I think NoMeme should get/hire some proofreader, because there is a lot of Engrish that breaks immersion and I often misunderstand the sentence and have to read it again. English is not my first language either, but when I read "We apologized", it sounded like they have already apologized, but they haven't. It's really weird and doesn't read like human speech. It shouldn't be past tense, but present. And also "We prepared some food and wines downstairs."..."wines" are parts of climbing plants, not multiple glasses of wine. It's just "wine", no matter how much of it is there.
Those are just 2 examples, there is much more. Some are not so bad, but some are.
The reason I am saying this, is, that I started playing this VN for the first time and I am enjoying it, and I want it to be good. This is one of the few games that manages to make the Illusion game assets look good. VNs that use Honey Select or Koikatu posing studios usually look really bad with inhuman looking half baked characters, but here the characters had some work put into them, which I can appreciate as someone who has played around in Illusion character creators. And the story seems nice and likeable so far. The immersion breaking language hurts the experience that is otherwise really good, imo.
