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Thanks for your notes and comments. I really appreciate this and I will go back in and fix stuff. Things like this can easily slip in when you've a tight deadline to hit. Cheers for the kind words. Re Debbie - yeah, I'm not sure how much of a happy ending there's going to be there .Some routing issues in my infidelity playthrough so far. The second time MC is watching porn on the computer (after she calls him and talks about the lost credit card being used in the clothing store), MC is watching BBC videos and thinks that he needs to get the wife to watch this stuff. I don't think that fits the infidelity route. The MC should not be consciously encouraging the wife to take other cocks. It needs to be done inadvertently through his actions. Watching the video itself is not the problem. Even getting some confused boner from it is ok. Infidelity path is basically "mystery NTR" and this type of story loses steam the moment the MC accepts that he is a cuck. The reveal generally happens at the very end. Anyways, going further in the game, it doesn't seem like it will be a recurring problem. I think the part about showing the BBC porn to his wife was just misplaced.
After that, during the wife POV starting from the weekend, she thinks about the sex after their date being good when she is showering. The problem is that I did go for the after date sex.
When wife comes home late, you can question her about it, but during her POV, it treats it like you didn't question her.
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This was very impressive. The writing is excellent. The dialogue exchanges and the way people act is very realistic. The girls are extremely hot. The wife is not as hot as the side girls, but that is for sure intentional. She isn't ugly though, and it plays nicely into the plot.
I'm still very curious what messing around with Debbie will lead to. The likely outcome will just be that the MC will cheat and leave some hints that lead to the wife suspecting him or even finding out for sure. That would obvious give her casus belli to cheat, if she hasn't done so already. The NTR fan part of me kind of hopes for the funny outcome with Debbie where she finally is about to bang MC after all that anticipation, but ends up disappointed by his small cock and subpar performance. Perhaps mirroring the wife's high love low respect path where Debbie is still in love/infatuated with the MC, but starts to see him as a beta male lol. Then she could meet some other male and cheat on the MC or something. That's a bit convoluted so I don't think it will go that way though. Just want to see what the dev cooks up.