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Tjord honestly did an excellent job with the female MC point of view. I would 100 percent love to see future games go in this direction and the two sided story was amazing. The sow commander was an excellent addition, I would love to see even bigger breasts in the future <3
 

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Spent way too long and too many words on a review that's probably going to get somebody to get mad at me because I don't like what they like, like last time. I was unsure whether to do spoilerfree or spoilered, and I went with a bad mix of both. I'm also to lazy to go back and edit. So here it is anyway:

I want to start off by admitting bias and saying that I’m a big fan of Tjord’s games and plots, particularily Isis and Valdana. If you haven’t played either, I would highly recommend both of them.

Synopsis: an elite team of women land on a jungle planet and get corrupted one by one.

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Added most of my thoughts in the review, but just wanted to throw some more points for the discussion:

First off, I think Tjord handled the shift in point of view really well. It genuinely piqued my curiosity about what might be causing the corruptions. Even though he explicitly stated there would "arguably be no traditional villain," I still fell for a few red herrings and thought that Javier or Verhoeven might be plotting something. In the end, though, it turned out to be just the environment itself. For a moment, I even considered the possibility of Andrea acting through some unnoticed brainwashing mechanism. While the idea of playing from the POV of a brainwashed protagonist could make for a unique story, I was ultimately glad Tjord stuck with the "no real villain" premise.

But for me the greatest highlight in Valkyre in comparison with other entries is the presence of more visible corruptions, having more sprites for each step of the corruption really adds to the feeling of slowly falling into depravity. The more detailed descriptions of how the transformations negatively impacted the mission were a great touch. I’ve always found it a little odd how, in the other entries, when the changes were questioned, the characters would brush it off with a casual "I just did my hair a little different today :)" and everyone would just roll with it, lol. The final transformations in Valkyre were also my favorite in the entire series—especially Ellen. She’s officially joined my personal podium alongside Latifa and Cassandra <3. Kathleen was super hot too, but as a devout follower of the "bigger IS better" religion, Ellen wins for me.

The ending with a throwback to Isis was also my favorite. It was a nice way to pay homage to the old transformations while also adding variety to the corruptions. Also, poor Andrea, imagine surviving all that shit just to end up falling into another trap and end up being brainwashed and also turned into a sex slave lol, thought it was a pretty funny ending considering all the situation :ROFLMAO:.

Story-wise, Valdana is still my favorite. Don’t get me wrong—Valkyre wasn’t a step back or poorly written in any way. It’s just that writing a political coup story feels more complex, and Tjord pulled it off so well that it still holds the top spot for me. I also think that Victorica and her crew were such annoying bitches, that in the end corrupting them felt all the more satisfying. If I had to point out a criticism of Valkyre, it would be how easily the girls were corrupted. Sure, it kind of makes sense, given that there wasn’t a true mastermind and the girls had to walk into the corruptions on their own, but I really missed the struggle and payoff from previous entries.

So yeah, I don’t know if we’re getting a fourth (and final?) installment, but if it happens, I’d love to see how these three setbacks have hindered the Alliance and how Neo-Terra might exploit the situation. At the end, I just want to see powerful and independent women being transformed into cock addicted sluts with tits bigger than their head, how they turn into that state I'll leave to Tjord to imagine :), and at this point I'm quite open to what he has to offer!
 
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the third game valkyrie the fall , has a good lost in the jungle vibe but very less of that high tech brainwashing done in a clever way where the neo terran agent is always afraid he is about to be discovered like we saw in both isis the fall and valdana the fall , love both game to death , but this third one valkyrie the fall seems to fall a bit from the goal post i think , if other two games are solid 9/ 10 than this valkyrie one is atbest 5.7/10 since this one divulge a bit from the other two games by a long shot , too be honest not a big fan of big black cavemen theme just not vibing with the whole brainwashing neo terran vibe except in the end on the section 6 ship brainwashing scene. anyway Will we get an extension like in valdana by any chance?
 

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hey! ive always been a fan of your games tjord, ive enjoyed the way in which the victim girls feel like 3 dimensional characters with flaws and virtues and the villains feel like your everyday cartoonish villain with a very simple goal in mind, even if the other games may seem simple in the eyes of someone who only plays to fap i really fell the dedication you put into your writing, from plot points to cash in certain topics introduced along the story, as a girl when i saw the female mc i thought dang, finally ill see how he writes a female turning evil, we both know what happens later haha, the thing is that as the story progressed i felt like some points were left behind, it felt like you had many ideas and you discarded them as the writing progressed, i didnt like this game but i understand why so many did enjoy it, i thank you again for providing this niche space of kinks more material and as a writer myself i thank you for the effort you put in building the characters, i hope to see your next release, thanks again for your new material(if you ever delve into just writing smut ill be more than happy to read it)
 

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I didn't really have a problem with the tribal theme, but I do think the final forms were less attractive than the other games, so I found the last scenes before the full transformation the best for each girl.
Thicc mao is best looking, but still looks like it belong in a higher society and not primal/tribal enough, I like the full transformation of each of them XD.
 

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I was extremely happy to see this come out so soon after I greatly enjoyed the previous two games, and there is a lot I like about it.
In particular, I loved Andrea as a protagonist; I greatly enjoy female protagonists, and she was incredibly compelling and well written throughout the entire story. There are lots of little personality quirks and recurring traits that personalize and make her stand out, and it was extremely satisfying seeing her learn, adapt and improve over the course of the story. Being able to experience the inner monologue of one of the women in these games as they put their exceptional skills and intellect to work is very enjoyable.

What I enjoy from these games is a little different in that I don't like the overt misogyny and inferiority of women angle, but love rough sex, taboo submission, pregnancy, moral corruption, depravity, and almost every kink that was present in the previous games.

Basically, I was personally disappointed by the final transformations, the intelligence reduction and identity death angle's that were taken, which personally soured the ending of the experience for me after being invested 90% of the way through. I was also disappointed that post corruption, the girls virtually disappear from the story.

What was the most enjoyable part of the previous games for me was seeing the elevation of the girls personalities twisted by wickedness and hedonism. It was engaging seeing the narrative through-lines of the original parts of their personalities and relationships with the other girls being developed in a twisted but satisfying way.
I loved the entire cast of four and how well their camaraderie, backgrounds and individuality were developed. But this made the full play-through more of a turn-off that left me depressed rather than tantalized, since I cared about the characters and wanted to see them reach satisfying conclusions.

I loved the initial intrigue and world-building of the first play-through, but maybe because the girls were so likeable and because I was rooting for them, the ending replay was quite disappointing.

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Obviously a lot of this is extremely subjective due to my preferences, but I hope that general feedback and thoughts are still helpful. I greatly respect the comment on committing to a particular area of kinks, and the understanding that only one thing turning someone off can negate all the positives. So this should all be taken with a grain of salt to an extent.

The mix of badass women, military tactics, political intrique and debauched smut is a delightfully niche combination of things I enjoy, and hope to see more of. This game was personally disappointing due to removing what made the previous ones unique, in that the intelligence loss is the one off-putting thing for me that overwrites the abundance of positives.

Really amazing work and fantastic writing. Take care!
 
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Spent way too long and too many words on a review that's probably going to get somebody to get mad at me because I don't like what they like, like last time. I was unsure whether to do spoilerfree or spoilered, and I went with a bad mix of both. I'm also to lazy to go back and edit. So here it is anyway:
Man you put into words exactly why I disliked this game completely. And you still recommended it, meanwhile I wouldn't recommend this at all, this feels like the reading version of walking through Blighttown in Dark Souls 1.

By the end of it I felt I just wasted my time and I should have chosen to do something else instead of playing this. It felt like a NTR story but the one getting cucked is me and the bull is the writer because he choose to make such weird writing choices.

It reminds you that sometimes tropes and formulas exist for a reason and differing from them doesn't always lead to a good story.
 

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[...] By the end of it I felt I just wasted my time and I should have chosen to do something else instead of playing this. It felt like a NTR story but the one getting cucked is me and the bull is the writer because he choose to make such weird writing choices.

It reminds you that sometimes tropes and formulas exist for a reason and differing from them doesn't always lead to a good story.
While the style of the previous games appeal more to me, it's hard to deny that this game mostly achieved what it set out to do.
As I wrote previously, while I believe the execution could've been better, the game actually follows an established formula. The fact that you feel "cucked" is no accident; the formula shows the story from the point of view of the cucked first. This is to contrast it to the "truth" on the second point of view (which is where I think this game falters a bit. The second POV is largely similar to the first).
 
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The formula shows the story from the point of view of the cucked first. This is to contrast it to the "truth" on the second point of view (which is where I think this game falters a bit. The second POV is largely similar to the first).
Yeah but this ain't a NTR story and that's where it feels weird.

What's the point of the two routes?
What's the point of the mystery plot?
Why not just go with it what it wants from the start, no need for two routes, just get to the point already!

It's such a worthless experiment.
As it is this feels like the porn game version of the The Witch (2015) or any other "OMG! SO DEEP!" movies, where the whole purpose of the thing is for the author and their fans to masturbate to how smart and quirky they are for enjoying something different, like "Oh, the point is for you to find it boring!" type of stuff that fucked-in-the-head redditors love to gobble up.

I feel like that family guy meme of Peter Griffin saying "It insist upon itself," which is supposed to be a nonsense joke but it somehow fits with this game in a way I thought not possible.

This game might be the Spec-Ops: The Line of porn games.
And I will remember it with the same bitterness I remember spec ops, I guess I'll give the author that, he made this game memorable, even if for all the wrong reasons.

Sorry for all the vague wording and stuff, this is the best way I can convey my frustration with this game. I'm not really a critic, I can't tell you specifically what I think is poorly written or not, I can only try to convey my feelings through words.
 
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This game might be the Spec-Ops: The Line of porn games.
And I will remember it with the same bitterness I remember spec ops, I guess I'll give the author that, he made this game memorable, even if for all the wrong reasons.
Invoking feelings in the audience is a sign of good art you know. :LOL:
I think it's just a case of wrong expectations (me included). You go in Spec-Ops: The Line expecting Call of Duty, you're going to get disappointed.
 
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Invoking feelings in the audience is a sign of good art you know. :LOL:
I think it's just a case of wrong expectations (me included). You go in Spec-Ops: The Line expecting Call of Duty, you're going to get disappointed.
A good half of the Spec Ops line plays perfectly into the COD tropes. 3 men special force, big bombastic action set pieces, superhuman feats, and a clear goal to stop a Hero that had fallen into tyranny. Only when you reach the town where the twist begin. Some players felt cheated out at that point, some praised it for the subversion.
 
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