VN Ren'Py Abandoned Watching My Wife [v0.6.1] [Illegible Mink]

[Illegible Mink]

Damn, old saves not working on my game, kinda have to play from the begining again

I know it's a pain - but the game is still developing, so I sometimes need to make changes. It's just the nature of the beast.

 

[Illegible Mink]

So, just a question from a storywriting perspective? Why did wifey cheat with Dominic? That didn't make much sense to me. The entire buildup is her lusting after Mark, she even kind of gets with him in the club but then goes with Dom? I feel it would have made more sense for her to get picked up by Mark and go with him.

Well - Mark will certainly happen. I just wanted to show what she felt was acceptable - and I suppose it betrays a certain lack of confidence which she hides in normal life. Her experiences in youth shaped her to feel worthless and unloved - but she got recognition and attention from those who took advantage of her. This hang up has followed her into adult life - so she is realising that she's attractive, and attracted, to men who'll give her that validation. She just submerged it until now, when she sees her best years are behind her.

 

[Lord Ashram]

I'm having the same issue with my saves.
Lord Ashram do you have any ideas/suggestions? My saves are from 0.6.0 with your mod installed and I am getting this when trying to load them into 0.6.1 with your mod installed. Ignore sends you into starting a new game and rollback closes the game after you click it about 2 times.
Is there anything to be done besides starting fresh? Thx

Try loading your old saves into 0.6.0 then go back at least a few lines of dialogue and resave there and see if you can then open your new saves in 0.6.1. I tested several saves from both 0.6.0 and 0.5.2 without issue and all those saves are from my mod.

 

[Illegible Mink]

This novel is weird, because many things for me dont make sense, but at the same time, it makes sense that it doesnt make sense. So overall, I enjoyed.

I've only played the infidelity route. I choose the worst posible options to fuck up the relationship. I would say I would love a "self respect" option from the MC version, because considering you have to play it in first person, playing the weird needy guy is a bit ackward, you are often offered options and you feel like "none of those...", or "that is going to end SO bad and is going to be SO embarrasing..." like the huge dildo buy or watching porn toguether. I felt like: "I know where this is going, its going to be embarrasing and painful, Im fighting not to skip this part...", that was my feeling hehe.

Second, she is acting like shit, lacking self awareness. I mean, a guy grabs he in the air in the middle of the club, grop her vagina, grabs her boobs, and she is annoyed because his husband infront of the scene doesn't like it, while she just said 3 thoughts before she would love him to be more active with self respect? That non-sense, that lack of anger management, that projection of guilt, that incongruence, IS CONGRUENT considering she is mentally a total mess going down and collapsing her whole life project (predictable slut sex at the office would end up destroying both home and work environments). And that is what I like of the novel, the fact that humans are a mess, and they are both acting like a complete incongruent mess.

The part I dislike is that you had gone too far with the guys that are interested in her. You picked tall captivating great body guys with 10 inch FAT cocks interested in a "non slim not too fat" "non gorgeous but beautiful" sexy milf. For guys like that, I would expect her to be just a very casual fun, and kicked out or blackmailed into some "games". Otherwise, you are using cheap tricks in writting comparing the average husband with the "lord of club" guy too interested in an aging milf in her very last days before hard hitting the wall.

I could buy that dominic was down for a quick fuck before he was leaving, and Mark is just having some fun with his slut married friend guessing he has an agenda. Otherwise, its too much for her, cheap. The milf myth is for nerds at home, real man with consistent results in clubs, dont buy that much into porn induced fetiches and wouldnt settle for a C prize when they can opt for A game, unless its side fun.

I'm guessing Dominic will disappear, Mark will use her and then kick her out hurting her, and once she fuck 2 or 3 at work she finds herself treated with no respect as a cheap slut considering how things are aligning, and that will make the novel interesting, because that gives sense to her young flashback and how is she going to react. Just please, tell me its not "she left her creepy husband and her life was just fucking every single alpha guy around all drooling and kneeling at her", please. Oh! and also a teenager out of nowhere blackmails her with a phone picture, and she has backyard sex with a toddler after some suncreen lotion...Oh! and the "hobo cum quota"! Please, keep it different.

A hell of a review - and thanks for taking an interest in the game, and writing your views so eloquently. Yes, there are some elements which are perhaps a little fast - but tbh, we've spent 2 years getting here, so progress was necessary. I am indeed going for the messed up vibe (hence the flashback) - but rest assured, the 'must avoid' list will be avoided - I've no interest in it. I'm glad that overall you liked it. Sorry about the cocks though.

 

[Lucifer morning star 666]

this game is shouting NTR and there is no tag

 

[Avaron1974]

this game is shouting NTR and there is no tag

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[hakarlman]

Watching my wife...

- Doing the laundry.
- Going to work.
- Eating dinner.
- Breathing.

The game's title is a huge lie, like that one game Project Hot Wife; turns out in that game, the heater was broken and stayed on too long, then the game was abandoned.

 

[L0b0ts]

So, just a question from a storywriting perspective? Why did wifey cheat with Dominic? That didn't make much sense to me. The entire buildup is her lusting after Mark, she even kind of gets with him in the club but then goes with Dom? I feel it would have made more sense for her to get picked up by Mark and go with him.

That's getting really technical, she has full faith in her husband but than it all unravels all because of him, I use the surname Cuck and I can't stop ROLF when his students call him Mr Cuck, it's hilarious, and it's hilarious when she tells him about the credit card fiasco. I can see why she went with Dominic, maybe normally she wouldn't have but due to her husbands actions and she already knows she has Mark in her pocket, for future encounters, so to her it's all about the chase and feeling desired and getting off sexually. Really good game, really going places, the dancefloor scene is really good when she gets kinky with Dominic and Mr Cuck goes insane.

 

[CutieLvr]

Try loading your old saves into 0.6.0 then go back at least a few lines of dialogue and resave there and see if you can then open your new saves in 0.6.1. I tested several saves from both 0.6.0 and 0.5.2 without issue and all those saves are from my mod.

Kudos, Lord Ashram, your mod is super excellent. I am a huge fan of your work. Thank you.

 

[CutieLvr]

We all like what we like. I reckon though that she's going to be a naughty girl - and I also reckon she likes it on the rougher side

The apple never falls too far from the tree. Like mother, like daughter, especially if you can sneak peeks at mom and boyfriends doing the nasty when you are a young girl. Watch and learn, darling.

 

[CutieLvr]

Mr. Mink, I just finished playing the Cheating Path in its entirity again, (I love this game so much), but, I'm a little confused, the office party that wifey has been invited to, I did not come across. Is it in the game yet? What path is it in? In the CP, I had Love and Respect as low as I could possible get them.

 

[Kukipett]

This novel is weird, because many things for me dont make sense, but at the same time, it makes sense that it doesnt make sense. So overall, I enjoyed.

I've only played the infidelity route. I choose the worst posible options to fuck up the relationship. I would say I would love a "self respect" option from the MC version, because considering you have to play it in first person, playing the weird needy guy is a bit ackward, you are often offered options and you feel like "none of those...", or "that is going to end SO bad and is going to be SO embarrasing..." like the huge dildo buy or watching porn toguether. I felt like: "I know where this is going, its going to be embarrasing and painful, Im fighting not to skip this part...", that was my feeling hehe.

Second, she is acting like shit, lacking self awareness. I mean, a guy grabs he in the air in the middle of the club, grop her vagina, grabs her boobs, and she is annoyed because his husband infront of the scene doesn't like it, while she just said 3 thoughts before she would love him to be more active with self respect? That non-sense, that lack of anger management, that projection of guilt, that incongruence, IS CONGRUENT considering she is mentally a total mess going down and collapsing her whole life project (predictable slut sex at the office would end up destroying both home and work environments). And that is what I like of the novel, the fact that humans are a mess, and they are both acting like a complete incongruent mess.

The part I dislike is that you had gone too far with the guys that are interested in her. You picked tall captivating great body guys with 10 inch FAT cocks interested in a "non slim not too fat" "non gorgeous but beautiful" sexy milf. For guys like that, I would expect her to be just a very casual fun, and kicked out or blackmailed into some "games". Otherwise, you are using cheap tricks in writting comparing the average husband with the "lord of club" guy too interested in an aging milf in her very last days before hard hitting the wall.

I could buy that dominic was down for a quick fuck before he was leaving, and Mark is just having some fun with his slut married friend guessing he has an agenda. Otherwise, its too much for her, cheap. The milf myth is for nerds at home, real man with consistent results in clubs, dont buy that much into porn induced fetiches and wouldnt settle for a C prize when they can opt for A game, unless its side fun.

I'm guessing Dominic will disappear, Mark will use her and then kick her out hurting her, and once she fuck 2 or 3 at work she finds herself treated with no respect as a cheap slut considering how things are aligning, and that will make the novel interesting, because that gives sense to her young flashback and how is she going to react. Just please, tell me its not "she left her creepy husband and her life was just fucking every single alpha guy around all drooling and kneeling at her", please. Oh! and also a teenager out of nowhere blackmails her with a phone picture, and she has backyard sex with a toddler after some suncreen lotion...Oh! and the "hobo cum quota"! Please, keep it different.

The main problem with those VNs it's that they offer choices or paths. It may seem a nice thing to do and fun to play, but in fact it mostly leads to incoherencies, weird situations, protagonists who act stupid and such.
The reason is simple, to code such a game is a pain in the ass, the more choices you get the more exponential the different sitations are.
So depending on your choices you can get a situation that doesn't make sense, a character who doesn't react properly, a scene that doesn't match with your previous choices and so on.
If you just want a porn game with a compilation of fuck scenes and you don't care too much about realism and good story telling it's ok but if you want a really good strong story you are forced to make a lot of things canon and just make some cosmetic choices that don't impact on the story.
Si in this specific VN i also have noticed that depending on your choices the story works well, if you choose the full cuckhold path it's great but if you ar not into this and try to do the opposite you are fucked!!

 

[Oenomeaus]

exist a walkthrough?

 

[Scoooter22]

Try loading your old saves into 0.6.0 then go back at least a few lines of dialogue and resave there and see if you can then open your new saves in 0.6.1. I tested several saves from both 0.6.0 and 0.5.2 without issue and all those saves are from my mod.

Tried that yesterday with going back just a few lines, went back now and scrolled back as far as the game would allow me, both instances didn't work.

 

[Illegible Mink]

Big cocks are not the problem, they are part of life, Im pretty hung hehe. I also understand big ones add some drama, sexual tension, its a fact that women preffer them big and they look better in camera.

What I hate is when everyone has a 10 inch cock, they are supposed to be scarce, so too much "cockflation" burns the cliché pretty FAST, and the text becomes boring "oh, its opening me! omg, I'm so stretched!" again and again and again...

Also they become a cheap writting trick when uninteresting characters whose only value is a big cock are forced into the story. That is not Dominic's situation, he is a character with personality. Mark, he is kind of a walking cock so far, but you hinted a few interesting personality traits, and it also looks like it's going to become dark because I don't buy his interest for a fraction of a second. I bet Mark has an agenda, and once he is done with her she will be kicked out, and when she realises, she will be badly hurt and full of remorse.

The darker the better

 

[Illegible Mink]

Watching my wife...

- Doing the laundry.
- Going to work.
- Eating dinner.
- Breathing.

The game's title is a huge lie, like that one game Project Hot Wife; turns out in that game, the heater was broken and stayed on too long, then the game was abandoned.

Yep - there's been two years of shopping. laundry and eating. So personally I think it a pretty truthful representation of normal life. I was thinking of changing the title to 'Watching my Wife do Household Tasks'.

 

[Illegible Mink]

That's getting really technical, she has full faith in her husband but than it all unravels all because of him, I use the surname Cuck and I can't stop ROLF when his students call him Mr Cuck, it's hilarious, and it's hilarious when she tells him about the credit card fiasco. I can see why she went with Dominic, maybe normally she wouldn't have but due to her husbands actions and she already knows she has Mark in her pocket, for future encounters, so to her it's all about the chase and feeling desired and getting off sexually. Really good game, really going places, the dancefloor scene is really good when she gets kinky with Dominic and Mr Cuck goes insane.

Yep - her liaison with Mark was interrupted too - so perhaps it set off a naughty mindset. She wouldn't have done anything if she hadn't met him outside the bar, but could then act without retribution as she'd already said she was going to Heather's.

 

[Illegible Mink]

The apple never falls too far from the tree. Like mother, like daughter, especially if you can sneak peeks at mom and boyfriends doing the nasty when you are a young girl. Watch and learn, darling.

Yep - it's coming back to haunt her.

 

[Illegible Mink]

Mr. Mink, I just finished playing the Cheating Path in its entirity again, (I love this game so much), but, I'm a little confused, the office party that wifey has been invited to, I did not come across. Is it in the game yet? What path is it in? In the CP, I had Love and Respect as low as I could possible get them.

It's not yet - there's some stuff to do at work first in 7.0 (which I'm working on now).

 

[Illegible Mink]

The main problem with those VNs it's that they offer choices or paths. It may seem a nice thing to do and fun to play, but in fact it mostly leads to incoherencies, weird situations, protagonists who act stupid and such.
The reason is simple, to code such a game is a pain in the ass, the more choices you get the more exponential the different sitations are.
So depending on your choices you can get a situation that doesn't make sense, a character who doesn't react properly, a scene that doesn't match with your previous choices and so on.
If you just want a porn game with a compilation of fuck scenes and you don't care too much about realism and good story telling it's ok but if you want a really good strong story you are forced to make a lot of things canon and just make some cosmetic choices that don't impact on the story.
Si in this specific VN i also have noticed that depending on your choices the story works well, if you choose the full cuckhold path it's great but if you ar not into this and try to do the opposite you are fucked!!

It is bloody difficult to tie all the loose ends together - but you always have to write in something in case the player doesn't want wifey to cheat, even though they're on the Cheat route etc Naturally, more time goes into fulfilling the kink chosen as, being a single operator, I've got to prioritise it.