Ren'Py Abandoned Vis [v2.0] [Mad King Games]

[DirtyMario]

I am saying that I will guide my creativity so that we can enjoy the game. I don't know if I can place a poll here.

Don't do this, don't even think about it. You'll lose some people and you'll gain some people.
Never change your creative vision just to appeal to a certain audience. It's not worth compromising your artistic integrity for it.

 

[Endrju]

Hi mate,

I am sorry to read this.

What was I thinking?!
Well for the sex scene (moth.), I didn't throw the sex scene just on the game, to have them. The sex scenes were the result of the things she did in the previous version.
When I started to put in place the scenario for the game I had in mind some character definition for each one. For Morgana, for example, she is part of the elite in these games. With VIS origins, you will see the history of her. I have in my mind a powerful woman who knows what she wants. She is not the type of women, like in other games, that has no power over her but a woman that knows what it wants. What if I tell you that maybe she is the one that will corrupt?

Regarding Morrigan hair. It was a little experiment for me because I didn't want a look that would stick with her 'till the end. That doesn't mean that I will change the looks like a fanatic. No. I simply tried to experiment and exit the comfort zone. If I am to be blamed that I didn't take the safe road, then by all means.
The hairstyle was only for this release. It was a mark in time and something different.

In the end, I would like to say that it could be very simple for me to stand on a common version of the game, not to risk with some changes and not to try and discover new things, but that is not me.
The last point, I would like to say that any "critique" is like a guideline to see the quality of the game. So let's not talk about disappointment when the game is only at its third release.

so let me ask you this, is the mother situation avoidable? like in last update with the dagger? and let that be you answer about me being disappointed or not.
Mother figure in that game till v0.3 was the most perfect made character to date, i was in love with her, even more than with the sisters and i think very high of them. Now though..

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Just fallow your own rules, just give ppl choice like you did before and everything else will be alright, dont just trow ideas in and force ppl to watch it. Believe me i know it is much more work but i cant imagine to play the game that at one time give me a choice and in another situation don't, just let me watch stuff i hate.

it is salvageable, just add some choices and one thing DON'T ever let anyone made you do anything. dont let yourself get force into changing the idea or the goal. im not saying that and never will because than ppl are losing the trust in the dev, just add stuff, add choices so we can ALL like you said

so that we can enjoy the game..

 

[Goronthil]

I am saying that I will guide my creativity so that we can enjoy the game. I don't know if I can place a poll here.

I'm not sure a poll is possible here, but I have one question : what is the problem with Morgana part ? Is there a bug or some bad render ? Why does it have to change ? (I don't really understand but it seems important for some people so I'm curious ^^).

Howeover, I really like this game the render, the sounds and music, and the story (a very good background story and the storyline is really enjoyable) Keep going I hope the next update will be good too. (And I hope we will know why Morrigan was furious against the MC too !)

Good job it's a great game

 

[Deleted member 416612]

I am sorry... but I've lost faith in you... and I even defended ME3 color-coded ending.

Sorry to hear that mate but I think it's a little harsh to talk like that after one release that you didn't like it. I said that I was experimenting and the whole idea of this post and the ones from Patreon is to offer feedback regarding what the developer creates.

One other thing. When the game will get bigger in content, it will be nearly impossible not to upset someone. The difference is that the person who would believe in the project will not blame the developer or the game for the things that go wrong. Instead, they will offer feedback and stay alongside to see if something changes.

 

[Deleted member 416612]

so let me ask you this, is the mother situation avoidable? like in last update with the dagger? and let that be you answer about me being disappointed or not.
Mother figure in that game till v0.3 was the most perfect made character to date, i was in love with her, even more than with the sisters and i think very high of them. Now though..

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Just fallow your own rules, just give ppl choice like you did before and everything else will be alright, dont just trow ideas in and force ppl to watch it. Believe me i know it is much more work but i cant imagine to play the game that at one time give me a choice and in another situation don't, just let my watch stuff i hate.

it is salvageable, just add some choices and one thing DON'T ever let anyone made you do anything. dont let yourself get force into changing the idea or the goal. im not saying that and never will because than ppl are losing the trust in the dev, just add stuff, add choices so we can ALL like you said

I can add another route.

 

[DirtyMario]

... and I even defended ME3 color-coded ending.

Wait wait wait ... you did WHAT!?

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

Sorry to hear that mate but I think it's a little harsh to talk like that after one release that you didn't like it. I said that I was experimenting and the whole idea of this post and the ones from Patreon is to offer feedback regarding what the developer creates.

One other thing. When the game will get bigger in content, it will be nearly impossible not to upset someone. The difference is that the person who would believe in the project will not blame the developer or the game for the things that go wrong. Instead, they will offer feedback and stay alongside to see if something changes.

you were the chosen one. you could've brought the VN genre to heights never seen before, you could've been the Prometheus of adult games, but instead of the fire you brought us plague, disease, famine and war. I'm not upset, I feel decieved, betrayed, backstabbed and pushed into the tartarus.
Arl Howe, I wish you a good day, but I won't play any of your games

 

[Deleted member 416612]

you were the chosen one. you could've brought the VN genre to heights never seen before, you could've been the Prometheus of adult games, but instead of the fire you brought us plague, disease, famine and war. I'm not upset, I feel decieved, betrayed, backstabbed and pushed into the tartarus.
Arl Howe, I wish you a good day, but I won't play any of your games

We could solve this out while drinking Guinness and playing rock scissors with axes. Just saying

 

[Endrju]

I can add another route.

i wont say no to that, jut keep to your own rules. You offered the choices so stick to it, keep them simple but dont give up on them and on us.

One other thing. When the game will get bigger in content, it will be nearly impossible not to upset someone. The difference is that the person who would believe in the project will not blame the developer or the game for the things that go wrong. Instead, they will offer feedback and stay alongside to see if something changes.

yes it will get bigger that's why you need to keep it simple now and never change your idea\goal about it, it all come's back to the choice. BUT never forget there are so many games, so many devs are doing so many weird thing that ppl are just tired, so even one little weird signal is enough for ppl to loose interest. You approach to mother and sisters was very refreshing, so stick to it and dont let anyone to dictate you how to do things. stick to your own rules and ideas.
and little tip because i loved your game, if you will loose your way, look again at first update. it was perfect. and the dagger situation just killed it.

 

[RN83]

Well i can see why the Morgana scene played out the way it did, and i dont really have a problem with it, however the fact that she is clearly a love interest for the MC and she is involved with someone who is not the MC was allways going to upset some people.
Maybe a choice to accept or reject the Farther would have been an idea, where rejecting him ends with a solo masturbation scene while thinking of the MC, and accepting him plays out as it did.
Anyway, i'm still enjoying it and look forward to the next update APD13.

 

[Deleted member 416612]

you were the chosen one. you could've brought the VN genre to heights never seen before, you could've been the Prometheus of adult games, but instead of the fire you brought us plague, disease, famine and war. I'm not upset, I feel decieved, betrayed, backstabbed and pushed into the tartarus.
Arl Howe, I wish you a good day, but I won't play any of your games

Thank you for your rating update.

 

[Deleted member 416612]

I feel like Kim Kardashian of this forum. I should start my own tv show ))

 

[DirtyMario]

I feel like Kim Kardashian of this forum. I should start my own tv show ))

You'd have to get dicked by a random irrelevant rapper first.

 

[Jon_Sleeper]

you were the chosen one. you could've brought the VN genre to heights never seen before, you could've been the Prometheus of adult games, but instead of the fire you brought us plague, disease, famine and war. I'm not upset, I feel decieved, betrayed, backstabbed and pushed into the tartarus.
Arl Howe, I wish you a good day, but I won't play any of your games

Dude, chill for a bit. I usually like your posts but you are getting way too upset over this.

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

Dude, chill for a bit. I usually like your posts but you are getting way too upset over this.

I amchill... that's the filtered comment

 

[Ying Ko]

I honestly thought that me seeing that Morgana sex scene was due to a coding error. You had established a convention of choice and consequence, and that scene did not fit with the choices I had made. I had chosen the warm and loving options, yet she stated that M.C. had been cold and distant, I had avoided the torturer oral scene that would have increased her lust, yet she seemed pretty lusty towards the deeply unpleasant and abusive king.

 

[Deleted member 416612]

I honestly thought that me seeing that Morgana sex scene was due to a coding error. You had established a convention of choice and consequence, and that scene did not fit with the choices I had made. I had chosen the warm and loving options, yet she stated that M.C. had been cold and distant, I had avoided the torturer oral scene that would have increased her lust, yet she seemed pretty lusty towards the deeply unpleasant and abusive king.

I will a add two options to choose from

 

[King Monkey Mon]

Hi mate,

I am sorry to read this.

What was I thinking?!
Well for the sex scene (moth.), I didn't throw the sex scene just on the game, to have them. The sex scenes were the result of the things she did in the previous version.
When I started to put in place the scenario for the game I had in mind some character definition for each one. For Morgana, for example, she is part of the elite in these games. With VIS origins, you will see the history of her. I have in my mind a powerful woman who knows what she wants. She is not the type of women, like in other games, that has no power over her but a woman that knows what it wants. What if I tell you that maybe she is the one that will corrupt?

Regarding Morrigan hair. It was a little experiment for me because I didn't want a look that would stick with her 'till the end. That doesn't mean that I will change the looks like a fanatic. No. I simply tried to experiment and exit the comfort zone. If I am to be blamed that I didn't take the safe road, then by all means.
The hairstyle was only for this release. It was a mark in time and something different.

In the end, I would like to say that it could be very simple for me to stand on a common version of the game, not to risk with some changes and not to try and discover new things, but that is not me.
The last point, I would like to say that any "critique" is like a guideline to see the quality of the game. So let's not talk about disappointment when the game is only at its third release.

@Eerie Entity
im pretty sure the most people are upset that the mom seemed to have her personality changed like from a sweet caring mom to a nympho

as for me i didnt mind it still i dont think the sex scene was needed if she didnt want to get fucked in the first place

i didnt mind the whole last scene or the Morgan hair change one of the reasons was i wasnt that invested in this game as my brothers were and because im a proud pirate im going to continue playing the game since i enjoy music in games and medieval settings in porn games are a rarity

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

Everything bad I said about Vis came out of my fear of something bad happening to Morrigan. If you don't have an extreme twin sister fetish you can safely play this game

 

[King Monkey Mon]

Everything bad I said about Vis came out of my fear of something bad happening to Morrigan. If you don't have an extreme twin sister fetish you can safely play this game

eh well i didnt mind anything wrong with the game but you did kinda flip out over a fictional character of a games third update that takes places in the medieval times

making that review that you made probably wasnt the best choice to base it on your feelings of the update

but if this game goes into NTR territory ill drop it after i have 10 + games ive tried out to look forward for updates