VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B3] [Braindrop]

[5gzucus]

Fantastic update, so good for being Dev's first game...just one thing: can we have redhead Liz back? She was so good, maybe making it selectable, like she asks you if you prefer redhead or blonde. I think that would be cool. Anyway keep on with the great work

 

[jamdan]

I assume the threesome with Shauna and gf would've been dping her from both ends after she feels okay using it.

Maybe, although Jamie would also need to be comfortable doing that. She just now started having sex with MC, so being banged by 2 dicks will be quite a large step for her whether thats regular DP (anal/vag) or blowjob + anal or vag. I assume it'll happen eventually, but it'll probably be a bit more down the road.


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I wonder if/when the girls find out that MC is going around impregnating women will happen. I don't imagine that Jamie/Shauna will be ok with that, they may be fine with him sleeping with girls they approve of but that doesn't mean he can be making babies with them.

 

[Ramen-]

I wonder if/when the girls find out that MC is going around impregnating women will happen. I don't imagine that Jamie/Shauna will be ok with that, they may be fine with him sleeping with girls they approve of but that doesn't mean he can be making babies with them.

Jamie said she wants him to be happy and make other women happy, she only wants to have a say if he keeps them around for longer. This doesn't apply to the women he impregnates, till now they come from different cities as well. I think she might be surprised at first and then say something like "this is so kind of you".
The only problem I can see here is that you started doing it before she said it's okay to fuck other women.

 

[SlimeDroid]

Maybe, although Jamie would also need to be comfortable doing that. She just now started having sex with MC, so being banged by 2 dicks will be quite a large step for her whether thats regular DP (anal/vag) or blowjob + anal or vag. I assume it'll happen eventually, but it'll probably be a bit more down the road.

Didn't both girls learn deepthroating monster cocks in 1-2 days? That was a major leap to make when gf could only take the tip before.

 

[scrappy]

I made a gallery mod for this game here

 

[Triple OG]

Great Update. Good to see Coach Harper has some knowledge of the game.

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[somebodynobody]

View attachment 442263
She still has long hair
Also I've decided to keep it black. (Lighting makes it appear pretty grey but it will be darker in actual scenes.)

This picture says. "You know who's gonna get some MC dick next? This gal."
Oh yeah, in the banner to the game, have we met second from right girl yet? Can't place her.

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[Deckard81]

Great update and great game. That restaurant is like my heaven, Rainn, Bailey and Penny are all perfect, here's hoping for more content with them in the next update.

 

[Ramen-]

So I have now played the cheating route with Shawna and the milfs, and wow ball sacks are quite a disgusting body part.

Anyway, I found my main route, which is basically only Jamie + the Milfs till she allows more action. I really hope that Keyanas wife is ebony as well. Honestly 8.8/10 game.

 

[Crosaith.]

Enjoyed the update.

Hoping there will be a higher % of basketball content in future updates though.

Speaking of basketball, when will the first game be? Will wins and losses be set or will choices affect them? Was looking through a bunch of posts on Patreon, couldn't find any answers.

 

[Braindrop]

Enjoyed the update.

Hoping there will be a higher % of basketball content in future updates though.

Speaking of basketball, when will the first game be? Will wins and losses be set or will choices affect them? Was looking through a bunch of posts on Patreon, couldn't find any answers.

1. There will be more going forward. Wanted to focus on the girls as I introduced many but day 4 will have a higher %.

2. There will be two, maybe three (preseason) games. These will be spaced out inbetween days. First one is real soon. (For obvious reasons I can't exactly copy how a normal season's structure goes.) The way it's currently planned is to do around 12-15 regular season games. Then a 5 game playoff stint (If you make the playoffs that is )

3. Choices before the game and during the game will determine the outcome.

I'd like to hear some things basketball related or not that you'd like to see in the game.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

I'd like to hear some things basketball related or not that you'd like to see in the game.

More Bailey.

Aside from that, exploring the MC's sleepwalking / hallucinations, obviously the "real" mom / sister thing, possibly some criminal elements about sports gambling if you wanted to go that route, and the Charles "intrigue" thing.

Oh, and more Bailey.

 

[Karl Franz 77]

Hi, i have this bug:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 264, in script
python:
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "C:\Users\Langa\OneDrive\Documentos\TR0N\WVM-Day1-3-1.0-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 313, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "C:\Users\Langa\OneDrive\Documentos\TR0N\WVM-Day1-3-1.0-pc\renpy\main.py", line 525, in main
run(restart)
File "C:\Users\Langa\OneDrive\Documentos\TR0N\WVM-Day1-3-1.0-pc\renpy\main.py", line 139, in run
renpy.execution.run_context(True)
File "C:\Users\Langa\OneDrive\Documentos\TR0N\WVM-Day1-3-1.0-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 892, in run_context
context.run()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 264, in script
python:
File "C:\Users\Langa\OneDrive\Documentos\TR0N\WVM-Day1-3-1.0-pc\renpy\script.py", line 886, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.2.2.491

Mon Oct 28 15:38:09 2019

 

[The Krypt Angel]

The B-ball stuff you can do whatever the hell you want with as I don't really care about it lol. Other than that tho definitely more Bailey, you also need to make it RAINN very soon oh and I know I said I could live with it either way but since all you did was like my post about it instead of giving any answer I'd love for Liz to go back to being a redhead

 

[Ramen-]

I'd like to hear some things basketball related or not that you'd like to see in the game.

For the basketball stuff I think one of the final opponent teams should be called the "town name" gooses, who are super arrogant and aggressive, wear white and orange jerseys and whenever the team scores points their crowd cheers "the goose is loose, the goose is loose" and at the half time show the team mascots start a fight Duck vs. Goose.

Non basketball wise I would like more ebony girls in general and a buff ebony girl in particular.

 

[Braindrop]

Hi, i have this bug:

Did you extract the game correctly? It seems you might be missing the script.

The B-ball stuff you can do whatever the hell you want with as I don't really care about it lol. Other than that tho definitely more Bailey, you also need to make it RAINN very soon oh and I know I said I could live with it either way but since all you did was like my post about it instead of giving any answer I'd love for Liz to go back to being a redhead

Sorry for not answering. Redhead Liz has not seen her last day.

For the basketball stuff I think one of the final opponent teams should be called the "town name" gooses, who are super arrogant and aggressive, wear white and orange jerseys and whenever the team scores points their crowd cheers "the goose is loose, the goose is loose" and at the half time show the team mascots start a fight Duck vs. Goose.

Non basketball wise I would like more ebony girls in general and a buff ebony girl in particular.

Hmmm, long winded duck joke. So if I read this right you're saying to remove all ebonies?

 

[ZTex]

I'd like to hear some things basketball related or not that you'd like to see in the game.

Do you mean gameplay elements or visual stuff ?

The easiest basketball thing you could do that has an impact is study tapes.

If you don't mean gameplay stuff then a'rousing half-time "speech" if you catch my drift (Could be from Harp/Nat/Liz/Your Teammates Ex/Bailey) ....hell we could a unique one per game.

 

[Ramen-]

Hmmm, long winded duck joke. So if I read this right you're saying to remove all ebonies?

Wasn't meant as a joke, at some point MC needs teams to play against and I think geese are animals who would immediately characterize a team and mascot fights are always great.

 

[Archon_01]

I tried the game the other day with 0 expectations (didn't read thread comments either) and man, am I glad I did! This was a very enjoyable time, wholesome + fapping, what's not to like?

I planned on doing a Jaime run at the start, but scrapped the idea the moment Coach showed up. Fuck, I wanna see the face she gives the MC when she realizes he's 0% interested in Natalie and only wants her even after Harp all but shoves Natalie onto him. Seriously, 95% of the girls are great, but I'll die a happy man if we get a solo run for girls so I can happily have my Coach only run. She's just got that special something for me Bailey is great and Stacy, too, but fuck it, Coach Harper is where is at!

BTW, I did think it was a bit weird that Jamie and MC held off on doing anything sexual in the relationship for 2 months and then it quickly went into an open relationship with women lol I get it's a porn game, but it felt kinda off in terms of consistency.

 

[Crosaith.]

1. There will be more going forward. Wanted to focus on the girls as I introduced many but day 4 will have a higher %.

2. There will be two, maybe three (preseason) games. These will be spaced out inbetween days. First one is real soon. (For obvious reasons I can't exactly copy how a normal season's structure goes.) The way it's currently planned is to do around 12-15 regular season games. Then a 5 game playoff stint (If you make the playoffs that is )

3. Choices before the game and during the game will determine the outcome.

I'd like to hear some things basketball related or not that you'd like to see in the game.

2. That sounds really awesome and like a lot of work. Good on ya man!

Hmm.. Okay, I got some idea's. Sorry if I go on too long or they're weird lol. Should be zzzzing.

Reporter's and Sports shows(Like TNT/Undisputed/First Take etc). They might hype the MC up, talk shit, try to create drama etc.

I'd prefer not to have stat grind. Maybe have some events where the MC can improve his craft or get distracted(Parties, girls, media attention, being lazy etc)?

MC's shown to be good at shooting, but what's his play style like? Team ball or ISO? Is he good at playing off ball? Is he able to exploit the rules to his advantage? Good attacking the rim/defending/rebounding/passing/dribbling/drawing fouls etc? If it was my choice, the MC would be a taller/less fragile Steph Curry haha.. Same skill set, except that his height would allow him to defend better, shoot over opponents easier and dunk. Scaaaary...

If the MC chooses to focus on drawing fouls or exploiting rules will fans/players/media look down on him?

I doubt you'd do this, but please don't use anime logic with the opposing teams. No weird powers or gimmicks.

Zzzzzz.......

I should get to bed. If anything else pops into mind I'll post another one.