played this for the first time now.
some comments:
1) graphics seems to be ok.
2) gameplay is somewhat irritating, since there aren't any clues on what to do. you should give the homeless man some money to progress the game. (in the bathroom the drawer opens and shuts before you can do anything. but when mom wants the pills this gets corrected.)
3) the english could be much better. and there are some typo's waht instead of what... as for one....
4) too little real content to be able to really get excited about. But have to wait for another update to see the progress this dev makes.
5) could be a grinder game... so lots of repetition... waiting for some idea of how this will develop... (personaly I would rather see a visual novel instead of this back and forth clicking)
All things considdered this could be a good game. But it is too early to make a good decision. Dev could use some help, like a proofreader so the English gets much better, storywise it seems to be a little 'simple' and could get annoying when this doesn't improve. However, it takes some updates to be sure. the quality of the artwork seems ok. If the game will be a rpg-like game, I hope it comes with a guide or you'll get hopelessly lost in finding the right path to go.
For the dev. : You made a reasonably good start, try to find some help with the English texts, proofreaders are easy to find on F95. Do make a walkthrough or an ingame guide. Try to concentrate on a good storyline, the way the mom and son get involved now is a bit simple. a good way on the talk they have could improve this a lot. my suggestion is, find some help. storywise and proper english wise.
Don't dispear. help will be given to the one that asks, and you'll be better off. You'll need help for sure if you want to make money through patreon.