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"She's expertly gulping down semen"
"facing the TV screen just passing your door" = refers to MC moving while looking at TV. I don't recall the exact frame that appeared in but I think you're correct since he's moving to the couch but he could also have the TV near his bedroom door in which case, the correct word is "past".
"her long athletic legs, the cascade of blonde hair" isn't bad.. but could be better said as "her long athletic legs and cascading locks of blonde hair" - This makes me visualize long sexy legs with long wavy blonde hair.
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- Did you get the blowjob one? That's not a double quote, it's three quotes with words in between.
- I retract that bit about breath: I may have misread it. It should be either "you breathe" or "your breath", never "your breathe" which is what I suspect I pressed you to change it into. If there is a "you breath" somewhere, then that's what I was referring to. If not, then there was no typo!
- Yes, I got it, when I made the search for double quotes, I found that case too.
- You are rigth, it was "your breath" I have changed to "your breathe", now I changed back to "your breath".
I just waiting Megan reply about Jen coming two times to the TV room to release a new file.
Not in the main story, I can create an extra-scene with footjob if some tier3's user require or suggest the writer to include in the main story in the future.
My friends,
Sorry to be this late, you couldn't image the problems I faced with my environment since last week. I made a short resume on the Patreon page.
But there it is, a off-line version, with all bugs (hopelly) fixed.
Thank you for your feedback
Sorry to be this late, you couldn't image the problems I faced with my environment since last week. I made a short resume on the Patreon page.
But there it is, a off-line version, with all bugs (hopelly) fixed.
You must be registered to see the links
Thank you for your feedback
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OP : "Updated: 25-15-2018"
Perhaps a little mistake, LOL
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You are correct, on the project page every month I post a scenes table describing what is ready, being developed or to be make on next versions. The writer is preparing score marks on each scene so I can implement a score system that will unlock scene based on score. This will only be used on Phases 2 and 3, at that time I will change the button colors to show at is missing and what is blocked
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I am struggling to find a way to have sex with Kayleigh. Anyone want to drop a hint or a walkthrough?
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Hi friends
V0.07 is out
Announcement post:
v0.07 changes:
- A new path including a anal scene with Jen.
- The new path begins on "Sit Cozy", be sure to choose "Well, there's no use in putting off my first move...".
Regards
V0.07 is out
You must be registered to see the links
Announcement post:
You must be registered to see the links
v0.07 changes:
- A new path including a anal scene with Jen.
- The new path begins on "Sit Cozy", be sure to choose "Well, there's no use in putting off my first move...".
Regards
- Aug 7, 2016
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