Friends, please leave your wishes what you would like to see in the game, I'm very interested! Thank you for your interest for my game!
First, I like the game so far. So take anything I say as constructive, not just as negative.
There are several things that look like story or quest hooks that go nowhere. You might want to work out a plot tree of all the events and paths that the MC can take.
For example...
What happens with the baby worms?
What happens with the farmer?
What happens with the job in town?
What happens with the centaurs?
There were several centaur passages that suggested more was coming there.
What happens with the nerd/cosplayers?
What happens at the hotel?
What happens with the photographer?
What happens with the demons in the other dimension?
The graphics are great and what there is of the story is great. However, it seems like what you develop next is almost...random. You don't seem to be filling in quests before the story carries you completely past them.
I think you could really be helped by plotting out all the story lines ahead of time.