Ren'Py Abandoned Wonderland Witches [v0.2.1] [Faerie Dust]

[Lynx-.-x]

Faerie Dust Hey bro add a few options such as adjusting textbox opacity and changing font size if possible (font too small for my teeny tiny li'l eyes lol)
Also, apart from the grind and similar looking models, the game's pretty good and if it's your first one, you did an amazing job.
And whatever you do, don't abandon the game. People will eventually recognize it's potential and there'll be more support and funding. Good luck, keep going.
Also, please do something to reduce the grind a lil bit, it feels so humiliating when the girls shoo you away because you don't have any silver/ gold/ copper, maybe try and add some cheats or something....or maybe just change the amount of variables you get after each activity

 

[endriag]

Will there be any updates ?

 

[Canto Forte]

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The constructive criticism and dev realisation too much to improve to fix:
guess all that killed this game.

JokerLeader , as this looks like this game version,
your precious crunch, will remain the staple
for this game, would it be possible
to reupload your version ... for posterity?​

Wonderland Witches [v0.2.1] Faerie Dust

Original Size Win/Linux: 759 MB
Original Size Mac: 741 MB

Compressed Size Win/Linux: 89 MB: MEGA
Compressed Size Mac: 72 MB: MEGA

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To cut a long story short:

too grindy

too difficult

too many random elements

not enough erotic content

not enough funny

female characters all look the same

In a few words: pretty annoying as fuck.

youve done a great job with the models. the gameplay itself needs improvements but since its your first project you have done great imho. keep going and improve your coding since you already have a good taste in nice models

Premise is exactly whatever you want it to be ... Overview description lays it out:
” Live your own adventure and face the consequences of your choices. ”

So what is exactly the premise? Just some random guy? A "adventurer? in nowheresville with some chicks?

Dev was pretty set in the initial idea for the game .. too many stuff to learn to make it better.

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Faerie Dust Hey bro add a few options such as adjusting textbox opacity and changing font size if possible (font too small for my teeny tiny li'l eyes lol)
Also, apart from the grind and similar looking models, the game's pretty good and if it's your first one, you did an amazing job.
And whatever you do, don't abandon the game. People will eventually recognize it's potential and there'll be more support and funding. Good luck, keep going.
Also, please do something to reduce the grind a lil bit, it feels so humiliating when the girls shoo you away because you don't have any silver/ gold/ copper, maybe try and add some cheats or something....or maybe just change the amount of variables you get after each activity

Dev is out ...

Will there be any updates ?

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[VictorDoUrden]

That's a shame but can't freaking blame im if life screws ya... well gotta buckle down

 

[Lynx-.-x]

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The constructive criticism and dev realisation too much to improve to fix:
guess all that killed this game.

JokerLeader , as this looks like this game version,
your precious crunch, will remain the staple
for this game, would it be possible
to reupload your version ... for posterity?​

Premise is exactly whatever you want it to be ... Overview description lays it out:
” Live your own adventure and face the consequences of your choices. ”




Dev is out ...

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Atleast he's being honest and mentioning the reason for suspending instead of just abandoning the game with no notice or reasoning (which most devs do) which I appreciate a lot. Hope he'll be fine and does well in life and gets back to development soon.

 

[Cernunnos5000]

Guess it is time for mods to add the "abandonned" tag. With a clear statement like that we don't need to wait 6 months.

 

[fried]

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The constructive criticism and dev realisation too much to improve to fix:
guess all that killed this game.

JokerLeader , as this looks like this game version,
your precious crunch, will remain the staple
for this game, would it be possible
to reupload your version ... for posterity?​

Premise is exactly whatever you want it to be ... Overview description lays it out:
” Live your own adventure and face the consequences of your choices. ”




Dev is out ...

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Marked as Abandoned.

If the Dev does decide to revisit, status can always be revised.

 

[Faerie Dust]

Thanks for all the positive comments and constructive criticism. I was absolutely broke when I stopped updating the game. The entire development period gave me about $ 100 total which is absolutely unsustainable. I invested a lot of effort into my own online business instead and my financial situation improved dramatically. Honestly I can barely believe it was just 3 months ago.

I even started playing around with the character creator again and noticed how much the art can be improved. The new version has more realistic body proportions and a more adult looking face. There are a LOT of parameters I wasn't fully aware and will keep improving over time whenever I feel like it.



I also revisited and played WW today. It's incredible how some time away from the game put things into perspective. One thing is for certain, adult game development is NOT financially worth it. Not for me. Now I do like making a game so I might get back to it just for fun, but only with a clear idea and plan (which currently I do not have). So keep the abandoned tag, I don't want to give any false hope, more an update to tell you that I'm alive and well.

 

[objector]

Thanks for all the positive comments and constructive criticism. I was absolutely broke when I stopped updating the game. The entire development period gave me about $ 100 total which is absolutely unsustainable. I invested a lot of effort into my own online business instead and my financial situation improved dramatically. Honestly I can barely believe it was just 3 months ago.

I even started playing around with the character creator again and noticed how much the art can be improved. The new version has more realistic body proportions and a more adult looking face. There are a LOT of parameters I wasn't fully aware and will keep improving over time whenever I feel like it.

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I also revisited and played WW today. It's incredible how some time away from the game put things into perspective. One thing is for certain, adult game development is NOT financially worth it. Not for me. Now I do like making a game so I might get back to it just for fun, but only with a clear idea and plan (which currently I do not have). So keep the abandoned tag, I don't want to give any false hope, more an update to tell you that I'm alive and well.

I wish you all the best and hope you can rejoin your hobby after you gain enough financially comfort for rent and life. People like you who spent their own free time to "please" the community are daily heros thx for the fun time

 

[J.Buttler]

It is unfortunate to see abandoned tag here

 

[Konstantinus]

Thanks for all the positive comments and constructive criticism. I was absolutely broke when I stopped updating the game. The entire development period gave me about $ 100 total which is absolutely unsustainable. I invested a lot of effort into my own online business instead and my financial situation improved dramatically. Honestly I can barely believe it was just 3 months ago.

I even started playing around with the character creator again and noticed how much the art can be improved. The new version has more realistic body proportions and a more adult looking face. There are a LOT of parameters I wasn't fully aware and will keep improving over time whenever I feel like it.

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I also revisited and played WW today. It's incredible how some time away from the game put things into perspective. One thing is for certain, adult game development is NOT financially worth it. Not for me. Now I do like making a game so I might get back to it just for fun, but only with a clear idea and plan (which currently I do not have). So keep the abandoned tag, I don't want to give any false hope, more an update to tell you that I'm alive and well.

Well I like forward for more if you ever continue. Whas nice to find a witch which is not treating like pet or worse.

 

[Faerie Dust]

Thanks for the nice comments. The game was too big of a scope to be made properly and a lot of things would have to change. If I do come back, I will create a spin off focusing on the witch and her 2 sisters (or friends). You know, take the good things like the music, backgrounds and UI which I was very happy with and redesign the gameplay to make it more fun and update with better character art. It's also easier to create a deeper story with fewer characters and give them unique personalities, while also reducing the complexity of the game. Ideally, I would like to build a management game or point and click into it somehow but I couldn't really find a good fit yet. If you have some fun gameplay ideas for this setting, feel free to share them.

 

[Faerie Dust]

How do you like the new Witch? I've got some new mods and I'm really satisfied with the quality. Currently designing the 3 female characters, I took your feedback and they should be fairly unique. We might see a revival of Wonderland Witches at some point, but don't expect anything in the near term as I don't have much free time available.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

How do you like the new Witch? I've got some new mods and I'm really satisfied with the quality. Currently designing the 3 female characters, I took your feedback and they should be fairly unique. We might see a revival of Wonderland Witches at some point, but don't expect anything in the near term as I don't have much free time available.

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[Konstantinus]

How do you like the new Witch? I've got some new mods and I'm really satisfied with the quality. Currently designing the 3 female characters, I took your feedback and they should be fairly unique. We might see a revival of Wonderland Witches at some point, but don't expect anything in the near term as I don't have much free time available.

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While I can not say, she is wearing my favourite colour style and honestly I find purple kneesocks over grey stockings matching I have to agree it now really looking unique. Personally I think it is better if you either have a clear absolute territory or do not take the stockings because from my opinion this colourdifference is interrupting the flow of the curves.

 

[Faerie Dust]

While I can not say, she is wearing my favourite colour style and honestly I find purple kneesocks over grey stockings matching I have to agree it now really looking unique. Personally I think it is better if you either have a clear absolute territory or do not take the stockings because from my opinion this colourdifference is interrupting the flow of the curves.

I agree, it probably makes sense to have either kneesocks or the stockings. I'm experimenting with new hair, skins, face and taking my time in the designing phase - not rushing it this time. I would like for each character to have 2-3 outfits depending on the situation. Still lots to be done but once I'm satisfied I will definitely show all the characters to collect feedback before starting to render the sprites.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Sad to see Abandoned tag here

Yeah, but it's not totally abandoned. See 5 posts above yours (unless I miscounted) for the latest from the dev.

 

[randomklark]

I really like the original models that were used. Can anyone share what Software or Programs were used to create them? I'd appreciate it.

 

[Faerie Dust]

I really like the original models that were used. Can anyone share what Software or Programs were used to create them? I'd appreciate it.

Thanks, they were made with Honey Select 2.

 

[Faerie Dust]

Another side by side comparison of how the princess was in the game and now. It's quite relaxing to play around with the sliders and new mods. I also learned custom posing instead of just using presets. But considering I have little spare time and still without a proper gameplay plan, at this rate the new game will release by 2030