a woman on the first date in real life. But this is the 6th update ... so the "sixth date" ... if you like it ... I'm sticking to the fact that this is not a slow burn, it's simply a no burn ... maybe in 3-4 years time ... but then the renders will be outdated.
I want to say this one more time. This is a story. You don't have to like the pacing, but it is what it is. What I can't wrap my mind around is getting consistent updates and then complaining that because it's at X update, there should be X content.

I know you're not specifying specifically, just using your comment as an example for others to see. The "sixth date" is exactly how people look at it. It's like a numerical point rather than a logical point in the story.

To put this to bed I'll say this: This part of the game is about MC getting to know these girls having rapport with them. They are all just friends at this point. It's as it continues that relationships are formed. There will be meaningful changes in relationships, but I wanted it to be natural, not in a courting phase, but in a "Friends becoming lovers" way.

There are games on here that are 3 years old and have 3 updates and yet people complain less cause sex scenes. We have 6 updates and we have a lot of scenes and building of relationships. Our game is not a sex game, it's a story game.

Whether everyone will like this or not, is a different story. But if people are gonna judge this story, at least judge it based on it's merits not on a preconceived notion of where it should be going.

Thanks for the comment regardless. Hope you enjoyed it, if not, I still wish you a good day!
 
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I want to say this one more time. This is a story. You don't have to like the pacing, but it is what it is. What I can't wrap my mind around is getting consistent updates and then complaining that because it's at X update, there should be X content.

I know you're not specifying specifically, just using your comment as an example for others to see. The "sixth date" is exactly how people look at it. It's like a numerical point rather than a logical point in the story.

To put this to bed I'll say this: This part of the game is about MC getting to know these girls having rapport with them. They are all just friends at this point. It's as it continues that relationships are formed. There will be meaningful changes in relationships, but I wanted it to be natural, not in a courting phase, but in a "Friends becoming lovers" way.

There are games on here that are 3 years old and have 3 updates and yet people complain less cause sex scenes. We have 6 updates and we have a lot of scenes and building of relationships. Our game is not a sex game, it's a story game.

Whether everyone will like this or not, is a different story. But if people are gonna judge this story, at least judge it based on it's merits not on a preconceived notion of where it should be going.

Thanks for the comment regardless. Hope you enjoyed it, if not, I still wish you a good day!
I'm quite enjoying the buildup, personally. I play these games for the story, since that's what makes this format unique. Your characters actually feel like real people, with real personalities, as well as being beautiful and sexy. The pacing feels great, with every update giving a significant amount of story and character progression. You update at a steady pace, so much so that I don't even need to replay the game to remind myself what's going on each update, unlike most games. Keep up the great work!
 
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I am supporting the dev´s for a long time now and don´t mind slowburn games, but even i am short of losing my patience with it.
 
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Since this Story will be a Slow-Brunner. Add a Cat mini game, to any Given Render have the Game Called Find the "Pussy".

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MC is a maid. Lots of MILFs but no action, MC is you basic virgin type of male character like in many of these VN's, I guess so the developer does not have to render any sex scenes.

Characters and writing are ok, story has a lot of stuff you see in most of these games... I guess for character development... like going shopping, swimming, beach, a party with truth or dare etc... I found some of this to be rather dull as we players see these in almost every game.

But because there is no sex in this game, all of this becomes even less interesting to me. I don't really care about any of the characters enough to probably try this game again. MC is kind of weak minded.

Anyway just my take on this game. peace
 

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MC is a maid. Lots of MILFs but no action, MC is you basic virgin type of male character like in many of these VN's, I guess so the developer does not have to render any sex scenes.

Characters and writing are ok, story has a lot of stuff you see in most of these games... I guess for character development... like going shopping, swimming, beach, a party with truth or dare etc... I found some of this to be rather dull as we players see these in almost every game.

But because there is no sex in this game, all of this becomes even less interesting to me. I don't really care about any of the characters enough to probably try this game again. MC is kind of weak minded.

Anyway just my take on this game. peace
I dont know why this type of mc is so popular. Well I have assumption that this type of mc may be better sells on subscriptions or in estores or some devs just write them from themselfs without any idea how pathetic their mc's looks. From experience can tell that this type of man wouldn't be liked, desired or respected nor by nice girls, nor by whores, nor by average girls, nor by femenists or even by any living being with consience.
 
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There is none.
"Slow burn", the bane of all porn games
new update up to truth or dare game..and fuck i am bored. this game is boring as fuck. 1 guy 5 women..none of them doing anything remotely interesting..and mc is a pussy. this one is going to the trash where it belongs.
im currently in chapter 3, and mc looks like total sub and simp Lisa all the fucking time. No idea how old he is but behave like horny teenager. Unassertive scared wimp right now, how something like that can make a potential harem?
more no burn then slow burn
Reading comments here, brings to mind an old aphorism: Giving Pearls to Pigs.

HOLD your horses, I'm NOT calling anyone a pig. Relax.

That means that sometimes people do so much effort that it is completely unappreciated by the receivers. As is the case with many users here. This isn't a wham-bam thankyou mam kind of game, so, all of you think that it is a waste. It is a pity.

The worst of it all is that those of us that do like it, still have to be here and read your departure shots like you are saying goodbye to friends and family on the airport. I speak only for me, obviously, but, please don't bother yourself on my account. I can quite endure your departure with no goodbyes. #NoTearsWasted

Peace :)
No sex scene after chap 6?? What the heck, sorry just saying. the game itself it's good i like it
his inner thoughts and ogling some girls during conversations, like he never saw a boobs


he behave like sub, im suprised femdom tag is not planned. Simp, who wants to fulfill every whim of Lisa, girls unfortunately also treat him like a kid. Sometimes it's embarrassing to watch this


he had a gf, so he should be more confident towards them. Girl teasing him and he doesn't play along, just avoid everything at all cost. Truth & dare shows how scared he is to do some simple things, girls need to push him, it's pathetic


I honeslty don't know what to think about it, with his current passive personality and absolutely no confidence he still won't make any move to get a girl. At this point i assume girls will make first move and have to "wear the pants" in this relationship:ROFLMAO:


i can't image him as a harem hero :ROFLMAO: you really need to turn him into a real man first
That's the core of the issue with this story. You're not storytelling, you're preaching. I don't know you, but judging by your writing and how it's tone death on the central theme trauma, I'd guess you have no idea how actual trauma really feels like.
So I like games that take it easy ... I'm also not the type of person who wants to jump on a woman on the first date in real life. But this is the 6th update ... so the "sixth date" ... if you like it ... I'm sticking to the fact that this is not a slow burn, it's simply a no burn ... maybe in 3-4 years time ... but then the renders will be outdated.
I am supporting the dev´s for a long time now and don´t mind slowburn games, but even i am short of losing my patience with it.
Since this Story will be a Slow-Brunner. Add a Cat mini game, to any Given Render have the Game Called Find the "Pussy".

Trademarked: By BigJoe644
Of Course I'm Joking!
Either rename this Blue Balls or add a no sexual content tag. lol
MC is a maid. Lots of MILFs but no action, MC is you basic virgin type of male character like in many of these VN's, I guess so the developer does not have to render any sex scenes.

Characters and writing are ok, story has a lot of stuff you see in most of these games... I guess for character development... like going shopping, swimming, beach, a party with truth or dare etc... I found some of this to be rather dull as we players see these in almost every game.

But because there is no sex in this game, all of this becomes even less interesting to me. I don't really care about any of the characters enough to probably try this game again. MC is kind of weak minded.

Anyway just my take on this game. peace
I dont know why this type of mc is so popular. Well I have assumption that this type of mc may be better sells on subscriptions or in estores or some devs just write them from themselfs without any idea how pathetic their mc's looks. From experience can tell that this type of man wouldn't be liked, desired or respected nor by nice girls, nor by whores, nor by average girls, nor by femenists or even by any living being with consience.

I don't want to speak on behalf of my partner, but I would like to say a few things.
First of all, it is clear that many people find MC antipathetic. (To be honest, if you ask me, I cannot say that he is very sympathetic at the moment.) This changes as the game progresses. So we also want to show character development.
Also, rightfully so, there is no obvious sexual content in the game yet. Some people find this annoying. (Maybe it burns slower than other slowburn games. Trust my partner's experience in these matters. It will be worth it.)

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