VN Ren'Py Abandoned Vanqwar [Ep. 2] [Helmeted Smith]

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Helmeted Smith

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Is 'velvet way portal' just a hilarious colloquialism for 'vagina'?

'Cos that is fucking genius. This game is rad!
I like to put things that if taken out of context, they would sound like something else. This is one of those instances. I'm glad someone noticed it. LOL
 

monksims

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I haven't tried your game yet.

But I'd like to know if the character I was "controlling" is saying something my character normally wouldn't say. If this was a movie, I bet the voice would be different to the normal voice when the character was possessed aka not in control. More clearly you can make your audience to understand that something wasn't normal the better. :)
 

Helmeted Smith

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I haven't tried your game yet.

But I'd like to know if the character I was "controlling" is saying something my character normally wouldn't say. If this was a movie, I bet the voice would be different to the normal voice when the character was possessed aka not in control. More clearly you can make your audience to understand that something wasn't normal the better. :)
Thanks for pointing this out! Though, the case here is not actual possession, more of an overwhelming ambiguous feeling, but you make a good point. I will keep this in mind. At the moment when this drastic "change" happens, the music and artwork style changes (one image example is in the samples), but I think I'll change the writing style as well. I think a narrator's voice would be more suitable for these specific parts, as I'll have more room to describe what happens and better create that specific mood.
 
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Helmeted Smith

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weird, but not bad at all. something new. thx for share
Just read the first review. It's a nice thing finding out on a porn site that your vanilla game is categorized as "weird". Hahahah... Tho, I'm glad. I intended it that way for the first episodes (you should see what I have in store for the next one).
Don't worry, things will make sense eventually...

or would they?! *evil laugh*.
 
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grobulos

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Just read the first review. It's a nice thing finding out on a porn site that your vanilla game is categorized as "weird". Hahahah... Tho, I'm glad. I intended it that way for the first episodes (you should see what I have in store for the next one).
Don't worry, things will make sense eventually...

or would they?! *evil laugh*.
ah ok, thank you mate
 

ShirouryuuAkihito

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Woah
Hope this game will have a very lengthy gameplay and many animations in the future!
Love the art and the story! Good Job!
 

baklol

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sold would definitely keep an eye on this just a request for do not abandoned this unique storyline and renders are also nice
 

fregonard

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art and animations are good, the only thing that bothers me is the attitude and dialogue that the mc has
 

Helmeted Smith

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art and animations are good, the only thing that bothers me is the attitude and dialogue that the mc has
Hahah. He's having a hard time. He might have a bit of a dry humor, but deep down he's a good lad.
Don't worry, this journey will forge him into a man.
 

Helmeted Smith

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Hmmm... :unsure:

Strange... By i find only 1 Game from Helmeted Smith... :rolleyes:
Changelog wasn't updated. Sorry about that!

Ep. 2 (a bit longer than the first one)
- there are over 100 new renders
- different types of animations (about 1.5k worth of frames)
- 2 new characters introduced
- new gear for MC

Regarding the developer note...
That's a very outdated one taken from patreon. I plan on making multiple VN's, some shorter, some longer (VANQWAR is a longer one, and the first one I published). A second VN will be release at some point, but for the moment, I want to concentrate on Vanqwar.

Edit:
I could have formulated it better:
"I like to create visual novels with animations and stuff that makes people go "Oh. that's nice! or "Niceeee!" or "Uuuuu, thicccccc!" . And now working on my very first one, VANQWAR.
 
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datJoosua

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nice game so far
there are a few occasions where the wrong person is talking, but otherwise smooth game with good renders.
eg. in this situation the MC is asking for the Princess' Name if i am not mistaken
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and that worm is kinda cute
 
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