VN Ren'Py University of Problems [v1.4.5 Extended] [DreamNow]

[lospiloks123]

how do can i enter the cheat codes

 

[Ragnar]

Yes, I will try to add the ability to delete saves in the next update.

I try to develop the game in such a way that the player has the opportunity to develop relationships with all the girls at once, without having to choose one person (At least in the first 70-80% of the game.). But this is difficult to do without using a walkthrough or walkthrough mod.

Things with Carol seem really serious already if you follow her route. If you ask her about her lies the MC says something like "I don't want cheats between us" while he can be fucking Roxy on the side, which is worse than some white lie.

 

[RattledSam]

that's a bit racist game if you ask me

 

[Chrisdarock19]

that's a bit racist game if you ask me

The way Mortimo talks? Or something else in particular?

 

[Macgamer]

If I comment on Rachels picture in chat it lowers Carols relationship points by 5? is that a bug in the phone?

 

[espy85]

Just played and after reading a few pages of this post there are things I don't understand.
It's about Ashley and Carol.
Let's start with Carol. In all the dialogues she tells us about being labeled as a whore, she became president of the HSL because she passed all the tests, but then in a post by the author he specifies that the girl has never gangbanged or anything else, the I find an inconsistency, the first step in entering and letting oneself be examined in the private parts and having a dildo inserted in the anus, I imagine that to become president you have to go even further. I understand that the author was afraid of the anti NTR knights, so I accept it, I don't have that kind of fetish, but I find her story inconsistent. She would have made a lot more sense if she had done certain things to her, perhaps unwillingly, to be accepted by others, and that her MC was a way for her to abandon those things. But as mentioned I understand the author, lately many become crazy even just to name the NTR, or anything that comes close, in this case we would talk about things in the past, so no NTR, but as said lately a strange puritan wave is breaking down and I understand the author's fears, but in my opinion it is a good plot ruined by these fears, let's see how it goes on.
On Ashley instead I do not understand, if the girl does not interest us as LI, the HSL can be a way to involve her in sex scenes without being involved, why announce already that they will not be there? It's an erotic game and I don't think it makes sense, starting from the fact that she doesn't interest us like LI, or in any case she is a sidegirl, the fact of seeing her having sex with others who can bother? And if someone can always be given a way to avoid those scenes, so everyone is happy.
The same goes for Carol, I would prefer to be able to see certain scenes or not, which would still remain in the past, so no current betrayal towards the MC.
In general I think that the author has let himself be influenced by the puritan wave I was talking about before and this I'm sorry, as said in one case a good plot ruined and in the other a way to have sex scenes of a beautiful girl who, however, we don't care.
Roxy, she's a whore, aware she is, the only thing wrong with the tattoo on her vagina is the ridiculous writing of her, because she makes perfect sense that she has a tattoo in that place.
On the characters in general, Carol is very clingy to the point that I thought she might be a stalker, I like it, but I have a feeling that I've been forced into her. Roxy on the contrary is my favorite, she poses as a prostitute, but I don't think she is such a simple character.

 

[DreamNow]

If I comment on Rachels picture in chat it lowers Carols relationship points by 5? is that a bug in the phone?

Yeah, wait for the hotfix. I think I'll post it in a couple of days.

 

[NateGrey]

Just played and after reading a few pages of this post there are things I don't understand.
It's about Ashley and Carol.
Let's start with Carol. In all the dialogues she tells us about being labeled as a whore, she became president of the HSL because she passed all the tests, but then in a post by the author he specifies that the girl has never gangbanged or anything else, the I find an inconsistency, the first step in entering and letting oneself be examined in the private parts and having a dildo inserted in the anus, I imagine that to become president you have to go even further. I understand that the author was afraid of the anti NTR knights, so I accept it, I don't have that kind of fetish, but I find her story inconsistent. She would have made a lot more sense if she had done certain things to her, perhaps unwillingly, to be accepted by others, and that her MC was a way for her to abandon those things. But as mentioned I understand the author, lately many become crazy even just to name the NTR, or anything that comes close, in this case we would talk about things in the past, so no NTR, but as said lately a strange puritan wave is breaking down and I understand the author's fears, but in my opinion it is a good plot ruined by these fears, let's see how it goes on.
On Ashley instead I do not understand, if the girl does not interest us as LI, the HSL can be a way to involve her in sex scenes without being involved, why announce already that they will not be there? It's an erotic game and I don't think it makes sense, starting from the fact that she doesn't interest us like LI, or in any case she is a sidegirl, the fact of seeing her having sex with others who can bother? And if someone can always be given a way to avoid those scenes, so everyone is happy.
The same goes for Carol, I would prefer to be able to see certain scenes or not, which would still remain in the past, so no current betrayal towards the MC.
In general I think that the author has let himself be influenced by the puritan wave I was talking about before and this I'm sorry, as said in one case a good plot ruined and in the other a way to have sex scenes of a beautiful girl who, however, we don't care.
Roxy, she's a whore, aware she is, the only thing wrong with the tattoo on her vagina is the ridiculous writing of her, because she makes perfect sense that she has a tattoo in that place.
On the characters in general, Carol is very clingy to the point that I thought she might be a stalker, I like it, but I have a feeling that I've been forced into her. Roxy on the contrary is my favorite, she poses as a prostitute, but I don't think she is such a simple character.

I agree, I'm not squeamish about seeing "my" girls get it on with someone else, and would be interested in seeing what kind of sluttiness Ashley gets up to for the sorority. Heck, maybe even encourage her with Carol being none the wiser.

 

[DreamNow]

In all the dialogues she tells us about being labeled as a whore, she became president of the HSL because she passed all the tests, but then in a post by the author he specifies that the girl has never gangbanged or anything else, the I find an inconsistency, the first step in entering and letting oneself be examined in the private parts and having a dildo inserted in the anus, I imagine that to become president you have to go even further.

I wrote that Carol had made mistakes in the past. But she didn't do anything as stupid as taking part in a group sex just for a place in the sorority. And Carol wasn't made President because of her sexual abilities. This is not how it works. She's beautiful, outgoing, popular, and friendly, and Abby decided to take advantage of that.

At the beginning of this thread, I clearly stated that there would be no NTR content in the game. But I agree that the past of the girls can not be attributed to the NTR content. I also agree that the sex of a girl that you are not interested in with another guy also does not apply to NTR.
And a little more about NTR and puritanism. On my server in discord, I already wrote that I don't mind making small edits to the game (such as adding in version 0.1.5 the ability to skip the scene with Roxy in the shower, because it hurt some players). But I will not change the plot or change the basic principles of my project because someone is not satisfied with some aspects of my game.
I read all the comments and respect any player's opinion, but let's be honest: no game can be perfect for everyone.

On Ashley instead I do not understand, if the girl does not interest us as LI, the HSL can be a way to involve her in sex scenes without being involved, why announce already that they will not be there? It's an erotic game and I don't think it makes sense, starting from the fact that she doesn't interest us like LI, or in any case she is a sidegirl, the fact of seeing her having sex with others who can bother? And if someone can always be given a way to avoid those scenes, so everyone is happy.

About Ashley. Here's what I've already written about her "slutty" route:

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And to summarize these quotes: I have a sufficient number of story branches that I want to develop. Ashley's immersion in the HSL with all consequences is not as interesting to me as the development of the main plot branches with the rest of the girls. But I didn't say that I definitely won't add such a storyline.

 

[CheekySix]

Love the content so far! Hoping for some more foot oriented scenes and Rachel

 

[Ragnar]

I want to add my vote to the Cringe womb tatoo crowd. Tatoos are fine but -Tight Pussy- sounds like something a 13 year old kid would write on a toilet door.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

I want to add my vote to the Cringe womb tatoo crowd. Tatoos are fine but -Tight Pussy- sounds like something a 13 year old kid would write on a toilet door.

It just means she's stingey with it!

 

[goproporn]

This game is not animated at all. Please remove the tag until you have full animated scenes. Good quality images though. Being fair here.

 

[espy85]

But I will not change the plot or change the basic principles of my project because someone is not satisfied with some aspects of my game.
I read all the comments and respect any player's opinion, but let's be honest: no game can be perfect for everyone.

This sentence is enough for me, as I said I have no particular fetishes, I am not against something in particular, my only fear was that I could have you influenced in the writing of the story, as unfortunately I have seen other authors do ruining their own work.
But if this is not your case I apologize if I came to hasty conclusions and I wish you the best, I am ready to follow you.
Rereading my previous post I also realized that I didn't compliment you, because in addition to what I wrote, I must say that the game struck me a lot, maybe that's also why I was afraid of seeing it ruin. But as said I apologize and I am ready to follow you. Good job.

 

[Arvie33]

A little help for the players. Enjoy.
Walkthrough v0.1

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[Sngo]

First and foremost hands down to you for not putting ntr in this game DreamNow .
Past or not current LI sluty scenes with other's may not be ntr per say but can "kill" the character for many players, just an heads up regarding that.

I'm enjoying the game so far the renders are great and the girls are hot just don't like very much Sara thick eyebrows and hair.

I'm liking Carol she seems a cute and sweet girl with some relashionship issues but still have a foot behind because what she may done in the past for the sorority and if we are going to see some unpleasant thing that could ruin her character for me, I know you said no gangbangs and etc but still I have my reservations of what she had done because we already see the first test and didn't like it imagine what all of them could be and she passed all. Isnted of the line "lets not cheat on each other" should be "lets not have lies between each other" fits more the flow of their conversation and the no cheat part its already implied in any normal relationship .

Ashley is crossing a bit to the complete stupidity, she had been warned more than one time by more than one person, she didn't really like what happened according by her thoughs during the scenes but still going for it? That not being naive its being stupid. Usually the stubborn person that do the opposite of someone say is when someone demand it not when advice it.
Dafuk have shaving the pubs to do with joining a sorority and being naked and groped? Can't she really put the dots together and realize it?
But it was a nice bush shame that had been shaven.
If we save her from abby she CAN or WILL be mc girlfriend? I may want to save her from her stupidity but if she is really that stupid I may not want her as a gf.
Keeping on the sorority line isnted of the possible joining abby for exploiting other girls route, something that doesn't seem to fit mc character, isnted should/could be a route to humiliate/revenge abby for what she has been doing.

Yuki want to know more about her, really like her model and seems a sweet girl. But for now can't really go more indepeth with her for lack of interaction.

Loved Rachel really want to change that behaviour she as towards her husband to be towards MC and make her my waifu. Nice model and really sweet its really show how she lacks someone to talk.

Sara let's see how it develops, not found of her for now.

Roxy well that tattoo jezus . That's even worse than the usual tramp stamp. Noticed the hints for she not being what it seems and the sad face after mc gets up from the bed in party but all depends at how deep her sluty way already had gone to make me want have more than just sex with her a couple times.

Natalie not worth to mention yet .

My top girls for now is:
Rachel(sweet waifu)
Yuki(impatiently w8 for more about her)
Carol(isnt top 2 because I still have a foot behind with her, don't want to "attach" to her and then have her "killed" as a char for me)
Sara(just for the lack of better choices)
Ashley(she can climb alot in my ladder but her stupidity for now is putting me away from her)
Roxy
Melanie

Regarding the dream sequence possibility that doesn't do anything for me and if it is with a char that mc didn't sleep with yet its a hard pass for me since it takes away the expectation of first time with that char.

Pv new and pics even forgot about it, I think you should have some way of remembering the players more about it making it more interactive.

The chat should auto scroll down in my opinion.

Would like an harem ending without the slutty chars if you make harem ending.

Thats all I can remember for now about my thoughts on your game.

Keep up and wish you all the best.

 

[interlinked]

I second the notion of allying with sorority(without getting femdomed by Abby) and taking advantage of dummies like Ashley would be cool but I guess it would require too much workhours for additional content like that.[/ISPOILER]

I wouldn't mind getting femdommed by Abby

 

[DreamNow]

First and foremost hands down to you for not putting ntr in this game...

Thank you for the detailed feedback.

I don't know exactly what moments of Carol's past might hurt the players. But here's a spoiler for them: I'm not going to turn Carol's storyline into her confession. She had made mistakes in the past, and those words were enough. I think that already in version 0.2.0 I have clearly outlined the character of Carol. And she will not change for the worse. If any of the players are afraid of what she did in the past, then I have already described the boundaries of this past in previous comments. And I think that within these boundaries there is nothing extremely bad or disgusting. Carol is a wonderful person and destroying a relationship with her because of a couple of minor moments in her past is somehow childish.

I've noticed that a lot of players think Ashley is stupid. But this is not the case. In General, Ashley has a prototype in real life. Yes, I may have gone a little overboard with Ashley, but believe me, there are people who can do strange things in pursuit of their goal. In the meantime, just wait for the further movement of this story line.

The next update will focus on the development of the story with Yuki (mostly), Sara and Natalie. Of course I won't forget about the other girls

 

[Cokebaths]

You got me interested in what happens next! But, I gotta say, the grammar and dialogue could use some work. I don't know many college kids that talk that formally to each other lol

 

[DreamNow]

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