That's fair.
One of my frustrations with SG has more to do with pacing. And I'm not trying to be funny, but it's too fast for me. Nika hasn't really left the house or socialized for years, but then suddenly turns into a social butterfly. I wanted to see more of this depression explored. Making plans but not showing up, finding excuses to just stay home. And maybe, if your points with an LI are high enough, they'll get worried and come to find him.
Maybe I missed something, but it didn't seem like Nika paid a price for (what I see as) him overextending himself that way.
I can understand that - I think there's a need for the consequences of the panic attacks to hit home - we saw a bit of that in Ch5. THe way that was done was fantastic. But it should as easily happen while at training, or at Nick's, or being alone with Nia (whom he already finds exhausting) etc. I hope that the techniques Ocean uses to describe such things make their way into WiaB - regardless of whether anyone has the same direct mental problems, close ups of dilated eyes in the eventual prison scenes, false colours for mood swings etc. Leaching the colours was particularly effective, so I hope Ocean thinks of similar ways to bring a sense of introspection like that, drawing the focus in at times.
I think you're right, and his appearance has more to do with not wanting to be a victim anymore. Though, from what I gather, he didn't mind getting into fights, and was a bit of a thug. Also, a body like that takes dedication and perseverance. It's not the body of someone who quits or runs from challenges, so I also wonder if the body is the consequence of his mental growth.
I'd say when he was in prison he found he couldn't run, so he grew up more quickly than he might - but he grew to survive, so the growth is forced in a certain direction, and stunted in others. I guess we really don't know until we learn more about how he met Daphne, Miru ...and Gefritzel. I find it strange that he has such a challenging pet to care for and is a writer considering he still has an asshole streak. It's like he's bipolar, sometimes he's in touch with the feelies, and other times he seems to have only enough emotion to put his best foot forward right into the shit.
At the diner it was made clear that William was an asshole, just not a racist one.
The rest you're describing, I haven't played through yet, but I'm getting eager to see it. (Stopped playing right before they're leaving for the farm.) I just hope that William reading between the lines isn't a further abstraction for the player, but seeing how it's about current events, I suspect the player will know as much as William.
That's the thing, he was one, but he's offered choices to redeem himself - if you take those choices, he's still an asshole
Most of William reading between the lines seems to be explained through exposition with MIru: I think in some ways she's intended to be both his guiding compass at times and his sounding board to think aloud without being theatrical talking to himself (at least, a small part of her function currently).
I think you're partly right here. While William did run away, I don't think his parents and Leia are innocent in it either. One of the first things we learn about Helen is that she taught William not to be jealous and to separate sex from love. A weird lesson to teach a young teen. Constantly having to worry about setting off Helen's explosive personality is another factor that could've stressed his youth considerably. So, it's not all up to William, and I hope we'll be able to set boundaries. Mostly in the case of Helen, because up to now, William has been behaving very submissive towards her to appease her.
I'm not sure that the catalyst for William running away was sexual in nature. And in some cases, the canon relationships don't make sense socially. For instance, William would've deflowered Monica at the birthday party of Katarina, who is a few years younger than him. Though I have no clue how old William actually is, I'm guessing he's in his late twenties. Katarina would be 20 22 (still in college). Without the family tie or some sort of social obligation, it makes no sense why he'd be there. What would a 15/16-year-old do at the birthday party of a 10/12-year-old? (Except fucking someone out of boredom, I guess.)
Yeah, there's definitely some juicy details to uncover there. In the original pre rework, Willi hadn't done anything with Leia, if was simply the romance of the relationship. Katie (if you choose) got a (story) lewd scene before Leia did, and it blows her mind (as well as other things) that she got you to do something with her before Leia did. So I imagine the same is true - there's been no lewd actions between them yet.
The timeline is a bit skewed - we have anorexic, pre connective tissue Leia at the time Willi left, but Willi's old enough to creampie Monica on the kitchen table? Bold for a teen. When I think of the timeline, I get confused, so I pretend it makes sense, just like the canon of the official release (yeah, I know).
I'd love this. Though for me, it's Miru all the way. I brought up poly once and dropped it when she wasn't interested. Though my main worry here was more meta. I suspect that Miru will go along with anything the player decides, which would diminish her character. So if she has an opinion, I'll respect it.
I think this'll be a major part - also, in the old version, Miru has to leave at one point. I'm guessing the same will happen, maybe for a different reason - to make space for Daphne moving to Wollust.
why isnt this one on steam?
Mainly because SG is more popular. I'm sure Ocean will see what is possible once he gets past that hurdle with SG Season 1. I think he's playing safe with steam and trying to chalk up a few runs on the board before trying to get the content of this past their censors. Also, as this one is completely reworked, unlike SG, completely from the ground up, it has more left to finish season 1.