I love this game I really do....
My issue is this,
1) to many, "if's", "or's" and "but's". By the very nature of sub, for acouple people, they will "submit" to multi - paths.
2) Even with NTR turned off you still have to navigate the outcomes. Why bother turning it off if the major outcome of "breakup" is still there? At that point your just saying a LI is off the table in terms of others but the main thing is still there.
3) after this amount of time, and yes I am taking a re-work into account, there should be more with.....at the very least Katie. Dana I figured would be a slower burn since she is dating and the whole need to corrupt, but Katie should be further along by now. Not to mention Lieia. Who by the story was always closest to the MC so the end scene of the date should have been expanded and something actually happen.
My thing is this, if you want to slow burn then do it the right way. The mom, is a slow burn. Katie, is a slow burn given the history. However the twin isn't, and depending on how you view what you have ready bot Zoey and Dana ( given how you see corruption) could be non- slow burns. I am just saying this as my opinion.