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Yeah I have no dog in this race as I long ago stopped supporting financially but man, there's just too many girls you barely get time with the ones you like. As a Kimmy fan, it's like the worst blue balls ever too lol

I WOULD ALSO LIKE MORE ACTUAL BASKETBALL TO BE PLAYED!
I guess that Kimmy will be a possible love interest in the future of the story.. As for more basketball sure i want that too but i see 2 main obstacles lot's of recreation of players for the other teams and redecorate their stadiums
 
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He should just abandon this and move on to another project. It's clear this is way over his head. He's struggling with writers block in a porn game that has no semblance of a story besides fuck every girl in sight and maybe they'll play basketball.

Seriously. He has no plans for any future content, besides how to transition to the next scene. If he wants to continue this shit show, I recommend he spends time fleshing out a story that he can follow at he minimum. He should spend some time doing that. Hell, throw some ideas into an AI story generator, some are free online and that will likely be better than anything he can come up with at the moment.
Abandoning a project with so much potential for a good story ....simply is not such a good plan In my opinion he can continue it if he make a goal planing about his story... What i mean ?? For example now that the MC has returned home he should focus on the meeting with Daliah so that the story progress , have a meeting with the team to decide if Damien will return and if everyone is ok with that and then continue on with the date with Jasmine,and other substory stuff
 
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Abandoning a project with so much potential for a good story ....simply is not such a good plan In my opinion he can continue it if he make a goal planing about his story... What i mean ?? For example now that the MC has returned home he should focus on the meeting with Daliah so that the story progress , have a meeting with the team to decide if Damien will return and if everyone is ok with that and then continue on with the date with Jasmine,and other substory stuff
no offense but this comment really explains all the 5* reviews games some of the VNs in here gets :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
the story is an even bigger problem than the schedule.
 
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no offense but this comment really explains all the 5* reviews games some of the VNs in here gets :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
the story is an even bigger problem than the schedule.
I simply said my opinion never review this game with 5 * ... I liked the story on the begining mostly at some point it lost it's way that is true but most players of these games don't care for the story...
 

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Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story.... :devilish:

When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)

It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry. ;)
 

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Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story.... :devilish:

When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)

It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry. ;)
This doesn't sound too crazy for this AVN, plus it gives the MC ANOTHER reason to move house AGAIN...
 

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Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story.... :devilish:

When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)

It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry. ;)
The problem isn't the girls at home. Its all the ones he keeps adding. The College girls, his girlfriends, Elizabeth, Talismah, Rachel, Harper and then our non-girl Skye. That literally all he ever needed. Throw in the Pregnancy service things every once in a while, maybe bang the teacher or her sister. But as much as I love Willebelle, the colors never needed to exist. The two movie stars never needed to exist. The rich donor women never needed to exist. Before the Bowling Alley event even happened there were already more than enough characters.

I swear that event and the fight is where BD shifted gears away from the College and the girls and towards everything else.
 

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Can we Romance Willow, Azel and Wendy yet?
Has the developer changed his mind yet and told Patreon to eat a dick because you don't need patreon to get paid/donations, there are other much less restrictive sites that allow you to get paid/donations.

Like please just give us what we want the people that might actually pay him instead of those stuck up cunts in suits telling you what is it ain't allowed.

Please tell me there is a possibility of us actually getting it on with them at some point seriously.. it feels so fucking wrong to have such amazing gorgeous girls with great stories and probability behind them to just sit there in the corner away from the rest of the Harem.

Paterson is fucking cancer and people really should start using alternative less restrictive sites and services because the only way we get what we want is when we don't give up our freedom and cave in like little submissive bitches, don't give patreon your money or service give it to subscribestar or something else equal to it that respects is users and customers
 
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The problem isn't the girls at home. Its all the ones he keeps adding. The College girls, his girlfriends, Elizabeth, Talismah, Rachel, Harper and then our non-girl Skye. That literally all he ever needed. Throw in the Pregnancy service things every once in a while, maybe bang the teacher or her sister. But as much as I love Willebelle, the colors never needed to exist. The two movie stars never needed to exist. The rich donor women never needed to exist. Before the Bowling Alley event even happened there were already more than enough characters.

I swear that event and the fight is where BD shifted gears away from the College and the girls and towards everything else.
Yes, but I addressed that too. If some of the girls die because of a vendetta against him, then he will be less likely to add new girls from that point on for fear of their safety and because it would "feel wrong" to replace the girls he lost. Gives him an instant mental aversion to adding more girls from that point on.
It would also cause him to put up a wall between himself and the girls that weren't already members of his inner circle/actual harem, the ones that are just side chicks at this time, such as the colors, the rich girls, and maybe even the movie stars, at least the younger one, and so on...
 
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