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I'm gonna be a bit harsh sounding and I'm not blind to that...
But if it took 1500 hours to make just this? I have no hope in this ever being in a state of being good any time soon. The art is fine enough if a bit disappointing. I came here to see/read an erotic horror VN and got a barely interesting paranoid lunatic who apparently is color blind and has bad taste in women.
Yeah, there's some hint hint nudge nudge about him having murdered some twat or something but who cares? We have what looks to be an animated corpse whos blue and bones with skin on them who doesn't at all fit the theme... barely has anything interesting sex wise and just sounds like a forced innocence plug for the PC to " " " Take advantage of. " " "
Oh no, the light blue girl who looks like the anorexic little sister of the chick from the ring is being taken advantage of by a color blind man with a gun and a disposition for absolutely stupid levels of fake paranoia.
I wanted to see a guy get raped by an evil entity taking the shape of a woman. The nightmare in the start put this on a good note but then the story fucked right off and left me with a bland power fantasy.
Okay seriously, how does he not notice or question or make a bigger deal about her being FUCKING BLUE...? Like it isn't just lighting or anything she is a fucking smurf. This wouldn't' matter if she was like a hallucination he questions or freaks out about seeing but he makes 0 effort to give a single fuck about it and it sucks. It just sucks.
This sucks. I'm disappointed. I'm GLAD I didn't pay for it. From the screenshots it looked like exactly what I wanted, but like me if you saw those and thought, "Erotic horror VN?! Sounds amazing!" then you best move on because it's going to disappoint you with barely a blowjob scene with an anorexic smurf that is about 1/3 as good as the preview image since that FRAME of animation shows for less than a second one time and then fucks right off.
This left me actually a bit pissed off because I went in to this feeling giddy and horny and left it feeling annoyed and let down.
I'm sure a lot of actual work went in to this but it's just not good enough.
But if it took 1500 hours to make just this? I have no hope in this ever being in a state of being good any time soon. The art is fine enough if a bit disappointing. I came here to see/read an erotic horror VN and got a barely interesting paranoid lunatic who apparently is color blind and has bad taste in women.
Yeah, there's some hint hint nudge nudge about him having murdered some twat or something but who cares? We have what looks to be an animated corpse whos blue and bones with skin on them who doesn't at all fit the theme... barely has anything interesting sex wise and just sounds like a forced innocence plug for the PC to " " " Take advantage of. " " "
Oh no, the light blue girl who looks like the anorexic little sister of the chick from the ring is being taken advantage of by a color blind man with a gun and a disposition for absolutely stupid levels of fake paranoia.
I wanted to see a guy get raped by an evil entity taking the shape of a woman. The nightmare in the start put this on a good note but then the story fucked right off and left me with a bland power fantasy.
Okay seriously, how does he not notice or question or make a bigger deal about her being FUCKING BLUE...? Like it isn't just lighting or anything she is a fucking smurf. This wouldn't' matter if she was like a hallucination he questions or freaks out about seeing but he makes 0 effort to give a single fuck about it and it sucks. It just sucks.
This sucks. I'm disappointed. I'm GLAD I didn't pay for it. From the screenshots it looked like exactly what I wanted, but like me if you saw those and thought, "Erotic horror VN?! Sounds amazing!" then you best move on because it's going to disappoint you with barely a blowjob scene with an anorexic smurf that is about 1/3 as good as the preview image since that FRAME of animation shows for less than a second one time and then fucks right off.
This left me actually a bit pissed off because I went in to this feeling giddy and horny and left it feeling annoyed and let down.
I'm sure a lot of actual work went in to this but it's just not good enough.
Wait, so is this a finished chapter and more chapters are going to be released (sort've like telltales) or will the game itself just be updated with new chapters?
- Mar 6, 2018
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The writing is fairly abysmal and long-winded enough to be irritating. Thanks for sharing anyway.
Also watch out for that jump scare thunder after the opening sex scene. It's an eardrum popper.
Also watch out for that jump scare thunder after the opening sex scene. It's an eardrum popper.
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i opened the game and the girl says that i will play the game in october 31, after that a black screen appear and nothingh else happend, what am i doing wrong?
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Reminds me of this
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Patreon annd also F95 forbid Underage content (there are some exceptions on f95, though). So the developers can bypass that by just mention somewhere that all the sexual active characters are adults. You can mostly find it at the beginning of the game so that you can think of an age you want.
I'm pretty sure otherwise the girl in this game could be 16 or maybe 15.
They can do this, because there actually exist woman that are 18 or older but look like an average 15 year old girl. Sometimes it's hard to tell. There is also porn with such women, for people that are into that.
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The name is Zom Zom Biyori.
Can't find who wrote/draw it.
- Jul 25, 2018
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But Loli is one of the best tags.
But thanks for your answer.
Name is "Zom Zom Biyori (Towako 2)" from the artist "BeNantoka"
You can find it on nhentai.
Thanks, also found the name, but you were faster
I'm totaly at your side. But t's a dangerous issue and patreon don't wants to scare potential devs/customers. I'm sure many complained because of Loli content and that's why patreon forbid it.But Loli is one of the best tags.
But thanks for your answer.
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Not sure why people are beating on the writing, I actually found it to be quite engaging...
The atmosphere in this game is very well done. And the balance of horror and eroticism was pretty nice, especially in that early scene.
As far as erotic games go, I generally hate being the bad guy, but the main character was written well enough that I could actually identify with him, at least to some degree, most of the time. Was still hard watching him being mean to the girl (and realizing what he apparently might have done to others), and don't get me wrong, I'm not exactly on his side - I mostly stuck around to watch how he gets killed by the creepy girl. But he still felt human and understandable enough to follow as a protagonist, even if I'm rooting for his downfall...
Overall I think this is a very nice first chapter. Might not be for me in terms of kinky stuff (though I might enjoy it when the MC gets his comeuppance, if there will be a horror/erotic scene like that)... But the atmosphere I felt was worth a praise, good use of music, nice tense moments and good general ambiance. Was worth a read.
The atmosphere in this game is very well done. And the balance of horror and eroticism was pretty nice, especially in that early scene.
As far as erotic games go, I generally hate being the bad guy, but the main character was written well enough that I could actually identify with him, at least to some degree, most of the time. Was still hard watching him being mean to the girl (and realizing what he apparently might have done to others), and don't get me wrong, I'm not exactly on his side - I mostly stuck around to watch how he gets killed by the creepy girl. But he still felt human and understandable enough to follow as a protagonist, even if I'm rooting for his downfall...
Overall I think this is a very nice first chapter. Might not be for me in terms of kinky stuff (though I might enjoy it when the MC gets his comeuppance, if there will be a horror/erotic scene like that)... But the atmosphere I felt was worth a praise, good use of music, nice tense moments and good general ambiance. Was worth a read.
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