VN Ren'Py Abandoned Wings of Silicon [Ch. 12] [SinAppeal]

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punisher2099 said:
Funny you use that word considering we are forced to invite Ethan on the trip to the beach house. I feel a new tag incoming...
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BaasB said:
I already said my goodbye because you are forced to bring your friend in the latest update.......
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Gods damn it. I just dl'd to catch up on this, and now I read this. Wasted fuckin download. Thanks for the info, guys.
 
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Canto Forte said:
When you love somebody, you do everythign it takes to be with them.
The trouble is, they need to have to want and enjoy your company also.
You cannot have one without the other for a wholesome experience.
Self gratification and outta the blue praise anyone can get when they are the host
and someone or anyone comes by to stay and have fun, but you are then just another toy in your own house. A toy she plays with until she gets bored and starts looking outside for another thrill.
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You have a way with words
 
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BaasB said:
I already said my goodbye because you are forced to bring your friend in the latest update.......
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well the next chapter will be decisive, I am getting ready to quit this game for sure..
Avaron1974 said:
Group sex
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its easy to say Group sex for him but what kind ? the sharing i don't see it at planned tags that mean will be a group sex like MFF.
 
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Lytoo said:
I hope the future of this game genre doesn't have ntr or sharing
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Avaron1974 said:
Wellllll....

Group sex is one of the planned tags.


  • Male Protagonist
  • Romance
  • Dating Sim
  • Groping
  • Masturbation
  • Exhibitionism
  • MILF
  • POV
  • Teasing
  • Virgin
  • Voyeurism
  • Stripping
  • Creampie
  • Footjob
  • Handjob
  • Group sex
  • Oral Sex
  • Sex Toys
  • Teasing
  • Love
  • Friends with benefits
  • Humilation
  • Corruption
  • Feet Worship
  • Ass Worship
  • Humor
  • Exhibitionism
  • ENF(Embarrassed Naked Female)
  • Character Development
  • Female Domination
  • Big Ass
  • Big Tits
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Alteni said:
well if That tag will happen next time, then for me bye bye to this game.
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BaasB said:
I already said my goodbye because you are forced to bring your friend in the latest update.......
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Wolf™ said:
Gods damn it. I just dl'd to catch up on this, and now I read this. Wasted fuckin download. Thanks for the info, guys.
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there won’t be any NTR in this game.
So relax :BootyTime:
And Ethan won’t fuck our girls :WeSmart:
 
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The game is great. I've enjoyed it a lot. Story, rendering, character growth and the like. But honestly, the grammer and spelling needs some work, you should get somoene to do that - if you don't already. Apart from that, great game and update. Look forward to more. Godspeed SinAppeal
 
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HMOdin said:
The game is great. I've enjoyed it a lot. Story, rendering, character growth and the like. But honestly, the grammer and spelling needs some work, you should get somoene to do that - if you don't already. Apart from that, great game and update. Look forward to more. Godspeed SinAppeal
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Yes i will consider this for chapter 8 :)
 
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I wonder if it's any slap or spankings in the game right now? I can't see any tags for this, but want to ask you anyway if it's planned for this content?
 
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Boehser Onkel said:
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i am doing some proofread for this game (grammar , other errors)
ik im not perfect ;) (not a native eng speaker)
may you hint what you think can improve?
thanks
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No worries, at least there's someone.

From what I've seen:
  • Choice of words, sometimes you have redundant adjectives and use it unnecessarily
  • Flow, sometimes the lines don't flow nicely into each other, seems disjointed.
  • Grammer and the like
I mean, I know I'm being pedantic, but apart from this, its still good.
Let me know if you need help, I'd be glad to.
 
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Not reading previous thread posts, but reacting to tags.

Currently no actual intercourse is in the current released content?

I don't personally mind. Teasing and sexual tension can be powerful tools in storytelling if used correctly and in just the right amount.

Also to the dev, ask around. Tons of people here with some background in writing, proofreading or even editing. Good luck with your game. I'll be keeping an eye on how it develops.
 
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