Ren'Py Unlimited Pleasure [v1.0.9] [Waifston]

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Demoness_Kiss said:
he changed a lot of things...i'm critical about it(enough that if people will call me hater, i would agree with them)

now MC has tons of issues:
- He is physically weak, he is 19, tall like a 12 years old kid.
- He broke both his wrists and now suffers from tremors(which get worse when he is anxious)
- apparently the young bimbo nuns did some bad thing that caused him some School Refusal Syndrome, so he skipped school enough to become the worst student ever
- He has such a low self-esteem that basically he has almost constant anxiety when dealing with girls/women
- Elena the teacher is corrupted by money, insult him a lot...still admired and loved by MC(somehow), he voted against MC for giving him a recommendation to college(he wouldn't get it anyway, because decent reasons like skipping school a lot)
- New Character: The Principal of the school(which also is the Mayor of the city)...also corrupted/She liked money and is easily bribable
- New Character: Zachary, the school bully, who also bribed his way to college recommendation, also his family own like 90% of the town either legally or thanks to bribes
- His own mother while still love him, has: addiction to alcohol, gambling, and smoking, her mother and sister are awful and slapped MC once for shouting "fuck college, i'm going to find a job" , and because of MC's mother's addictions, the both of them are in huge debt(like barely capable to have three decent meals a day)
- Needless to say, MC skipped school a lot because of his anxieties...meaning that will never go to college(but his mom doesn't know...YET)
- We didn't see yet: The bimbo Nuns, the Nanny, the pornstar, and the chubby childhood friend
- MC couldn't stand for himself without being either insulted or mocked by the people who actually insist on saying that they have MC's best interests at heart(Elena the sexy teacher who wanted to be a writer, and the new principal)
- MC's self-esteem is so low that he believes that his only way to solve every problem he has, is to marry a rich old woman(like Elena or the new principal, or a few other MILFs mentioned in the prologue but that i don't remember the names) but he is not smart, and the dev didn't show us any of MC's good traits.

so yeah, the situation looks very dark...but there will not be any NTR at all(the dev told us)
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WTF
The game was incredible, there was NO reason to change the story.

I really don't care for that sick prologue because I follow Lewd Town Adventure and the MC there also goes through shit in his life.

The only HUGE problem is just having to start over and not caring for the people who wanted the old content. The dev could at least have made a new game for that.
 
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Demoness_Kiss said:
he changed a lot of things...i'm critical about it(enough that if people will call me hater, i would agree with them)

now MC has tons of issues:
- He is physically weak, he is 19, tall like a 12 years old kid.
- He broke both his wrists and now suffers from tremors(which get worse when he is anxious)
- apparently the young bimbo nuns did some bad thing that caused him some School Refusal Syndrome, so he skipped school enough to become the worst student ever
- He has such a low self-esteem that basically he has almost constant anxiety when dealing with girls/women
- Elena the teacher is corrupted by money, insult him a lot...still admired and loved by MC(somehow), he voted against MC for giving him a recommendation to college(he wouldn't get it anyway, because decent reasons like skipping school a lot)
- New Character: The Principal of the school(which also is the Mayor of the city)...also corrupted/She liked money and is easily bribable
- New Character: Zachary, the school bully, who also bribed his way to college recommendation, also his family own like 90% of the town either legally or thanks to bribes
- His own mother while still love him, has: addiction to alcohol, gambling, and smoking, her mother and sister are awful and slapped MC once for shouting "fuck college, i'm going to find a job" , and because of MC's mother's addictions, the both of them are in huge debt(like barely capable to have three decent meals a day)
- Needless to say, MC skipped school a lot because of his anxieties...meaning that will never go to college(but his mom doesn't know...YET)
- We didn't see yet: The bimbo Nuns, the Nanny, the pornstar, and the chubby childhood friend
- MC couldn't stand for himself without being either insulted or mocked by the people who actually insist on saying that they have MC's best interests at heart(Elena the sexy teacher who wanted to be a writer, and the new principal)
- MC's self-esteem is so low that he believes that his only way to solve every problem he has, is to marry a rich old woman(like Elena or the new principal, or a few other MILFs mentioned in the prologue but that i don't remember the names) but he is not smart, and the dev didn't show us any of MC's good traits.

so yeah, the situation looks very dark...but there will not be any NTR at all(the dev told us)
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He probably has none considering everything you just listed, there really isnt a single "good trait" that can redeem all of the cards that has been dealt against him here (they're all difficult situations to get out of unless the MC win the lottery or something). From a narrative stand point, this MC is probably set up to be the worst of the worst, the absolute bottom in society with 0 redeeming quality.

For everyone else reading this, it doesnt mean i hate the game so calm your pitchforks down, im just simply analyzing the MC.
 
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WTF
The game was incredible, there was NO reason to change the story.

I really don't care for that sick prologue because I follow Lewd Town Adventure and the MC there also goes through shit in his life.

The only HUGE problem is just having to start over and not caring for the people who wanted the old content. The dev could at least have made a new game for that.
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Making a comment like this only reinforces the idea that the protagonist should be starring in a game with the NTR theme. Isn't Lewd Town Adventure an NTR game? Dude, I'm starting to think there's no salvation for the protagonist of the new game. There is nothing more humiliating than being compared to an NTR game protagonist.
 
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DONTMAKEMEASINNER said:
Dude, I'm starting to think there's no salvation for the protagonist of the new game.
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There really is none, you can read the comment made by Demoness_Kiss to see how many problems he's having & how little he currently has (which is nothing btw) to work with. The 1 way i can see him getting out is won the lottery, but that would be down to sheer luck & not the MC trying to improve himself as a human being. Would that be good writing? No.
 
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DONTMAKEMEASINNER said:
Making a comment like this only reinforces the idea that the protagonist should be starring in a game with the NTR theme. Isn't Lewd Town Adventure an NTR game? Dude, I'm starting to think there's no salvation for the protagonist of the new game. There is nothing more humiliating than being compared to an NTR game protagonist.
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There's a NTR/sharing path for the girls in Lewd Town Adventure, but it's avoidable. The maximum amount of NTR content (which is not avoidable) that you have in the main story is MC’s mother being kidnapped for the purposes of (sexual) experiments. :KEK:
But this is just to represent how fucked up the story is, there is no explicit NTR scene in the main story
 
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There really is none, you can read the comment made by Demoness_Kiss to see how many problems he's having & how little he currently has (which is nothing btw) to work with. The 1 way i can see him getting out is won the lottery, but that would be down to sheer luck & not the MC trying to improve himself as a human being. Would that be good writing? No.
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THAT'S WHAT I'M QUESTIONING!(caps for emphasis reasons)

I'm not a writer(aside for a few headcanons and short stories when i was a teen high on Harry Potter and Percy Jackson XD) but i see MC's actual situation(nobody told me i'm wrong, so i guess that most of you played the game and agree with what i wrote so far...feel free to speak up if i'm misunderstanding) is a bloody mess, and i give the benefit of the doubt to Waifston because it's the incomplete(bc it feels incomplete) part 1 of a prologue...which is the equivalent reading the first 5 sentences of the first chapter of a book.

so in the "first 5 sentences of the first chapter of the book" we learn that MC is in a bloody mess, and we've yet to see his good traits, either physical or mental, or emotional...nor a succubus simply appeared giving him a life-time supply of aphrodisiacs...we know nothing about MC's good side

and i hope he really does have some good quality, of ANY KIND. Because from the point of view of us(players) the initial situation looks bad...we know that there will not be NTR-content...but the situation look very bad for MC and i don't see how can he improve...i mean he broke his own wrists while doing pull-ups when he was like 14 or something(he was protecting his chest...so he avoided death, apparently...or a few broken ribs...but still) what kind of physical training a guy so weak can do? I think maybe some jogging...but that's it...anything involving hands may risk ruining his hands again(and i know for a fact that hands are a mess to fix, some artists broke their hands multiple times to the point that they can't draw any more...example: George Morikawa author of Hajime no Ippo, he went under surgeries at least twice because the first time didn't solve his problem, and i don't know recently but he had to put his comic on pause multiple times after that, not even sure if he's still continuing that comic...)

so that's it...that's what i'm asking: when we'll see MC's qualities? Can I've some reassuring spoilers about it?

but that aside, i love Waifston, i love the game(concerned but still loving it), and i don't have problems of any kind with the sandbox-mechanics XD i'm mostly concerned for the plot and about characters like Elena, that they screw MC over and still believe that she did a nice thing...yes she seems to understand that MC needs a therapist...but realistically speaking, i went to a therapist once...and i gave up on being normal when i saw i should have pay for having a person talking to me trying to fix my mental mess...so yeah Elena(or the principal) asks MC to go see a therapist...but that costs money...and MC is deeply in debts because his mother has no self-control, she smokes(in my family €600 goes just for cigarettes every month, that's why everyone is trying to quit smoking recently XD), drinks and gamble in online casinos...the killing blow would be that she buys drugs...and she has all the most expensive addictions known to mankind XD
 
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i read the synopsis, it says that the landlady moves out of the city, but can i do her? or is it planned for the future? or is she never going to be available
 
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Demoness_Kiss said:
so in the "first 5 sentences of the first chapter of the book" we learn that MC is in a bloody mess, and we've yet to see his good traits, either physical or mental, or emotional...nor a succubus simply appeared giving him a life-time supply of aphrodisiacs...we know nothing about MC's good side

and i hope he really does have some good quality, of ANY KIND.
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His mess is just too big for a single good trait to fix, he gotta have severals.

But from his initial introduction (aka this demo), he has none. He's a pathetic loser & an idiot to boot. Its like the entire world has already 21 hand while the MC has a busted hand in blackjack.

In other words if he somehow has a good trait in the future updates, he'll need more than 1 to deal with this gigantic mess of a life he's living in. At the same time, if he's given too many good traits later, wouldn't that betrayed the characterizations that has already been set up for him in this demo?

Again, i dont hate the game. I think its 1 of the best out there but the way the story is heading has a very questionable approach in term of "come from the bottom to the top" scenario.
 
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SuperPerv96 said:
Cool but i guess thats not available at this point right?
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No not in the new version. In the old you can have sex with her while shes sleeping which I didn't really like because with the other girls you could have a normal relationship. Hope there's options for the first time to be consensual this time around.
 
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Waifston said:
How is he pathetic? The guy has issues, weaknesses, both morally and physically. It created to make his more complex character but not a blatant perfect guy. The story will be developed further and he will become more and more confident in himself.
I apologize for ignoring you, but I really, really, really not in a mood to make long detailed answers and explain everything. My 3 months work just flushed into the toilet.
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Look dude, i havent played your game yet, but i kinda agree with, you i mean it's completely ridiculous to see the perfect guy that can do everything right, he has like a 15 inch dick, can cum 5 times a day and last hours everytime, even in his first sexual experience he is a god in the bed, that dull and stupid, and i dont like that ind of characters

As i said i havent played your games yet, but it's also not good to make a really patethic character, i think there has to be a middle point, because if the guy is pathethic why would the girls sleep with him?

but i respect what you are saying about sayind that the characters need development, because they do need development.

Just dont take things criticism to personal, theirs always going to be someone who like it and someone who hates it
 
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No not in the new version. In the old you can have sex with her while shes sleeping which I didn't really like because with the other girls you could have a normal relationship. Hope there's options for the first time to be consensual this time around.
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Thanks, i'm also not a big fan of raping someone while they sleep
 
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A thing that doesn't make the MC seem so bad to me is that you can stand up to bullies. I don't think he is pathetic as some people say. He can get angry at his teacher and even talk back. Also he talks down to his mother even if she slapped him and he even made her cry.

And consequences be damned. I don't think consequences will lead to a game over or something like that, and we already know there's no NTR. So whenever I get a choice to be a dick to Zachary for example I'll take it.

Keep in mind the game is a sandbox, it's not a kinetic novel. So even if the consequences lead to things like having some of the girls dislike you, there's probably gonna be some grind mechanic that will let you get those relationship points back.
 
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No not in the new version. In the old you can have sex with her while shes sleeping which I didn't really like because with the other girls you could have a normal relationship. Hope there's options for the first time to be consensual this time around.
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Could you please show me a picture of the landlady?
 
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