Hello.
I've finally been able to make it work by myself before it's online so I'm happy. And I've learned many things while looking at the image folder that I still don't know how to found them (there are several levels to train your throat but how do know your level?).
While I'm at it, is it possible to make it work on an external hard drive? It could be more discreet that way for me.
Farm :
Beast farm :
More variety of images and more possibilities so it's good
Normal farm :
Grandpa : it's not for me but you choose it well ; it seems there's a bug here : when you Go look for him, the relation points doesn't change
Brian : more or less the same Brian so it's good ; the pup play is really exhaustive for those that like it ; the night outdoor scene is cute for someone like Brian
The surprise sex with Brian when you sleep at the farm should only happen if you have encountered Brian before (if not, the scene seems strange : you're fucking with someone you know though you've never met him before)
The normal ending is better than the beast ending
Point Erectus :
Bill : the scenes are very good ; I wouldn't mind a scene with Bill and Adam together
Forbidden Forrest : it's a really good work to upgrade the bestiary ; though the difficulty to find the way out can be annoying after more than a day (1 daytime and 1 night)
Drunk state :
It's amusing what you thought for it though loosing all your money can be problematic and there's a lack of memories of what happens ; so the best thing with this is the not from this world content (you keep your money and you have some memories)
Jobs :
Dildo tester : I wasn't expecting it to be public (I thought he would do it at home, school, park, etc and be surprised by someone)
You've deleted the jobs that where once on the smartphone. Is it intended or you just forgot? Because we can't sell the photos anymore too
School library:
- removed girl from library and toilet, you can now wank safely without a threat of any vagina pics
Since you've deleted the only bi content from the game, you should do the same with the mother
The listing of the phone contacts is really helpful
The ending with Hunter was really good. I don't know what ending I prefer anymore
The prison bitch ending was annoying to reach : first, the loss of days is still there ; then, when you go to jail, you have between 4 to 11 sentences ; it takes too much time
While I'm at it, when you go to the shower in jail, it doesn't make you clean (you stay with the yellow or red message)
High Tai :
The stash is really expensive but it's more logical what you've done ; plus the scenes for the renovation are pleasant
The whoring yourself is really varied so it isn't repetitive (the virgin one is really cute)
The brothel too is expensive ; the 5 employees should have names because I feel like we hired only one person or some ghosts
The time for the renovation is long (7 and later 5) but it seems correct
The neighbours are sympathetic though I'm missing the sex scene with Ron on the balcony
When you take a shower at your stash, you don't use bodywash anymore
The kidnapping :
The bad ending : I don't understand the reason behind it (Marcus got kidnapped and became a slave because officer Gorski was interupted by his chief though Marcus was already willing to do it)
The good ending : Thomas become more honest with his feelings though he stays really rough
Viktor's discussion seems also unreal for me (didn't he knew someone was moving in and have someone look into it, even at the police station ; I don't understand why he lacked informations with all his connections)
Though with Marcus family, the school, all his friends, the chief of officer Gorski, the good ending only happens if you give the drugs to Thomas (I could understand if it increased the chances but not that's the only chance)
Sauna : good addition (Marcus could faint and doctor Mathew could intervene)
Brother :
Eric could come alone too
The night attack when he is drunk, we should find him in Marcus bed when he wakes up, cuddling like when Marcus sleep in his brother's bed
The ending wasn't difficult to reach and it was well brought
On this subject, I have the habit to do father and brother together since there are many scenes in common but does it even matter now that we have separate endings?
If brother send a pic before a game (cf files) and we don't meet the correct relationship and corruption, nothing happens and it's sad because the teasing makes it like it will happen
Problems still present :
The days are still lost when encountering Jeff, going to jail, going at mister McEvoy for his surprise + 2 new : when Brian tranform into a werewolf and when you go to sleep at tour stash after 0:00
The nipple rings still not there
The travel cost when you're at the farm is still present (cf files)
There's a scene when we work as shop assistant when it's said easy money but we don't receive anything (cf files)
The park shouldn't appear on the map at night since it's closed
Some errors (cf files) :
The broken WC is completely broken, there are times when the money becomes Number Nan
Hunter's ending present after the first encounter
One of Viktor's scene
Hope it helps. Good work.