- Feb 2, 2018
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Hi mate,Agreed, while most of the texts are ok, nice or even interesting, some of them in last 2 updates specifically feels like they were made in a hurry, just to put something there: sometimes illogical, like the example with tunic; sometimes just too simple, like in Dreams Of Desire type of games with the fucking BJ/HJ/FJ/BOOBJ etc. choices with no good writing to support the scene.
APD13 i sincerely hope you'd be able to find some time and enthusiasm to work more on those texts and to make it equally good throughout the whole game.
p.s. Yeah, the way MC acts(well actually he doesn't) is really becoming a bit irritating, also Ava is just a filler to get the other girls, as for me.
p.p.s. I love music in this game!
Related to the tunic, it was my mistake because I had the impression that in the render the mc had a tunic. When I do the development, usually writing the script is way ahead of the renders. Probably I was tired and I made a mistake. I will do the render again, with the tunic.
Cheers,
Mad King