Grif1001

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He could also undo all this dumbassery by claiming everything since the bowling alley was a coma dream he had after getting the shit kicked out of him. Goes to the prison, cuddles with Skye, slips into a coma from the concussion, wake up later after "all of this was just a dream."

Go back to concentrating on the College, revert Elizabeth's and Ruby's character models, don't introduce new characters every single update, finish the game sometime within the next 20 years.
Like the famous "Who shot JR?" season on Dallas. Turned out the whole season was just Bobby's dream. (For those who are too young to know, Dallas was a TV show in the 1980's)

Could work.
 
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Goopgoop

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Excuse me, but.... What story? :ROFLMAO: WVM lost the plot around the time you created your account ;) Funny enough, your only 2 posts are here. Smells like another burner account :unsure:
And what feelsgood vibe? The kind where everyone falls on MC´s Dick after the first sentence? Or the one where everyone falls in love with him at first sight? The characters besides SOME of the initial LI´s have no soul at all. You want serious feelsgood vibes? Maybe try games like Eternum, Dropout Saga or Cosy Cafe. Stating that WVM in 2024 has a story whatsovever besides fucking every woman he meets is just a blatant lie :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
WVM at this point is like fucking a Braindead person in the Hospital bed. It´s already dead, but ppl still cling to it for some reason.
The only way BD could redeem himself is by starting a new project under a different name. But guess what? He won´t ever do that because he´d lose all the free money he´s getting for doing jackshit.
I've been playing it way longer. Just haven't been around on F95 for very long, nor am I very active on here. Only recently found out that it tends to be the quickest updates and miss less titles than other sites. This is just one of my fav VNs and so it bugged me that all the talk about the update is people trying to push their own "ideal version". I understand that "early access" gaming is a bit of an exception, but usually, consumers of creative expression don't get a say in the product. Just let the creator create their work, then like about it what you like about it, dislike what you dislike. Plus we're all freeplay consumers. If you want a say in the game get a Patreon, idk about this dev specifically but some do take polls about what people who actually support their work want to see.

If you don't like WVM because it's not realistic enough for you, then feel free to make a VN about a guy who looks at girls from a distance. It's a sexual fantasy for a reason. If you don't like people falling in love with your character or having sex with him, I don't really know what you're here for. It's feelsgood because he becomes a positive influence in their lives, and they support him in return. There are porn games on the taboo/darker/manipulative side and games on the feelsgood/vanilla-with-fetishes side. To me, WVM is on the latter side. There are also games that leave it up to the player to choose to take the kind or manipulative approach, but those stories still tend to progress in a linear fashion and "having to fit both paths" affects the story.

Of course, you're free not to like it. But why are you trying so hard to convince other people not to like it? When I don't like a creative product, I just don't spend any time on it. If you wanna give up on the game, feel free. But why try to undermine something that other people enjoy?
 

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There are quite a few other games that give you that "feelsgood vibe" with characters that feel "more like a family than some actual families", but they actually succede in telling a story at the same time. some of them very heartwarming, with morals and everything.
It's called a "Visual Novel" for a reason. There's supposed to be a story.
I never said there weren't any other feelsgood games. Didn't know porn games were like marriage and you can only enjoy one. I enjoy WVM. I enjoy a bunch of games. Playing several means you don't get bored waiting for releases. Some stories are better than others. But story-telling is under the creative control of the creator. I don't mind the current side-track at all. I really like the Hearts Foundation storyline. I'm sure we'll get back to basketball and the house soon enough. And yes, some of the core group girls' progression is slow. But some relationships progress more slowly than others.

There are people complaining at the same time about some LI love story progression being too slow, whilst at the same time complaining about characters throwing themselves at the main character too much. In the end it's a Harem-focussed game, so the main LIs get the most screen time. And I'm sure it sucks when your favourite LI hasn't progressed as far as you'd like, or hasn't gotten a lot of screen time. But I have a broad appreciation both in terms of personality and appearance so I don't have that problem.

And you say there isn't any story, but that's just not true. There are lots of storylines developing in paralel. There's also lots of sex scenes. It's a great game. ^_^
 
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I think yall care a little to much about story in a game that has a plot centered around becoming famous to meet more chicks to fuck, that my not be the characters intent but it is clearly the Devs intent.
edit- and i dont mind tbf, not ever game have to have a good story
 

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I think yall care a little to much about story in a game that has a plot centered around becoming famous to meet more chicks to fuck, that my not be the characters intent but it is clearly the Devs intent.
edit- and i dont mind tbf, not ever game have to have a good story
Funny thing is, the story is supposed to be why WVM was marketed as an industry disruptor.


LewdPixels is gone now, but the archived interview remains. You can get around the broken display from the age-check interface via Inspect Element.
 

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You're wrong... most F95tards users can't even read... :KEK:

Also please give me a list of the feel good vibe games. I need more of those and less of the other.
For someone who tries to emphasize story in my own game, illiteracy makes me sad... However you're not wrong about reading comprehension levels...

Looking at your conversation and feedback stats, I'd be surprised if you haven't already played most of the games that would be on any list I made, but if you really want, I can DM you one. Won't post it in a game thread though...
that's another no no.
 
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Grif1001

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Few porn games give you that feelsgood vibe as well as WVM does.
I never said there weren't any other feelsgood games. Didn't know porn games were like marriage and you can only enjoy one. I enjoy WVM. I enjoy a bunch of games. Playing several means you don't get bored waiting for releases. Some stories are better than others. But story-telling is under the creative control of the creator. I don't mind the current side-track at all. I really like the Hearts Foundation storyline. I'm sure we'll get back to basketball and the house soon enough. And yes, some of the core group girls' progression is slow. But some relationships progress more slowly than others.

There are people complaining at the same time about some LI love story progression being too slow, whilst at the same time complaining about characters throwing themselves at the main character too much. In the end it's a Harem-focussed game, so the main LIs get the most screen time. And I'm sure it sucks when your favourite LI hasn't progressed as far as you'd like, or hasn't gotten a lot of screen time. But I have a broad appreciation both in terms of personality and appearance so I don't have that problem.

And you say there isn't any story, but that's just not true. There are lots of storylines developing in paralel. There's also lots of sex scenes. It's a great game. ^_^
I didn't say that you said there "weren't any other feelsgood games". You said "few". I countered that there were "quite a few". Not sure how that has anything at all with your porn games and marriage soliloquy that followed. Very few people who have been part of this site for any decent length of time play only one or two games. They/we all play multiple games, and we all know that playing multiple games helps occupy your time between releases. This is not new information that you are sharing.

Further, you also seem to be of the opinion that there are people posting on this thread who don't like the game. No. Everyone in this thread likes WVM to some degree. Some like it less now than they did years ago when it was starting out and had promise, but they continue to come here hoping to see improvement. The complaints you see aren't because people don't like the game. It's because they don't like what the dev is doing to the game.

Yes, the creator has creative control, that's kind of an obvious statement, but we'll come back to this in a moment when I address your comments about paralel storylines. I want to touch on the "we'll get back to basketball and the house soon enough" statement first because you mention storylines in multiple places. As for the basketball, how can we get back to something that we have barely even started? If the story so far is any indication, basketball will be a very small part of this basketball story. As for getting back to the house...How long before we move again?

Now, for your final statement... "you say there isn't any story, but that's just not true. There are lots of storylines developing in paralel."
I could say the same thing about an encyclopedia, but it's not something most people want to sit down and read straight through. Braindrop is a game developer with, by your own admission, multiple storylines. Paramount global is a mass media conglomerate that owns multiple TV shows. However, Paramount was wise enough not to turn 7th Heaven, The King of Queens, CSI, 90210, NCIS, Everybody Hates Chris, NUMB3RS, Gossip Girl, Hawaii 5-0, The Vampire Diaries, and Rules of Engagement all into one huge multi-storylined show.

If BD had stuck to one storyline, he could have finished WMV by now and already be on his second game, Hearts for Hope, or Crazy Rich Yacht Women. Instead, he includes every random storyline that pops into his head and ends up writing himself into a corner and then skips ahead promising to do a rework later. He did that first with Chapter 1, and he just did it again when he left the latest part unfinished and jumped ahead to 14 because he doesn't know how to finish 13.

We don't complain because we want creative control over the story. We complain because BD lets his creativity push the story out of control to the point that even he doesn't know how to bring it back. In all honesty those who complain the most are some of the ones that care the most. We are the ones that have been playing this the longest and don't want to see him end up burnt out and the game abandoned.

I was with BD at the begining. I was a supporter on Patreon. I got tired of watching him struggle with himself. I stopped supporting him financially(Couldn't afford it, I battled cancer and won), but I still play the game and I want to see him succeed. I'd hate to see WVM abandoned. I began commenting on here. At one point I was told. "If you don't like it make your own game." So, as a graduate of the Art Institute of Dallas and also having a BA in English Lit from UNT, I decided to do just that.

I know how hard it is to be a dev, and I worry that BD is going to burn out if he doesn't change something. Other games have been completed in the time it has taken hin to do 2 incomplete chapters. You can sit on a ray of sunshine and look only on the brightside through your rose collored glasses rimmed with silver linings, but those of us who have been following him for 5 years are worried how long this will survive if something doesn't change.
 
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markel1000

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I didn't say that you said there "weren't any other feelsgood games". You said "few". I countered that there were "quite a few". Not sure how that has anything at all with your porn games and marriage soliloquy that followed. Very few people who have been part of this site for any decent length of time play only one or two games. They/we all play multiple games, and we all know that playing multiple games helps occupy your time between releases. This is not new information that you are sharing.

Further, you also seem to be of the opinion that there are people posting on this thread who don't like the game. No. Everyone in this thread likes WVM to some degree. Some like it less now than they did years ago when it was starting out and had promise, but they continue to come here hoping to see improvement. The complaints you see aren't because people don't like the game. It's because they don't like what the dev is doing to the game.

Yes, the creator has creative control, that's kind of an obvious statement, but we'll come back to this in a moment when I address your comments about paralel storylines. I want to touch on the "we'll get back to basketball and the house soon enough" statement first because you mention storylines in multiple places. As for the basketball, how can we get back to something that we have barely even started? If the story so far is any indication, basketball will be a very small part of this basketball story. As for getting back to the house...How long before we move again?

Now, for your final statement... "you say there isn't any story, but that's just not true. There are lots of storylines developing in paralel."
I could say the same thing about an encyclopedia, but it's not something most people want to sit down and read straight through. Braindrop is a game developer with, by your own admission, multiple storylines. Paramount global is a mass media conglomerate that owns multiple TV shows. However, Paramount was wise enough not to turn 7th Heaven, The King of Queens, CSI, 90210, NCIS, Everybody Hates Chris, NUMB3RS, Gossip Girl, Hawaii 5-0, The Vampire Diaries, and Rules of Engagement all into one huge multi-storylined show.

If BD had stuck to one storyline, he could have finished WMV by now and already be on his second game, Hearts for Hope, or Crazy Rich Yacht Women. Instead, he includes every random storyline that pops into his head and ends up writing himself into a corner and then skips ahead promising to do a rework later. He did that first with Chapter 1, and he just did it again when he left the latest part unfinished and jumped ahead to 14 because he doesn't know how to finish 13.

We don't complain because we want creative control over the story. We complain because BD lets his creativity push the story out of control to the point that even he doesn't know how to bring it back. In all honesty those who complain the most are some of the ones that care the most. We are the ones that have been playing this the longest and don't want to see him end up burnt out and the game abandoned.

I was with BD at the begining. I was a supporter on Patreon. I got tired of watching him struggle with himself. I stopped supporting him financially(Couldn't afford it, I battled cancer and won), but I still play the game and I want to see him succeed. I'd hate to see WVM abandoned. I began commenting on here. At one point I was told. "If you don't like it make your own game." So, as a graduate of the Art Institute of Dallas and also having a BA in English Lit from UNT, I decided to do just that.

I know how hard it is to be a dev, and I worry that BD is going to burn out if he doesn't change something. Other games have been completed in the time it has taken hin to do 2 incomplete chapters. You can sit on a ray of sunshine and look only on the brightside through your rose collored glasses rimmed with silver linings, but those of us who have been following him for 5 years are worried how long this will survive if something doesn't change.
Perfectly said everyones thoughts in one comment
 

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I think yall care a little to much about story in a game that has a plot centered around becoming famous to meet more chicks to fuck, that my not be the characters intent but it is clearly the Devs intent.
edit- and i dont mind tbf, not ever game have to have a good story
True but atleast the original story made sense generational basketball prospect turns a D5 school into a contendor. Its not even that anymore i honestly cant even tell whats the story anymore the tone switch between before the bowling event and after feels like two different games
 
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I feel that some people just read whatever they want from people's posts , to feed their own delusions or agenda . For starters stop pretending that the people criticizing the game , however it stings for you whom liked it , are seeking some impossible goal , some Graal .

No one sane here expects Shakespeare , nor Stephen King , nor maybe even Twilight , or the trashiest Romance Novels out there . We all know what ALL of those games here are , Adult games , namely mostly porn stuff , so that already massively lower the ceiling of expectations for writing .

This however does not change the fact or rather notion , that there are still levels of quality within those games and the genre , and still create some minimum expectations . And that the same applies to more than the writing , aspects like art , content , consistency of updates , pacing , graphics , animations etc etc .
And there is such a thing as at least making sense within your own universe , and not throwing everything away randomly

If this here meets your standard , fine , have fun ... but stop pretending that there aren't better titles around here meeting those already lower standards . Stop pretending to yourselves and others , that everything nitpicked is some unwarranted and unreasonable scrutiny .
 
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Just let the creator create their work, then like about it what you like about it, dislike what you dislike. Plus we're all freeplay consumers. If you want a say in the game get a Patreon, idk about this dev specifically but some do take polls about what people who actually support their work want to see.

Of course, you're free not to like it. But why are you trying so hard to convince other people not to like it? When I don't like a creative product, I just don't spend any time on it. If you wanna give up on the game, feel free. But why try to undermine something that other people enjoy?
What you don‘t seem to understand is that a lot of us in here were Patrons in the past until BD started scamming ppl when he was going radio silent for 2 years while still taking our money. What am I still here for? Tbh I’m only here to take a dump on this shitshow that was once a great game and warn ppl about one of the biggest scammers in AVN history besides ICSTOR.
 

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I feel that some people just read whatever they want from people's posts , to feed their own delusions or agenda . For starters stop pretending that the people criticizing the game , however it stings for you whom liked it , are seeking some impossible goal , some Graal .

No one sane here expects Shakespeare , nor Stephen King , nor maybe even Twilight , or the trashiest Romance Novels out there . We all know what ALL of those games here are , Adult games , namely mostly porn stuff , so that already massively lower the ceiling of expectations for writing .

This however does not change the fact or rather notion , that there are still levels of quality within those games and the genre , and still create some minimum expectations . And that the same applies to more than the writing , aspects like art , content , consistency of updates , pacing , graphics , animations etc etc .
And there is such a thing as at least making sense within your own universe , and not throwing everything away randomly

If this here meets your standard , fine , have fun ... but stop pretending that there aren't better titles around here meeting those already lower standards . Stop pretending to yourselves and others , that everything nitpicked is some unwarranted and unreasonable scrutiny .
Exactly im not expecting a flawless story im expecting one that makes sense that has some consistency.
 

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Dev Report #35 (March 24th, 2024)

Yo!

I made a book-sized report last week, this one isn't short but it's smaller.


As I mentioned in the last report, I will not be sharing any release dates until things are compiled and ready to be uploaded.
My current plan is to finish this scene I've been working on for Episode 14 before making any final decisions for the ending of Episode 13 where I'll then re-evaluate how I feel about it and make any changes I deem necessary before uploading it for all of you to play.

The update will be available to all tiers upon release, no tier timings.
It's shaping up to be 800+ renders and 20+ animations. (400 renders from the end of Episode 13, and 400 renders from the start of Episode 14.)
I do not plan on including all of Episode 14 in the upcoming update but Episode 14 will be the last update of Chapter 1 of Season 2. Meaning Episode 14 will include all of Days 37 and 38.
The plan is for Episode 14 to be around 900-1000 renders long so I'd say it's somewhere between 40%-50% complete.

It has been a very productive week, I was able to make 124 new renders and 3 new animations and another 70 renders for the redo. I added Armani, Aubrey, and Azel to the character sheets channel on discord, I made a lot of progress on finishing the basement and other rooms in the main home (Won't be seen in the upcoming update but they will be needed for the one following it), and I've almost finished writing for all of the scenes in Chapter 2.
(And just a quick heads up that chapter 2 will be quite a bit shorter than chapter 1 was in terms of render length but Chapter 2 will take us from Day 39 to Day 52. As mentioned before, there will be little time skips where the MC focuses on training so these days won't be giga-packed like Day 32 was.)

So, I'm afraid there's still nothing concrete to share right now, I should finish this scene for Episode 14 this week and I hope that gives me the ability to speak with a little more certainty in the next report.
And as far as pausing pledges go, I'm currently unsure if I will be this month or not. I want to, but after pausing 5 of the last 6 months I'm getting to a point where I'm not comfortably able to. Every month that was paused I continued to work, I was mainly pausing because I set goals that I was unable to meet.
In the event that I do unpause, everything that will be released in April will be made available to all former patrons via the discord so there is no pressure to have to keep your pledge active. You won't miss any posts as long as you join the discord by linking your discord to your patreon or subscribestar account.

That's all I have to share for now, I'm going to go get back to work!
Once again thank you all for your patience and understanding. I truly appreciate it. Have a wonderful week and I'll talk to all of you soon!
 

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Dev Report #35 (March 24th, 2024)

Yo!

I made a book-sized report last week, this one isn't short but it's smaller.


As I mentioned in the last report, I will not be sharing any release dates until things are compiled and ready to be uploaded.
My current plan is to finish this scene I've been working on for Episode 14 before making any final decisions for the ending of Episode 13 where I'll then re-evaluate how I feel about it and make any changes I deem necessary before uploading it for all of you to play.

The update will be available to all tiers upon release, no tier timings.
It's shaping up to be 800+ renders and 20+ animations. (400 renders from the end of Episode 13, and 400 renders from the start of Episode 14.)
I do not plan on including all of Episode 14 in the upcoming update but Episode 14 will be the last update of Chapter 1 of Season 2. Meaning Episode 14 will include all of Days 37 and 38.
The plan is for Episode 14 to be around 900-1000 renders long so I'd say it's somewhere between 40%-50% complete.

It has been a very productive week, I was able to make 124 new renders and 3 new animations and another 70 renders for the redo. I added Armani, Aubrey, and Azel to the character sheets channel on discord, I made a lot of progress on finishing the basement and other rooms in the main home (Won't be seen in the upcoming update but they will be needed for the one following it), and I've almost finished writing for all of the scenes in Chapter 2.
(And just a quick heads up that chapter 2 will be quite a bit shorter than chapter 1 was in terms of render length but Chapter 2 will take us from Day 39 to Day 52. As mentioned before, there will be little time skips where the MC focuses on training so these days won't be giga-packed like Day 32 was.)

So, I'm afraid there's still nothing concrete to share right now, I should finish this scene for Episode 14 this week and I hope that gives me the ability to speak with a little more certainty in the next report.
And as far as pausing pledges go, I'm currently unsure if I will be this month or not. I want to, but after pausing 5 of the last 6 months I'm getting to a point where I'm not comfortably able to. Every month that was paused I continued to work, I was mainly pausing because I set goals that I was unable to meet.
In the event that I do unpause, everything that will be released in April will be made available to all former patrons via the discord so there is no pressure to have to keep your pledge active. You won't miss any posts as long as you join the discord by linking your discord to your patreon or subscribestar account.

That's all I have to share for now, I'm going to go get back to work!
Once again thank you all for your patience and understanding. I truly appreciate it. Have a wonderful week and I'll talk to all of you soon!
so we're still on 8?/52 and nothing gonna change anytime soon? :ROFLMAO:
 

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I didn't say that you said there "weren't any other feelsgood games". You said "few". I countered that there were "quite a few". Not sure how that has anything at all with your porn games and marriage soliloquy that followed. Very few people who have been part of this site for any decent length of time play only one or two games. They/we all play multiple games, and we all know that playing multiple games helps occupy your time between releases. This is not new information that you are sharing.

Further, you also seem to be of the opinion that there are people posting on this thread who don't like the game. No. Everyone in this thread likes WVM to some degree. Some like it less now than they did years ago when it was starting out and had promise, but they continue to come here hoping to see improvement. The complaints you see aren't because people don't like the game. It's because they don't like what the dev is doing to the game.

Yes, the creator has creative control, that's kind of an obvious statement, but we'll come back to this in a moment when I address your comments about paralel storylines. I want to touch on the "we'll get back to basketball and the house soon enough" statement first because you mention storylines in multiple places. As for the basketball, how can we get back to something that we have barely even started? If the story so far is any indication, basketball will be a very small part of this basketball story. As for getting back to the house...How long before we move again?

Now, for your final statement... "you say there isn't any story, but that's just not true. There are lots of storylines developing in paralel."
I could say the same thing about an encyclopedia, but it's not something most people want to sit down and read straight through. Braindrop is a game developer with, by your own admission, multiple storylines. Paramount global is a mass media conglomerate that owns multiple TV shows. However, Paramount was wise enough not to turn 7th Heaven, The King of Queens, CSI, 90210, NCIS, Everybody Hates Chris, NUMB3RS, Gossip Girl, Hawaii 5-0, The Vampire Diaries, and Rules of Engagement all into one huge multi-storylined show.

If BD had stuck to one storyline, he could have finished WMV by now and already be on his second game, Hearts for Hope, or Crazy Rich Yacht Women. Instead, he includes every random storyline that pops into his head and ends up writing himself into a corner and then skips ahead promising to do a rework later. He did that first with Chapter 1, and he just did it again when he left the latest part unfinished and jumped ahead to 14 because he doesn't know how to finish 13.

We don't complain because we want creative control over the story. We complain because BD lets his creativity push the story out of control to the point that even he doesn't know how to bring it back. In all honesty those who complain the most are some of the ones that care the most. We are the ones that have been playing this the longest and don't want to see him end up burnt out and the game abandoned.

I was with BD at the begining. I was a supporter on Patreon. I got tired of watching him struggle with himself. I stopped supporting him financially(Couldn't afford it, I battled cancer and won), but I still play the game and I want to see him succeed. I'd hate to see WVM abandoned. I began commenting on here. At one point I was told. "If you don't like it make your own game." So, as a graduate of the Art Institute of Dallas and also having a BA in English Lit from UNT, I decided to do just that.

I know how hard it is to be a dev, and I worry that BD is going to burn out if he doesn't change something. Other games have been completed in the time it has taken hin to do 2 incomplete chapters. You can sit on a ray of sunshine and look only on the brightside through your rose collored glasses rimmed with silver linings, but those of us who have been following him for 5 years are worried how long this will survive if something doesn't change.
Well, I just don't think we're going to agree. Your examples of multiple storylines seems intentionally obtuse. Becoming part of a charity as a celebrity basketballer isn't a big stretch. The Riker storyline was a bit wild, but it was still a good crisis moment that the group and the MC had to overcome. Not every storyline within a series has the same significance. There are overarching stories and individual character development or relationship developments. An immersive world is like that because that's how the real world works. Everyone's the protagonist of their own stories and it's how all those stories overlap that give depth to the fictional world.

I also think you're making a lot of assumptions about the story that come out of left field. I don't think it's fair to say there hasn't been any basketball. At first it was mostly training and getting to know the team. And there were a lot of problems with the team. Lots of practice, and gradually solving all those problems. Then the match against Jax' team. The story is definitely there. The MC himself also said relatively recently that he wants to focus on basketball more. So it's safe to assume that the story will shift back to that.

The assumption that they'll move again is pretty unwaranted. It's a big safe house with plenty of room. That's the thing about side-characters. They don't all move in and become major LIs. So it's good padding that creates interesting side-stories that don't gravitate towards the center.

So I think on the creative end, we fundamentally disagree. I've been writing stories for decades and have a vivid imagination. I'm a software engineer but don't make VNs. But I like wild creativity. The story is still consistent enough and stays within its general theme.

You can worry about how long it will take him to finish, or whether he will abandon it or not. Those are always legitimate concerns, but ultimately boil down to the passion the creator has for his work. I would consider it unfortunate, but I would still appreciate what he has created so far.

I just think people get too hot-headed. I think it's better to be supportive and kind, rather than adding stress and criticism and endless suggestions on what he should do with the story. Especially if you want him to keep creating it. It's counter-productive to make him feel like crap about what he's made. When a painter is creating a painting you don't complain that it doesn't look good yet before he's finished. Because you don't know what they envision as the final product. A vision which hasn't even entirely crystalized.

Congratulations on beating the big C. Like I said, nothing personal we just have different beliefs on the creative process. Creating something is a journey. And as someone who has tried his hand at it, you should know it's easier to critique than to create. You shouldn't try to limit or dictate someone else's art (even if it's an adult VN).
 
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