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I already said my goodbye because you are forced to bring your friend in the latest update.......
- Thread starter SinAppeal
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Gods damn it. I just dl'd to catch up on this, and now I read this. Wasted fuckin download. Thanks for the info, guys.
well the next chapter will be decisive, I am getting ready to quit this game for sure..
its easy to say Group sex for him but what kind ? the sharing i don't see it at planned tags that mean will be a group sex like MFF.
there won’t be any NTR in this game.
So relax
And Ethan won’t fuck our girls
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The game is great. I've enjoyed it a lot. Story, rendering, character growth and the like. But honestly, the grammer and spelling needs some work, you should get somoene to do that - if you don't already. Apart from that, great game and update. Look forward to more. Godspeed SinAppeal
I wonder if it's any slap or spankings in the game right now? I can't see any tags for this, but want to ask you anyway if it's planned for this content?
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Great. I'll be glad to help, if you need someone.Yes i will consider this for chapter 8
yeah sure, but patrons will decide
- Feb 20, 2021
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well
i am doing some proofread for this game (grammar , other errors)
ik im not perfect
(not a native eng speaker)may you hint what you think can improve?
thanks
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No worries, at least there's someone.well
i am doing some proofread for this game (grammar , other errors)
ik im not perfect
may you hint what you think can improve?
thanks
From what I've seen:
- Choice of words, sometimes you have redundant adjectives and use it unnecessarily
- Flow, sometimes the lines don't flow nicely into each other, seems disjointed.
- Grammer and the like
Let me know if you need help, I'd be glad to.
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Not reading previous thread posts, but reacting to tags.
Currently no actual intercourse is in the current released content?
I don't personally mind. Teasing and sexual tension can be powerful tools in storytelling if used correctly and in just the right amount.
Also to the dev, ask around. Tons of people here with some background in writing, proofreading or even editing. Good luck with your game. I'll be keeping an eye on how it develops.
Currently no actual intercourse is in the current released content?
I don't personally mind. Teasing and sexual tension can be powerful tools in storytelling if used correctly and in just the right amount.
Also to the dev, ask around. Tons of people here with some background in writing, proofreading or even editing. Good luck with your game. I'll be keeping an eye on how it develops.
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