VN Ren'Py Completed Wicked Choices: Book One [Remastered v1.0.1] [ASLPro3D]

[Wyrme]

Nope... just rendered Trog ass... don't believe me, ask @Palanto Games LOL

The thought brought to mind a visual I was gifted earlier today. Glad I had finished my lunch prior to the gifting.

In fact, one of the popular cover artists of Heavy Metal is a friend of mine (Dorian Cleavenger) did the cover of my novel "Ebon Knights: Knight's Fall" which @Palanto Games has read...

And since you mentioned it, the earlier visual (again emphasizing during my lunch!) I witnessed what I have since referred to as Jadda the Hutt in my only way to laugh off that evil scar on my minds eye. the usual brain bleach has done little to scour the residue from my neurons.
@Palanto Games So I will be in the retinal retraining program with you.

@ASLPro3D I had intended to wait until you left yourself open for a quote from Brandon, or maybe Ebon(as he is an interesting dude).

 

[Deadlyreaper]

jepp like I said a pdf would have been enough boring talk show fortunately the TV is running by the way that prevents falling asleep at something .....
and the next update ??? I'm sure it'll be exactly the same again I wish it would go on something you can hardly remember what it was and no I have no desire to play it again from the beginning

 

[monkeybird69]

I did not have the opportunity to play your game and do not know the reason why yours was removed from Patreon... was it also removed from or never posted here? I do remember back when Patreon was going about and wiping people's accounts out and stuff, that there was a game that was over here and there that was removed from both places because the characters were reflective and could be construed as being under-aged... not sure if that was yours or not, if not, I apologize for mentioning it.

Be that as it may, as it was mentioned, ours was checked and I had received a communication from a staff member of Patreon in regard to my content and was advised to be cautious about adding content in regard to "rape"... the only thing that saved me in regard to that scene was the fact that it wasn't done "gratuitously" with the intent to arouse the players of the game... it was done to show the horrors and suffering that comes with rape.

As for the "incest" that occurs within our game, it is... as they said could be done in a "Game of Thrones" style game or product... which I took it as meaning that the act of "incest" isn't the FOCUS of the whole game and a means to get one's jollies off... that it can occur, be mentioned, but not be the sole component of the product itself... sort of like added seasoning to the story... which is how ours has been done and likely why we've been allowed to continue with a warning to "be careful" and that "we'll be keeping an eye on it"... to keep us in line.

As I told them (Patreon), I understand their position in regards to certain content and the reason why they have to do what they do... I am not angry about it, even if they had deemed our game to be in violation of the terms, which (thankfully) we weren't, I would've just moved to a different game and story...

My goal with any game that I do (or will do) is to tell a story... a deep, meaningful one that people can follow and enjoy, one that is isn't done as pure "spank material" for the purpose of "making a dollar", but one that uses sex as a tool to enhance the story, not a story to enhance the sex... that is perhaps another reason why I've been "saved" from the culling.

All I know is that we've been fortunate and grateful to be allowed to continue, we will remain compliant with their rules and respect them, as it their website and how they run it is up to them and we will abide by it because we are fortunate to be able to use it as a platform to telling our stories and market our game.

This site wouldn't touch my game, Patreon won't either, yet strangely itch.io is copacetic.

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[RC-1138 Boss]

Just to prove it and to be a tease as well...

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Bah...Troll no like photo :closedeyesmile:

ps: totally missed a new version was released...:winkytongue:

 

[ASLPro3D]

The thought brought to mind a visual I was gifted earlier today. Glad I had finished my lunch prior to the gifting.

@ASLPro3D I had intended to wait until you left yourself open for a quote from Brandon, or maybe Ebon(as he is an interesting dude).

OH!!

*blinks in surprise* Thank you for getting my novel, @Wyrme!!
Man, I sincerely hope that you are enjoying it!!

Yeah, the scene with Jadda the Hutt is a bit on the gruesome side... I really can't believe how many have told me that they got nightmares from reading the part about her... I guess, I was, maybe, a bit TOO descriptive when it came to her.

@Palanto Games and I have been discussing about possibly building our next game within that universe in the future; possibly making the MC of the game a character that is doing their own mission while Brandon and Ebon Wing are working together to hunt down DeSole... so that they can bump into and interact with the characters of that story, while doing their own thing as well.

Be interested to hear what you think about that idea (or from anyone else brave enough to read my book).

Really hope that you are enjoying the book and interested to hear what you think, now that you've had a glimpse into my uncensored brand of madness! ​

 

[ASLPro3D]

jepp like I said a pdf would have been enough boring talk show fortunately the TV is running by the way that prevents falling asleep at something .....
and the next update ??? I'm sure it'll be exactly the same again I wish it would go on something you can hardly remember what it was and no I have no desire to play it again from the beginning

@Deadlyreaper sadly, you are correct, as I have been stating here, this release along with the next release will be more "blah, blah, blah" finishing the background information and setting up the rest of the universe before turning everyone loose and letting them make informed decisions to the choices that they will be making in May's and future releases...

Again, this is a "Visual Novel"... meaning it is a picture book... an, interactive story with pictures and sometimes choices that can be made during the course of the story... and, while I could've done this as a .PDF or as a CYOA Web-based game... however, I felt that Ren'Py was the best vehicle for it because it provides the ability for me to tell the story of the universe that I wish people to feel immersed in, while also giving use the ability to track, record and make a player's choices count for something.

Yes, I could've probably have done what other games like Halo, Mass Effect or Skyrim does, provide the main story and include background information within texts, tomes and journals, but... let's be honest here, how many of those damn things do any of us really read while playing those games??

As I've said before, to you and others... if you don't like reading, don't like updates that may not have "gameplay" in it, then THIS is not a game for you.

I mean, this is NOT a full time gig for me, I wish I was making enough with it so that it was, but even though it isn't, this game has only been out seven months and has over 100,000 words and over 2,000 images in it... show me another product or game out there that has that much for only being out for seven months... you'd be hard pressed to.

What's more... many of you are getting it for FREE... and, yet, still complain.

@Palanto Games and myself are working our asses off, every month, using our free time to entertain YOU and others for a few bucks a month (paid by people who appreciate the effort and work we are doing) so that you can be entertained for FREE... costs you nothing but time and hard drive space... and, still, you complain because it has too much talking and story in it?

I said this publically when I first started doing this, that I am going to build a game and a story that I want to make and that if people want to support me in that through Patreon then GREAT... but, that I am going to make the game that I WANT to make...

...and that is precisely what I am doing, even if it has a lot of "blah, blah, blah" in it.

I regret that you may not like all of the talking in it, but, Love it or Hate it... it is still my game to make.

 

[User_32285]

Need moooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee blah, blah, blah!!!!

 

[Ennoch]

Need moooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee blah, blah, blah!!!!

Oh i'm in such a gracious mood really! Here you go: Blah blah..blahblahblaaah.. blaaah blah blah blah! BLAHAHABLabalbla..!
There. A thing of beauty, i know.:angel:

 

[User_32285]

Oh i'm in such a gracious mood really! Here you go: Blah blah..blahblahblaaah.. blaaah blah blah blah! BLAHAHABLabalbla..!
There. A thing of beauty, i know.:angel:

pure poetry.

 

[Uncooked Ground Apple]

The best way to reach both @Palanto Games and I are on our Discord Server (

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) we try to hang out for a little bit there everyday interact with them, or here on F95...

I have joined the discord as of about 24 hours ago, and I did greet a few people but I forgot my name was different. you can see it in the general chat. I mentioned my f95zone name. I do look forward to talking more, I just need to look at my finances before I can decide if I am able to support you or not.

 

[SexyFeetLover]

Alrighty then! Played through the latest chapter yesterday evening.

So my WC fix got satisfied with this update, but I did NOT see that coming. But this is why i don't like to speculate, and rather be surprised when playing a game or reading books. Also, excellent job on the story and the visuals gentlemen!

I´ll keep this short and sweet, just like your latest chapter. (No pun intended....Or is it?)

 

[ASLPro3D]

This site wouldn't touch my game, Patreon won't either, yet strangely itch.io is copacetic.

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With all due respect @monkeybird69 just looking at the main image of the link you provided, I can certainly guess as to the reason why your game had been removed from Patreon and from here... regardless of how good your story may be, the images alone would cause knee-jerk reactions and could provide great problems for those willing to host it... particularly with their providers, Internet Merchant Accounts and banks that provide those services.

I am glad you were able to find a place to host and sell it, but yeah... not really surprised since it is kind of "blatant"...

 

[ASLPro3D]

I have joined the discord as of about 24 hours ago, and I did greet a few people but I forgot my name was different. you can see it in the general chat. I mentioned my f95zone name. I do look forward to talking more, I just need to look at my finances before I can decide if I am able to support you or not.

That's quite alright and certainly understandable! If you can, that is great, if you can't, it is OK, we know what it is like to be tight on money!

 

[ASLPro3D]

Alrighty then! Played through the latest chapter yesterday evening.

So my WC fix got satisfied with this update, but I did NOT see that coming. But this is why i don't like to speculate, and rather be surprised when playing a game or reading books. Also, excellent job on the story and the visuals gentlemen!

I´ll keep this short and sweet, just like your latest chapter. (No pun intended....Or is it?)

Glad you enjoyed it, @Footfan and was able to get your "fix" like you needed (wow, I feel like a drug dealer now! lol)... the surprises aren't quite over yet, though, I must warn you... but, yeah, figured that would surprise a few people.

 

[ASLPro3D]

Need moooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee blah, blah, blah!!!!

Oh i'm in such a gracious mood really! Here you go: Blah blah..blahblahblaaah.. blaaah blah blah blah! BLAHAHABLabalbla..!
There. A thing of beauty, i know.:angel:

pure poetry.

BLAH!! Blah, blah, blah... blahblahblahblah... blah, blah!!

 

[Ennoch]

BLAH!! Blah, blah, blah... blahblahblahblah... blah, blah!!

Noone can say now that there are no fan service herex'D

 

[ASLPro3D]

Noone can say now that there are no fan service herex'D

*in his best Pepe le Pew voice* Blah... Mmmmblahblah... blah, blah, blah... blahblahblah, blah! XD:happyblush

 

[Deadlyreaper]

@Deadlyreaper sadly, you are correct, as I have been stating here, this release along with the next release will be more "blah, blah, blah" finishing the background information and setting up the rest of the universe before turning everyone loose and letting them make informed decisions to the choices that they will be making in May's and future releases...

Again, this is a "Visual Novel"... meaning it is a picture book... an, interactive story with pictures and sometimes choices that can be made during the course of the story... and, while I could've done this as a .PDF or as a CYOA Web-based game... however, I felt that Ren'Py was the best vehicle for it because it provides the ability for me to tell the story of the universe that I wish people to feel immersed in, while also giving use the ability to track, record and make a player's choices count for something.

Yes, I could've probably have done what other games like Halo, Mass Effect or Skyrim does, provide the main story and include background information within texts, tomes and journals, but... let's be honest here, how many of those damn things do any of us really read while playing those games??

As I've said before, to you and others... if you don't like reading, don't like updates that may not have "gameplay" in it, then THIS is not a game for you.

I mean, this is NOT a full time gig for me, I wish I was making enough with it so that it was, but even though it isn't, this game has only been out seven months and has over 100,000 words and over 2,000 images in it... show me another product or game out there that has that much for only being out for seven months... you'd be hard pressed to.

What's more... many of you are getting it for FREE... and, yet, still complain.

@Palanto Games and myself are working our asses off, every month, using our free time to entertain YOU and others for a few bucks a month (paid by people who appreciate the effort and work we are doing) so that you can be entertained for FREE... costs you nothing but time and hard drive space... and, still, you complain because it has too much talking and story in it?

I said this publically when I first started doing this, that I am going to build a game and a story that I want to make and that if people want to support me in that through Patreon then GREAT... but, that I am going to make the game that I WANT to make...

...and that is precisely what I am doing, even if it has a lot of "blah, blah, blah" in it.

I regret that you may not like all of the talking in it, but, Love it or Hate it... it is still my game to make.

hey do not get me wrong the game started really well there was the sex scene with the girl where one was watched and then the girl was raped by her bruuder while the mother watched and did nothing because she liked it .... and there was nothing to go on then there was something with a girl

who had a dog in her room sniffing at her pussy and at the end there was just a black screen missing with a text like "hahahaha screw you thats all you want NEVER see more "and some other stuff more NOTHING will continue why can not I take revenge on your brother and mother together

with the girl? Why do not I see more with the girl and the dog? no stat whose only comes blah blah blah ..... and you compare your game seriously with "halo mass effect and skyrim?" do not really come and yes background story nice and good but where is the balance? just talk show? if you really

want to get rid of so much background info then write a pdf which may be complementary to the game and let's play the starting story further because I want to keep playing it wants to see what happens but not just endless blah blah bla

 

[DA22]

@Deadlyreaper Have some patience padawan. If you had followed ASLPRO's communication a bit during the last few months you would have known he is writing a game with adult elements, not a porn game. Unfortunately due to real life constrictions he had to cut up current chapter in 4 parts, but there will be adult action at the end of this chapter and you will be able to deal with the girl and her mother and brother, when the time is right for the story of the game. Not earlier, not later.

For you it might be better to wait till the May or June update though, before playing the game again, since that is where the adult content should pick up again within the story.

 

[El bacca Del Chew]

I want to keep playing it wants to see what happens but not just endless blah blah bla

Ding dong
-Yes, who is it?
-The mailman ma'am !
-wow, let me suck your dick then.
15 mns of sex
-Hmm such a slut you are miss.
-Yeah come back soon and don't forget to bring you big package along.
The end