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So is Landlady/Tenant where it's long-term since childhood. They see through that shit writing, too.
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We've seen how he handles potential landmines, just rework it.I'll let Ocean deal with it. Poor i-mods users...
As I've said, it's not about the incest. It's the constant shifting of the story, so much so that it makes it incomprehensible and disjointed.
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I can only speak for myself. In case of WiAB disjoined and idiotic was the old version.
The new chapters 1-3 were good, but I didn't quite get where this was heading to. It felt like another slice of life story, only Leia's club and Fred's farm were a bit out of line and disturbing. But who cares how people make money, right? In some games, they run a brothel with student prostitutes right on the college campus grounds, using dorm bathrooms as gloryholes.
With Chapter 4, everything that came before in the new WiAB made sense in the light of the new information that was revealed about the criminal families, their confrontation, and the characters' place in that structure. Their actions now have motivation and reasons, and the dialogues - meaning. I like it.
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Chapters 1-3 were good, it was hinting at the upcoming criminal underworld which William seemed reluctant to get involved in. It kinda led us to believe we would be helping Joe fight back against the Krayt gang (which, in turn helps Gina), only for this update to come along and say "Fuck it! Donna Leia of the Cannelloni family wants all the criminals in Wollust to gather around the firepit and sing kumbaya."
Also, William leaving for worry of what the family would do to him, yet on return he seems to think exile is the worst case scenario.
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Princess Leia is going to destroy the peace and quiet in Wollust by starting sell firearms. So there will be no Kumbaya. Except for that, yeah, something like that.Chapters 1-3 were good, it was hinting at the upcoming criminal underworld which William seemed reluctant to get involved in. It kinda led us to believe we would be helping Joe fight back against the Krayt gang (which, in turn helps Gina), only for this update to come along and say "Fuck it! Donna Leia of the Cannelloni family wants all the criminals in Wollust to gather around the firepit and sing kumbaya."
Also, William leaving for worry of what the family would do to him, yet on return he seems to think exile is the worst case scenario.
Although I don't understand where all the surprise comes from. Both in SG and in the old WiAB there were tons of hints that things weren't that simple with these families. And that they weren't exactly families of good Samaritans, but some kind of strange clans or semi-criminal syndicates. Now that the clarity has been brought in, suddenly the oohs and aahs have started: oh, it's the mafia, what nonsense.
William, well, he's not known for his rational thinking in any situation and cold prediction of his actions. So, the fear of punishment from the Zanes that kept him from returning was probably a bit exaggerated. Quite in line with his character. What's wrong?
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I don't think any of it was fear of the mafia punishment. It was fear of facing Leia, Helen, and Katie after being away for years, and with the way he left. He was ashamed of running. The longer it takes, the harder it gets, and jail made it take longer.
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Well now we know the only potential child of William is Ayua, I can see Miru already being pregnant, Giuseppe having William killed and WiaB wrapping up there...
Easy out for Ocean
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I thought they said at the book club that both Leia and William are alive and well?Well now we know the only potential child of William is Ayua, I can see Miru already being pregnant, Giuseppe having William killed and WiaB wrapping up there...
Easy out for Ocean
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Can we be sure that Ocean won't just go back and change it...?
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We're getting Ethan Hunt up in this bitch! Don Tagliatelle's so called "syndicate" is going down!
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Anyone attempting an I-patch for this?
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Even f95 thinks that it's bullshit and doesn't let me react!Well now we know the only potential child of William is Ayua, I can see Miru already being pregnant, Giuseppe having William killed and WiaB wrapping up there...
Easy out for Ocean
Everyone knows Ayua is Riri's daughter!
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All signs point to Miru. Can't hold her alcohol "like her mom", Martial Artist.Even f95 thinks that it's bullshit and doesn't let me react!
Everyone knows Ayua is Riri's daughter!
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Honestly, Ayua having the Zane name doesn't indicate anything other than being in the family. Like, look at the Aranos. You have Helen and then also whatshisname, the black Krayt leader. Ayua could be even be Miru's sister's friend's aunt's school friend's niece's kid.Even f95 thinks that it's bullshit and doesn't let me react!
Everyone knows Ayua is Riri's daughter!
She's totally Miru's kid, tho.