ok, after actually playing the game i have to say its quite good but also very rough, since it is the first release the dev(s) will get my benefit of the doubt
the renders and videos are good enough, not the very best quality, but also far from the worst i have seen, they are definitely above average
the story is semi-interesting, but sometimes hard to follow because of the often broken english, but if you stick through with it you can at least understand what is happening, anyhow i would suggest to change the font into something more readable
another issue is a bloat of characters, the game introduces a great lot of characters to you, i would suggest to focus on only a couple of main characters before the story gets too convoluted and every major character gets enough screen time
file size could an be issue depending on how episode 2 will be handled, whatever the case coding and compression has to be improved
for a first episode this game had a great amount of content
overall i would rate it a 7/10, could be a 8 with proper proof reading and some streamlining
