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I think It's actually based off of some old horror movies from the late 90's and early 2000's. Those may have been based off of books. Or it could be a mixture of both.
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Man, talk about starting with some promise only to write yourself into a hole. I get that this is a porn game on a porn forum, but there's so much room for a psychological mindfuck or even just actual horror. You could just as easily turn this into any variant of Saw as you can a homage to Requiem for a Dream. I mean it's not hard to come up with a strong, original storyline for something like this. It writes itself. Sex could be added in via flashbacks, all while fleshing out the characters a bit more.
The two of them could have some deeper connection that she wasn't aware of, sort of a Saw-esque revenge VN (hence the collar that would immobilize him when the time was right/she found out). Like she was date-raped at a party by him and as they get to know each other, they soon realize they're closer than they originally thought. They went to the same college/high school, and eventually it all comes together for her. She remembers his voice, or some mark on him. Then the story could branch into her forgiving him (sort of a love-ish path) or punishing him (have his girlfriend/daughter/sister/mom/etc raped/killed on camera by the people holding them hostage or let her torture him. Sexually, of course.), or you could have her choose to not remember it at all and thus leading him to attacking her (again) in the room/cube.
The two of them could have some deeper connection that she wasn't aware of, sort of a Saw-esque revenge VN (hence the collar that would immobilize him when the time was right/she found out). Like she was date-raped at a party by him and as they get to know each other, they soon realize they're closer than they originally thought. They went to the same college/high school, and eventually it all comes together for her. She remembers his voice, or some mark on him. Then the story could branch into her forgiving him (sort of a love-ish path) or punishing him (have his girlfriend/daughter/sister/mom/etc raped/killed on camera by the people holding them hostage or let her torture him. Sexually, of course.), or you could have her choose to not remember it at all and thus leading him to attacking her (again) in the room/cube.
How do you evaluate a visual novel and its story from a total of less than 200 renders. I know that people are impatient and would like to see everything right away.
Your ideas are great, but right now it's like evaluating a movie in the first 10 minutes. You referred to "Saw", ok let's take the first ten minutes of that movie. If I stopped to see the film after 10 minutes, I could say that there is no twist, the protagonists have no connection, and it's just a film of two people stuck in a room. But what happens next? The film continues and the story becomes more and more intriguing, into an incredible final climax.
As I said before, I see many people already evaluating the product as a finished game, but it isn't. We are only at the beginning.
And do you know what the beautiful thing is? That all the questions people ask themselves will be answered later in the game, and when I say all, I mean all.
The story of the game was already written before i started programming.
It won't be changed according to people's tastes.
Anekin69
I'm not a contractor, but pretty sure that shower doesn't meet code.
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Perhaps it's a sonic shower? Perhaps the padding rolls back and a sealed, self-draining booth projects up from within the floor only to retract again after use? Why are some of you all over this guy so quickly?
I get the astute flippancy in your comment, timmyr. The fitments do conform to those we are used to associating with a water-based cleansing system, but this is a fantasy isn't it? Irrespective of where we think this story is or is not going, at so early a stage in development do we not owe it to the creator to set this kind of "technical" criticism aside for now and stick with him, benefit-of-the-doubt style, while he unfolds more of his story before our skeptical eyes?
Sure it's a little clunky, but it seems a little churlish to allow such a minor, if jarring, detail to shatter, the still hardening shell of reality within this obvious illusion?
I think you're taking these comments a wee bit to seriously. If the creator makes a great game, I'm sure we will all happily enjoy it, plumbing issues notwithstanding. And given the option of choosing a game with absurd plumbing vs a game with absurd horse dicks and balloon tits, I'll take the plumbing every time.
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Yeah, on reflection I tend to agree with you timmyr and I absolutely agree with you regarding the horse dicks and balloon tits.
Sorry about over-reacting.
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Would it be possible to have normal dick and tits and a correct plumbing too??
I like the models in that game they look great and realistic, i especially hate those horse dick and ballon tits, it's a frustrated teenager thing. It's funny to see all those games with ridiculous models, of course we all know that the majority of players lie when they have to state that they are 18+
. So those are supposed to be adult games made for frustrated teenagers, that's a funny concept.But back to this game, the concept of locking two beautiful people in a cube and ask them to do sex task is good but also a trap.
We all know what those tasks will be unless you are an incel living in a cave, so there is no much place for surprises.
The only interest of that story would be how the relation between the two develop, hate or love ?
And this where the problem comes, you will need a very talented writing and be carefull so it doesn't end up in a mess.
I'm not so sure about this after seeing how the male reacts, having rape fantasy so quickly, have they been chosen because they are freaks... maybe.
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that and its basically the plot of euphoria
Personally, I hope a better writer pick up this idea. The above idea, from 'connection based game', would work better if there are more people involved in the game, I think it would be too liner the storyline path, with only just 2 people, thus I prefer two completely strangers cast, but with more people... Would be awesome, indeed.
Likewise, the author wants to bring a NTR experience, therefore I think it would enhance the experience if somehow her boyfriend get to know what is happening, with his girl.
Anyhow, a grandier and deeper story on these settings, would surely be pretty cool.
I'm liking what I'm seeing so far. Anekin69, I hope you won't get disheartened by all the naysayers.
A few questions:
Will this VN have choices down the road? If so, will it be John who is presented with these choices, or will it be Emma? Or will it be both? I'm just trying to figure out which one of those characters is more "MC" than the other, if that makes sense.
Will we see flashbacks of what life was like before getting kidnapped for our two protagonists?
Approximately how many different endings are planned?
Also, a suggestion: When Emma uncovers herself in front of John, that scroll up is in video format, which doesn't make any sense. Not only does ren'py give you the option to scroll across a long image, but it will also take up less space AND look crispier. That video suffers from compression artifacts and it's a shame to do that on Emma's beautiful body.
Oh, and add a shower pan where the shower head is, even if it means you'll have to remake some old renders. Water can't be drained from the floor pads, the entire floor would just get soaked lol.
A few questions:
Will this VN have choices down the road? If so, will it be John who is presented with these choices, or will it be Emma? Or will it be both? I'm just trying to figure out which one of those characters is more "MC" than the other, if that makes sense.
Will we see flashbacks of what life was like before getting kidnapped for our two protagonists?
Approximately how many different endings are planned?
Also, a suggestion: When Emma uncovers herself in front of John, that scroll up is in video format, which doesn't make any sense. Not only does ren'py give you the option to scroll across a long image, but it will also take up less space AND look crispier. That video suffers from compression artifacts and it's a shame to do that on Emma's beautiful body.
Oh, and add a shower pan where the shower head is, even if it means you'll have to remake some old renders. Water can't be drained from the floor pads, the entire floor would just get soaked lol.
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I'm glad you like it. Don't worry, I'm not discouraged, quite the opposite
About your questions:
1- Yes and no, the choices in this game won't change the story or the ending, but there will be choices that somehow will break the forth wall. Expect something new...
In the next updates it will be clearer how.
2- Yes, there will be flashbacks. More precisely represented as past dreams or traumas.
3- As said before this story will have one ending, but i think it will be worth it.
4- Yes, you are right, I will fix it in the next update.
5- I see many have this shower problem
, it will be solved by going on with the story. But I want to leave a clue... "Very often what seems perfect in reality it is not ...."
I hope I have answered everything.
Anekin69
Lembre-se, aquele filme, NetFlix.
Por favor, aprenda a soletrar e/ou espaçar e pontuar corretamente.
E esse jogo me lembra mais 'Cube'. Alguém já postou uma foto mostrando isso.
Eu quero que o cara bata e domine totalmente a mulher por 1 semana, então tenha a vez dela e domine ele na próxima. Totalmente afetuosa com ele, craque em mim, e faça com que ele apalpe seu próprio esperma de sua boceta e cu.
Além disso, faça com que eles subam para o próximo de uma série de quartos, para que a cada dia/semana eles estejam em um 'novo episódio' e o quarto anterior possa ser limpo e desinfetado.
Isso também significa que a primeira sala acolchoada é apenas para quebrá-los. Em seguida, pode haver um balanço e alguns brinquedos, depois uma Masmorra de Dominação com chicotes, remos, Cruz de Santo Antônio, Stocks e uma mesa algemada para prender seus pulsos e tornozelos. ...
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Don't worry. These 2 were the inspectors.
If it isn't OK'd, then they don't leave the worksite.