Just started reading this the other day, I'm a bit of the way into Nao's route (meeting her reading by the pool during her club) and the translation quality just fell off a cliff. It's a couple scenes later now and it hasn't improved, I was wondering if it was just this route, just a rough couple of chapters, or if the majority of the translation is like this. If so, I might have to drop it, or at least put it on hold, because this is just super rough, especially compared to how excellent the translation was up until this point.