Ok. For 0.1 not bad.
I hate to writing reviews for 0.1 versions, so I comment only:
+: Graphics are great. Story is ok. I liked the open dyslexic fonts. GUI is nice. For now it's just a KN not VN but that's ok since it's 0.1.
-: The tags are WRONG. We use tags not as a promise of what there will be in the future but for only for what there's already. Sex content is low. I mean, you make an adult themed game and the curvy protagonist says that she's going to take a shower. GIVE US THE NUDE SCENE DUDE. Why? Why? Why? Anyway, later there's a BJ scene. Nice but poor also.
English is not perfect but I guess I can live with it.
In conclusion, not bad for a 0.1. It has potential, there's talent and is wrapped up nicely.
But it left me with a slight bad taste maybe for the tags (Maybe not dev's fault) and the 0.5 GB zip file which wasn't much after all.
Anyway, not bad. Good luck!