I liked the game, good start with a gradual development of plot and characters [Though putting up with the Mom's constant nagging was a bit annoying]
[I like this MC more than RHC's though]
A question: Will the next update include the robbers scene? Also, I don't know if only I noticed it but the last gallery scene with Cynthia & MC isn't part of the 0.01 version. [I played that part from the gallery after completing the version]
Are you planning any different clothing styles for the characters like in RHC? Have you considered trying animations maybe? [You could experiment with them so that it gives a greater stimulus when playing, you could maybe even use it in a game you create in the future]
[I hope you're having some help with editing the mistakes in the game like with RHC]
Anyways best of luck with this game & I'll look forward to more in the future updates