El bacca Del Chew

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i can't decide whether i should cry or laugh because what @El bacca Del Chew wrote there is just about the average level of story we get from games around here
I knew my talent would be recognize someday :)
On a side note, check out forums about tv show as Westworld / Altered Carbon, and you will see how "intelectual' script writing has become. I hate the good old days sentence, but how many movies from the 60/70's would be a total flop today because characters are way too much develop rather than specials effects/endless gunshots/boobies flash/third grade level poo jokes.
We don't want to read, we don't want to think, we want to be entertained....
Extreme exemples and have not an universal value but it is a most def evolution we can witness the last 2 decades
 

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Absolutely brilliant, from beginning to end. No 'OMG nipple!' or 'OMG was that my brother's dick??' anywhere, thank you for that too. x'D Best story I've read on here by a mile.

Only thing I didn't like was the 'interlude' where the characters were made out to be actors and this was a play, kinda ripped me out of the reality of the universe you created...if that makes sense. :)

Keep up the good work. you got a jewel on your hands.
:D Thanks, we will :)

Yes that's something I brought up once before with ASLPro3D :) We decided to leave that in for now, because it's still an early access game. But in the finished product those thank you notes and shoutouts will probably be removed.
ASL said some posts later that we should probably remove the old ones and just keep the latest in, another way would be to bundle them into one "end of version" shoutout / thank you construct. Meaning everything will be kept, but only shown at the end of the current version. Which would be wrong to do too I think.... Well We'll discuss it a little :) Next release will have a solution for this then ;)

My mush is acting up, either I once again(constantly) have to much blood in my caffeine system or one a touch to many jrpgs/jvns(prolly both). For everytime @Footfan says 'WC' I read water closet and have to lug head back to re-interpret the text.

@ASLPro3D I certainly am enjoying for much the same reasons as i am here pestering you guys. it tickled the heart strings when Cynthia started to grow, I had nearly the same reaction Brandon did when I discovered Emily's reaction to her situation(now knowing the ritual my thoughts are a touch more muted), and KNEW Raven had to come back to the story. My coworkers looked at me strangely when I started chuckling at your introduction of Alex to Brandon, and even stranger when I tried to explain keystone cops in the WoD setting. 'That was the signal, right? What he's not with you? '

I can see VtM in your world, it truly is a good setting of the WoD. If you are serious about doing a game in Knight's world, please (as if you wouldn't) keep us in the loop, and I know (to steal Footfans abbrev) WC is far from done. You got me drooling when you talked of the discussion. Like many of our gen I started my gaming with DnD and I hopped around the WoD. First VtM, but I have to admit I still pick up my Mage: the Ascension guide every now and again to ponder their approach to the world :p I still have most of the guides including those that were after the 'change'. I played VtM redemption and Bloodlines.
So in closing your honor, I would have to say 'yeah, I think I might sorta maybe just a little bit like you to follow up with a game in that setting.' True Brujah, Children of Gaia and Euthanoi!
Yeah I'd love to do a Vampire the Masquerade Bloodlines kind of game in the Knight universe :D Hopefully we'll get to a point where we'll be able to do it :D
 

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Vampire the Masquerade Bloodlines
"Money. Where is money. No money?...." I will never forget this, along with..
"The ladies call me OHGAWD! but you can call me Fat Larry with an F-A-T, cuz I know I got a weight problem an' I just don't give a fuck!" That alone worth a playthrough :) And when you approached him as a Nosferatu, oh, exquisite :)
 

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:D Thanks, we will :)

Yes that's something I brought up once before with ASLPro3D :) We decided to leave that in for now, because it's still an early access game. But in the finished product those thank you notes and shoutouts will probably be removed.
ASL said some posts later that we should probably remove the old ones and just keep the latest in, another way would be to bundle them into one "end of version" shoutout / thank you construct. Meaning everything will be kept, but only shown at the end of the current version. Which would be wrong to do too I think.... Well We'll discuss it a little :) Next release will have a solution for this then ;)
No worries, like ASL said...I'm hooked. :) He seems to know these things. :biggrin:
 

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One of the best monologues EVER in that game (and possible in any game before and after) was one that you could sooo easily miss. I actually missed it several times and only got it by accident at one playthrough when i got "stuck" in a hidey spot. The sabbat warehouse, where the boss addresses his goons before talking to his girlfriend through phone. Now the fact that one could so easily miss it by getting spotted or starting the fight was a crime against humanity and an insult on the writer who wrote that dialogue! It was as a work of art, unbelievably hilarious :) Getting seriously offtopic though ;)
 

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My mush is acting up, either I once again(constantly) have to much blood in my caffeine system or one a touch to many jrpgs/jvns(prolly both). For everytime @Footfan says 'WC' I read water closet and have to lug head back to re-interpret the text.
Im sorry buddy i will try to stop using WC, as a anagram for Wicked Choices. :) However im happy your not referring my WC to VC, breaking out a coldsweat and start looking around for Charlie. ;):closedeyesmile:
 

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One of the best monologues EVER in that game (and possible in any game before and after) was one that you could sooo easily miss. I actually missed it several times and only got it by accident at one playthrough when i got "stuck" in a hidey spot. The sabbat warehouse, where the boss addresses his goons before talking to his girlfriend through phone. Now the fact that one could so easily miss it by getting spotted or starting the fight was a crime against humanity and an insult on the writer who wrote that dialogue! It was as a work of art, unbelievably hilarious :) Getting seriously offtopic though ;)
I had other plans for this weekend, now you have trying figure out how fit in a run to see Fat Larry's reaction and a quiet run into the warehouse, thank the powers that Nos part of one and perfect for the other. Whelp, back to weekend chore ( though you all have kept me here all the way through my first pot of coffee(not unwillingly).

@ASLPro3D oh, and I am so Johara. If you discount the lack of writing skills, and the fact that I am a crusty old white dude :p I wanted nothing more than prove that there was more to this world than we perceive on a daily. I could rave about how that revelation(the bonding effect) and its build up was revealed as well.
 

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, I want to say thank you for your work. I really like the game. Follow the development of the plot is really interesting. Also in this game you really experience for the fates of the main characters, in general all the characters are not only scenery, I wonder what will happen next with everyone.
I'm already waiting for the continuation. Thank you for posting updates here.
 

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They have their purpose. But, like a wank in the shower, pressure release, nothing more. I show my bias with my examples, as there are other games on here I play with some regularity, but I am a patreon of exactly 2. If I took the time to set-up a link to imgur(or other host) I would have both in my sig. One with great art and story(sure, guess which that is :p ) and one rpgm game with chibi as its only art assets. The commonality is both games are imo great stories unfolding with unique perspectives/interpretations of mythos. @ASLPro3D is here and active amongst us pirates, where as my other favorite has shall we say a less than positive outlook on this approach to acquistion.

Almost forgot, Wicked Choices (@Footfan dammit WC keeps popping in my head) and The Last Sovereign are my two choices if being full worlds well written and 1+art 1-art didnt give it away.
Well @Wyrme if you do like games with some stories and sex you can see two other games in my sig that I decided to support, since they are in my opinion well above average. Also worth checking out in my opinion are Twists of my Life and Long live the Princess. You will likely love Belle, even if she does not come close to our Lady Syrina the most adorable of all FAP. (PS Belle is a foulmouthed Pixie and proud of it:biggrin:).

Edit: Only Long Live the Princess has some really serious world building though of the list and also story, great renders and well worked out characters.
Depraved Awakening is more like an old film Noir with hot renders and great sex to boot.
Twists of my Life is an University setting but well done qua character setting and story.
Love and Submission might at first look seem like just another incest game, but it does hint at some occult/mysterious plot as well, but mainly it has great renders and well worked out characters and dev is attempting a sandbox game with a serious amount of choices and paths. Like said story is really good till now.
 

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@ASLPro3D oh, and I am so Johara. If you discount the lack of writing skills, and the fact that I am a crusty old white dude :p I wanted nothing more than prove that there was more to this world than we perceive on a daily. I could rave about how that revelation(the bonding effect) and its build up was revealed as well.
*blushes* Yeah, as I said in the Author Notes, that Ebon Knights was a personal story for me, in a great many of ways... and took 26 years for me to tell, so I had a great many of years to work on and develop the universe, the equipment, the lore and the characters involved.

Far much more polished and developed than Wicked Choices is... if people think that Wicked Choices is as 'Great' as they say it is... I can only imagine and dream of the kind of response that @Palanto Games and I would receive if we were to do an Ebon Knight's universe game and story!!

Of course, I wouldn't have been as inspired as I was to do and finish Ebon Knights, if not for so many people, particularly the model's that I have worked with as a photographer, for allowing me to use their likenesses and a bit of their personalities to enrich the story and their characters...

Like the model who RP's Brandon's daughter Emily for comic conventions and guest signings...
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Or the model that Johara Abrams was based off of....
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So, yeah... love to do the Ebon Knights Universe as possibly the NEXT game, if we can keep people's interest once Wicked Choices (WC) is finished. ;)
 

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Well that will depend all on you mean old teaser. whether you are able to deliver a well told and interesting story o_O. Yeah feel free to consider this as a challenge :evilsmile:. PS: I do expect you to win this one :p
 

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, I want to say thank you for your work. I really like the game. Follow the development of the plot is really interesting. Also in this game you really experience for the fates of the main characters, in general all the characters are not only scenery, I wonder what will happen next with everyone.
I'm already waiting for the continuation. Thank you for posting updates here.
Thank you @Hadgar for giving the game and us a try and look forward to entertaining you more in the coming months! :)
 
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What a conclusion, i have to replay the teleport-spell scene. All those choices just got so much more Wicked!

PS Belle is a foulmouthed Pixie and proud of it.
Belle and Syrina definitively got my 'female imp princess' fetish started. So curse all'o you FIPster and FAPsters.

Depraved Awakening is an awesome game even though it stays clear of all my GOTO fetishes. The fact that the girls give you customisable 'playnames' and stick to it, is just icing on every scene and it upgrades the experience tremendously.
Love and Submission has adorable characters and good renders but the 'sandboxi pointi-clicki' just threw it back a notch. I am either 'anal ressource manager' or 'lazy VN snob'.

P.S.: Am i the only one, that liked the off-camera scenes? Not only do they make an ideal point to 'save' the game but the 4th wall breaker shows the characters in a different light. Plus, i would not start a rebellion if you re-use the models or characters for other games.
I mean seriously 'Dana' from DoD and 'Maggie' from Superpowered showed up in 'Dragon Throne Project' and the Mum from Intimate Relations and Dreams of Desire could be the same character, some years apart. So yeah in my head, they do exist in a TRON style 'naughty-game-grid' waiting to 'fight' for the Renpy Control Program.
 

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Well that will depend all on you mean old teaser. whether you are able to deliver a well told and interesting story o_O. Yeah feel free to consider this as a challenge :evilsmile:. PS: I do expect you to win this one :p
Don't tempt me, young man!! :rolleyes:
 
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Of course I am tempting you, I would love to see that.:) Besides always nice to be called young o_O

@Quaszog55 Nah I actually do kind of like those scenes as well as some light inbetween entertainment. I have a suspicion there will be parts of the story where we might love that light entertainment. i tend to save though at moments I consider important for story line, like how you answered your wive.
 
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