Hello, carnalcardinal, I just finished playing version 0.2, and wanted to offer some suggestions. Is there a way for you to reposition your characters, especially when Mark and Serafina are having their talk? At various times during their talk, they appear to be standing directly in front of Ella, so close that they look like they're stepping on her foot and she's not reacting. If she's meant to overhear them, I'd move her to another part of the room or have her standing further in the back, so it doesn't look like anyone's standing on her foot. During Ella's reward scene, the different angles create the illusion that the bed is rotating because the other bed remains horizontal. I'd stick to renders where the bed is only horizontal. If you were to offer a strictly first person pov of that scene, you can exclude the other bed and just offer a glimpse of any furniture or furnishings behind her.